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小编为大家提供一些常用的谚语集锦，大家可以收藏起来，适时适当地引用。
1. A bosom friend afar brings a distant land near.
海内存知己，天涯若比邻。
2. A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit.
吃一堑，长一智。
3. East or west, home is best.
东好西好，还是家里最好。
4. Constant dropping wears the stone.
滴水穿石。
5. Misfortunes never come alone/single.
祸不单行。
6. It’s never too late to mend.
过而能改，善莫大焉;亡羊补牢，犹 未晚也。
7. Nothing great was ever achieved without enthusiasm.
无热情成就不了伟业。
8. Actions speak louder than words.
行动比语言更响亮。
9. From small beginning come great things.
伟大始于渺小。
10. One today is worth two tomorrows.
一个今天胜似两个明天。
11. The tongue is boneless but it breaks bones.
舌无骨却能折断骨。
12. All time is no time when it is past.
机不可失，时不再来。
13. Clumsy birds have to start flying early.
笨鸟先飞。
14. Difficult the first time, easy the second.
一回生，二回熟。
15. Man proposes, God disposes.
谋事在人，成事在天。
托福写作：如何避免写出假的thesis statement
1.这是不是一句grammatically-complete的句子?
2.它是否arguable(可以被议论的)?
3.它是否supportable(可以被支持的)?
4.它是否表达了一个main idea?
5.它是否是个疑问句?
来看一下例子：我的观点是California was the best trip ever. 那么这句话是否是个合格的thesis statement呢?通过问自己这5个问题我们就可以判断出来。
1.这是不是一句grammatically-complete的句子?
是的。这句话有主语和谓语。
2.它是否arguable(可以被议论的)?
是的。很明显，我是通过对比了其他地方的旅行经历才得出了加州是最棒的这一观点。
3.它是否supportable(可以被支持的)?
是的。我会用三个分论点来支持我的观点。1)learning how to surf at Malibu; 2) going sightseeing; 3) meeting Vincent.
4.它是否表达了一个main idea?
是的。我只有一个main idea：having a fantastic time in California.
5.它是否是个问句?
不是问句。
thesis statement永远不可以是一个问句。
所以，基于这五个问题的分析，我们可以确定California was the best trip ever.这句话是一个合格的thesis statement。
在了解了什么是thesis statement的基础上，来看一下什么是假的thesis statement。
a statement of fact 事实的陈述
a.Alaska is a big state.
这是一个不能够被讨论的事实，是一个真理。
b.Californian red wine is the best in the world.
这句话可以作为thesis statement因为是完整的一句话，能够被议论，被支持，表达了一个主要观点，并且不是疑问句。
a question
a. Is global warming a problem?
这里又要强调一遍thesis statement永远不可以是一个问句。
b. Global warming threatens the future of the planet.
这句话可以作为thesis statement因为是完整的一句话，能够被议论，被支持，表达了一个主要观点，并且不是疑问句。
a sentence fragment
a. Paris: the most beautiful cityin Europe.
这句话不是完整的句子。缺少“is”。
b. Without a doubt, the TOEFL iBTis a true measure of your potential.
这句话可以作为thesis statement因为是完整的一句话，能够被议论，被支持，表达了一个主要观点，并且不是疑问句。
simple announce the topic
a. In this essay, I will talkabout the problem of teenagers drinking and driving in my country, Argentina.
这句话只是告诉读者将要写的内容(topic)，而没有出现观点。
b. Personally, I think thatteenagers must finish high school before they can get a driver’s license.
这句话可以作为thesis statement因为是完整的一句话，能够被议论，被支持，表达了一个主要观点，并且不是疑问句。
丨练习：判断真假thesis statement
everyone should learn a foreign language.
How difficult is it to get a perfect score on the TOEFL iBT?
The CEO told us that the company had no other choice but to lay off five thousand employees.
In this essay, I’m going totalk about dogs and cats, and other domestic animals.
Iwona is ecstatic. Her grades are so good she got into Harvard and Yale. Now she must choose which one she will attend.
Last night, I went to an Italian restaurant and had lasagna.
The TOEFL iBT consists of four sections: reading, listening, speaking, and writing.
There are many English language proficiency tests; however, TOEFL is the test you must take if you are serious about studying at an English-speaking college or university.
Drinking a bottle of red wine every day will make you smarter.
Why is the price of gasoline going up?
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托福作文花式拿高分
花式“1”——模板花
官方或者传言并没有在这个北美考试中拒绝模板写法，那么我们就要合理有效地利用这个机会给自己创造高分。有了模板另一个问题就会随之而来，如果千篇 一律怎么办?
去模板化是唯一方法!我们举例说明”Oncontemporary society，theleadership serves as a catalyst for our future success.” 这本身是一个比较模板化的句子，如果最高级别是5级，这个句子我们也就可以拿到3级，这种句子在市面比较泛滥。那么需要我们去模板化提升句子档次，随便改一下虽然做不是最好，但是可以稍微掩人耳目，对于着急考试的孩子们是一个技巧性方法 “Withthe advent of the technologically advanced society, the leadership which servesas a catalyst for our future success has become an inevitable demand of timesfor several decades.”变化的句子扩充了with，而且让leadership充当了先行词将原有短句转化成为一个定语从句显得丰满。
花式“2”——字数花
北美考试高分作文对于字数要求还是比较高的，不要被考卷上独立写作300字以上的要求蒙蔽，300多字绝对不足以让你拿到25分甚至23分你可能都拿不到。因此，平时我对学生的要求30分钟必须敲出400+的字数，写不出来就再写、不停写，必须达到这个字数要求，这是一个保住22分的基准线。综合写作按照要求即可，180-225字的范围要求写出210-220字，写多了也是废话。一般来说综合写作的模板占据了一定篇幅，而且综合写作时间短，不要超字数，写清楚阅读与听力的对应点即可，满足以上要求就有高分。
花式“3”——段落花
托福考试的段落还是比较讲究格局性，字数均衡的段落是比较容易得高分的。尽量不要出现首末段字数过短，中间段字数过高的问题。这也是留学以后遇到美国导师跟我提起过的一个问题，写正式文章也不要出现这种巨大的字数差异，在他们看来这是很奇怪的表达方式。所以400+的字数分配到5段式的独立写作中首末段比中间段少一点点就好。此外，让步段(整体第四段)最好抽出时间写，如果考试时候实在没有时间就pass掉吧。
花式“4”——素材花
400+的独立写作对于大多数同学是无法完成的，为什么?因为思考写什么就要占据不少时间。那么你为什么要占据那么多时间去思考写什么?为什么不在进考场前想明白要写什么?你会问我怎么想，那么我告诉你：首先，TPO49道独立写作请分类，在考前请把每个类型的文章思路整理明白，准备3个分论点。其次，请把你想出的论点再次归类，哪些问题可以归总到一个内容里面。进入考场前你的脑子里面是几个类型的论点，不是49篇文章，这样的复习会让你有效的在1分钟内搞定要写的论点是什么。挤时间，400+绝对不是梦!
花式“5”——用词、句型花
前面说的再好也是架子，用词和句型是硬道理。我想问问你的心里是否明白这些句子该怎么准确写出——定语从句(关系代词、关系副词)、名词性从句(主从、表从…)、状语从句(条件、地点、结果、目的…)、虚拟语气、被动语态、倒装句、强调句、非谓语…之类之类一大堆你都会写吗?不会?那高分与你无缘。我是个强迫症患者，我的每一篇文章都会精修，十几遍是少的，修的是什么?句型!每个段落要力求使用的每个句型都不一样，每个词不重复出现两遍以上。在一个段落中做到这一点你与高分就更进一步。
【备考资料】托福写作10个高分经典句式汇总例句分享
一、the + est +名词+ (that) +主词+ have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
the most +形容词+名词+ (that) +主词+ have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
例句1：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
例句2：Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
二、Nothing is + er than to + V
Nothing is + more +形容词+ than to + V
例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.
没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、cannot emphasize the importance of too much.
(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)
例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、There is no denying that + S + V ...(不可否认的...)
例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that +句子(全世界都知道...)
例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that +句子(毫无疑问的...)
例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、An advantage of is that +句子(...的优点是...)
例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won‘t create (produce) any pollution.
使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、The reason why +句子 is that +句子(...的原因是...)
例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.
The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.
我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
九、So +形容词+ be +主词+ that +句子(如此...以致于...)
例句：So precious is time that we can‘t afford to waste it.
时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。
十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V(虽然...)
例句：Rich as this country is, the qualities of peoples' living are by no means satisfactory.
by no means = in no way = on no account一点也不.
虽然这个国家很富有，但国民的生活质量却一点都不令人满意。
托福考试作文范例：企业的目标是赚取利润
托福考试作文题目：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
托福考试作文参考：
任何企业团体作为社会的组成部分，有责任考虑到整个社会的利益，所以不能为所欲为，强调法制的必要性。
托福考试作文范文：
Nowadays, merchants tend to strive for remaining in existence by all means due to the extensive competition and burdensome pressures. However, I am always amazed when I hear that it is necessary for businessman to do anything possible to make a profit. It may be as highly laudable and exemplary a thing as it is held to be by those who are addicted to money.
Apparently, I strongly object to it due to various factors that weigh heavily against the notion. The foremost reason is that merchants would be rewarded by nothing but distrust and even hatred from the customers if they hardly care about anything but money. It is widely known that nothing can be compared with the good reputation of a company, which attracts more upright and loyal customers. Suppose we are facing the dilemma of which brand of shampoo to purchase. It is of no surprise if you decide to take the one produced by P&G or other reputable large companies. As a result, what assures the buyers most is the credit of the service suppliers?
Another subtle explanation for my point of view rests on the fact that various appalling results would in some cases, be caused by the immoral and even illegal businesses. It is decent to make profits and receive the repayment of diligent work and continuous efforts. Nevertheless, producing unqualified or even deleterious commodities, which possibly lead to detriments of people's health or security, is never the sensible method to operate a company. What impressed me most is the tragedy happened several months ago in some part of China. Hundreds of infants died because of the nonnutritive milk powders p
roduced by some merchantmen without ethics. Therefore, it is never too rigid to denounce the immoral and irresponsible behavior. The third point I would like to mention is that the merchants themselves would not be reassured to enjoy the property acquired in improper ways.
In most cases, it is the essential satisfaction of benefiting the public, rather than the material items, which inspires people profoundly. What a pleasant thing it would be to receive repayment of your diligent work and continuous efforts! On the contrary, few people would go into rapture even if they possess a mass of wealth earned through indecent ways. Thus, only by obeying commercial disciplines could a businessman obtain supreme success and maximum pleasure.
Taking into all the reasons above into account, it is barely too arbitrary to conclude that only by descent and good Intentioned business activities could a company achieve respectable and decent success
托福考试作文范例：偏好手工还是机器制作
托福考试作文题目：
Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer——items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.
托福考试作文参考分析：
这道题选择比较自由，无论选哪一种都行，只要列出几个好的理由(注意：家具也有很多种，根据不同的种类，也可以有不同的偏好)。
托福考试作文范文一：
From my point of view, there are many factors affecting whether to choose an item made by hand or by machine. The main factor to make a judgment is whether we use the item for our daily life or for collection and decoration purposes.
For items used in our daily life, the choices we make depend on the following factors: function, form, and price. Function is the most important thing for us. If a product is beautiful, but it is not able to perform the function, it can only be called a decoration, or a piece of garbage. For example, when we buy a TV, what we really care about first it is the quality of the picture and sound, how many stations it can receive, and whether it can be connected easily to the VCR and DVD player at home. The second factor that affects our choice of a product for daily use is its form. Is the TV too big, too small, or too ugly? Will it fit into the living room? Will it be compatible with the colors of other appliances and the furniture? The third factor we may consider is the price. Even if we are very happy with the item, there is no meaning if we cannot afford it.
So, in our daily life, there is really no difference whether our clothes or furniture are made by hand or made by machine. It just doesn't matter as long as they can perform their function. For items for collection and decoration, it is a completely different story. Ancient tools and historical artifacts have more market and educational value than modern day massively produced products, and traditional handicrafts make good tourist souvenirs and beautiful decoration for the house. Therefore, when it comes to items for collection and decoration, I would definitely choose items made by hand, because they are just so special.
In conclusion, depending on different items and different uses, I will make different choices.
托福考试作文范文二：
What do I consider the most important room in the house? Why is this room more important to me than any other rooms? As the questions pops up before me, so do the images of the various rooms in my house. I think that I consider the dining room to be the most important room of the house.
First of all, this is the room where all the members of the family sit down together, at least for dinner. This brings closeness among the various members of the family. It also gives each of the members an opportunity to relate his/her experiences during the day and share those of others. It is here where tensions die down when mother cracks a joke or dad relates a humorous incident of his job.
Secondly, this is where we feed and nourish ourselves. It serves as a point where you stop, even for a minute (like morning rush hours), and grab your bread and milk. The dining room serves as a showroom of the kitchen bringing the not-so-good looking vegetables appear mouthwatering. This is where you take your food normally.
Thirdly it is the room to which you turn too when a large number of relatives arrive. Set up some more chairs and you are ready to take care of all of them. Can you do this in the bedroom or the bedroom? Some will suggest outdoors as an alternative but do all people have the luxury of a lawn? And what if it's raining? Turn to the dining room!
In concluding, I would like to say that the dining room seems to be the most important of all rooms in the house. It is a nourishment point, an expansion unit and a family hub, all combined into one. I consider it as the server of the modern home, networking all aspects into one entit
15个GRE高分句式分享 积累考G词汇赶紧来看
15个GRE高分句式和实用词汇汇总分享
1. The waterproof material is suitable for the aerial used near the waterfall.
这种耐水材料适合用在瀑布附近的天线。
2. I paced in the peaceful spacecraft.
我在宁静的宇宙飞船里踱步。
3. The customers are accustomed to the disgusting custom.
顾客们习惯了令人讨厌的风俗。
4. The bold folk fold up the gold and hold it in hand.
大胆的人们将黄金折叠起来拿在手里。
5. She swears to wear the pearls that appear to be pears.
她发誓要戴那些看起来像梨子的珍珠。
6. I nearly fear to tear the tearful girl's test paper.
我几乎害怕撕那个泪流满面的女孩的试卷。
7. I learn that learned earnest men earn much by learning.
我得知有学问而认真的人靠学问挣很多钱。
8. Early I searched through the earth for earthenware so as to research in earthquake.
早先我在泥土中搜寻陶器以研究地震。
9. The dust in the industrial zone frustrated the industrious man.
工业区里的灰尘使勤勉的人灰心。
10. The just budget judge just justifies the adjustment of justice.
公正的预算法官只不过为司法调整辩护
11. I used to abuse the unusual usage, but now I'm not used to doing so.
我过去常滥用这个不寻常的用法，但我现在不习惯这样做。
12. The lace placed in the palace is replaced first, and displaced later.
放在皇宫的带子先被替换，后来被转移。
13. Next year the bearded bear will bear a dear baby in the rear.
明年，长胡子的熊将在后方产一头可爱的小崽。
14. Sir, your bird stirred my girlfriend's birthday party.
先生，你的鸟搅了我女友的生日聚会。
15. With my own ears I clearly heard the heart beat of the nuclear bomb.
我亲耳清楚地听到原子弹的心脏的跳动。
GRE分类词汇记忆：分析
6.2.1 分析
analyze v. 分析，分解
critique n. 批评性的分析
dissection n. 剖析，解剖
parse v. 对…做语法分析
scan v. 分析韵律;细查，细看(精读);浏览，扫描
GRE分类词汇记忆：记忆
6.4.1 记忆，回忆
etch v. 铭记;蚀刻
mnemonics n. 记忆法，记忆规则
recollection n. 记忆力;记忆中的往事 (recollect v. 回想)
reminder n. 提醒人记忆之物 (remind v. 提醒)
retentive adj. 有记忆力的
rote n. 死记硬背
recall v. 回想，回忆起;收回;n. 唤回
reminisce v. 追忆，怀旧 (reminiscence n. 回想，追忆;[复]回忆录)
retrace v. 回顾，追想
oblivious adj. 遗忘的，疏忽的
perpetuate v. 使永不忘记，使永存 (perpetuity n. 永恒，永久)
GRE分类词汇记忆：理解
6.3.2 理解，了解
comprehend v. 理解;包括
comprehensible adj. 能充分理解的
scrutable adj. 可以理解的
fathom v. 彻底明白，了解;n. 英寻(量水深用，等于1.8米)
garbled adj. 引起误解的;窜改的
implicit adj. 不言而喻的，含蓄的
intelligible adj. 可了解的，清晰的 (intelligence n. 智力，智慧)
misperceive v. 误解
penetrate v. 了解;刺穿;渗入
plumb v. 深入了解;测水深;adv. 精确地;adj. 垂直的;(n. 铅锤)
agnostic adj. 不可知论的
illegible adj. 难读的，难认的
impalpable adj. 不易理解的;无法触及的
impenetrable adj. 不可理解的;不能穿透的
obscure adj. 难理解的;不清楚的;v. 隐藏;使…模糊
obscurity n. 费解;不出名
GRE分类词汇记忆：知道
6.3.1 知道
acquaint v. 使…熟知;通知
acquaintance n. 熟知;熟人
acquainted adj. 对某事物熟悉的;对某人认识的
cognizance n. 认识，察识，知识
cognizant adj. 知道的，认识的
commonsense adj. 具有常识的
conversant adj. 熟知的，精通的 (conversance/conversancy n. 精通)
orient v. 使熟悉情况;确定方向;adj. 上升的;(n. 东方国家)
proverbially adv. 无人不知地 (proverb n. 谚语)
sentient adj. 知悉的;有知觉的
smattering n. 略知;少数
15个GRE高分句式分享
托福写作：灵活变换句式
1.变换句子的开头结构
名词做主语
介词短语作状语
副词作状语
状语从句
分词短语作状语
形容词短语作状语
主语从句
不定式短语做主语或状语
动名词做主语
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2. 使用不同的句型结构
Today’s education system paces too much emphasis on students’ desires rather than their needs. Accordingy, students are searching for the easy way out, and educators are wiingy conspiring with them. As opposed to this trend, I woud argue that students shoud study what is presented to them rather than what is desired by them. Not ony shoud educators determine the curricuum, but aso they shoud strive to insure that each individua student truy gains from his/her education, rather than just breezes through it.
托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：老外1日游去哪里?
托福写作难点话题一览
Where would you recommend a foreign visitor to go in your country for one day?
A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country. Where should this visitor go on that day? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
写作思路展开结构分析
这道题目中大家要注意一个one day，只有一天的时间，因此不能选择需要花费很多时间才能整个游览完或者看过的地方。所以你说某个城市或者大的地区就不太合适了，一天时间逛不出什么名堂，建议大家选择一些更小更集中的地方，比如博物馆或是比较小的知名景点等等。
本话题高分范文赏析
China is an enormous country with an intensely varied landscape. If a foreign visitor were coming for just one day to see our country, it would be difficult to choose just one place to spend the day.
However, I posit that the best place in China to visit would be Beijing. As the capital city, Beijing offers a diverse look at China. I would suggest that the main sites to see would be the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, and Tiananmen Square. The Forbidden City offers the visitor a look at what it was like to live in historical China.
The Forbidden City is located in the heart of Beijing, and is the biggest palace complex in the world. This particular site would be of interest to a tourist because it was once the home of many emperors. One can see the actual rooms from whence the ancient China was ruled by the emperors. When the visitor walks through the palace confines, he/she will see many examples of classic Chinese architecture. A walk through the gardens is particularly peaceful with jasmine trees abound.
The Great Wall is also a must-see in China. The people of China hold the Great Wall as having particular significance to their culture because of its long history. The wall, built of dirt, stone and brick, was used as a defense barrier against invading nomads and wandering tribes. This is the largest engineering and building project ever carried out by humans. Its historic and strategic importance is matched only by its architectural significance.
Finally, Tiananmen Square should be on the list of things to see while visiting Beijing. This square is one of the largest in China, and possibly in Asia. At this square, one can visit the Chairman Mao Memorial Hall, one of the greatest leaders ever in China. The Chinese Revolutionary Museum and the Chinese History Museum stand to the east of the square, the Great Hall of the People to the west and the magnificent Tiananmen Tower to the north. As the visitor will see, there are numerous interesting exhibits at Tiananmen Square that offer up a variety of Chinese heritage.
Of course, it is very difficult to name one city in China over all others as “the place” to visit. China is the host to such a wide variety of beautiful places, and a visitor really should spend much more time exploring them all. However, with only one day, I believe that Beijing is the best place to visit.
托福写作：高频话题之个人成功类
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People who move out of native village or town are more successful and happier than people who stay in their native village or town.
Young people have no influence on important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Which is better, challenging plan about one's future or practical plans about one's future?
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
People who go outside are more successful and happier than people who stay in villages.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
People holding different views cannot achieve success as a team.
托福写作句式运用心得分享 倒装句改写技巧实例精讲
托福写作完全倒装句式改写技巧实例讲解
1. here, there, now, then等副词引导的句子，通常称作把时间状语，地点状语提前的倒装句，其谓语动词通常跟在时间or地点状语之后。
A controversy whether starting school day early is a better choice appears then.
变成：
Then appears a controversy whether starting school day early is a better choice.
In the urban cities, an increasing number of ambitious youngsters who attempt to earn a better living live there.
变成：
In the urban cities, there live an increasing number of ambitious youngsters who attempt to earn a better living.
2. 为了使描述的景象更生动，常把拟声词或away, in, out, up, down等状语放在句首，从而引起主谓全部倒装。
Down it fell from the apple tree.
The door opened, in rush the crowed.
Up went the arrow
总结1,2： here, there/now, then/in, out/up, down/ away + 谓语动词 + 主语
3. 句首状语是表示地点的介词词组时，也完全倒装: 地点状语+谓语+主语
很多工厂位于都市。
Many factories lie in urban cities.
变成：
In urban cities lie many factories.
越来越多的学生在美国学习，为了更先进的教育体系和多元文化。
Students in a growing number study in America, for advanced educational system and diversified culture.
变成：
In America study students in a growing number, for advanced educational system and diversified culture.
更多的市民选择住在在他们老了以后住小城市。
More citizens choose to live in a small town when they grow older.
变成：
In a small town choose to live more citizens, when they grow older.
更多的年轻人选待在家里放松。
Many more young people stay at home for relaxation.
变成：
At home stay many young people for relaxation.
4. 表语 放在句首，倒装结构采用：“表语+ 系动词 + 主语”
1)形容词+系动词+主语:
大学生很担忧他们未来的职业发展，使他们找各种兼职工作希望去尽可能多的培养技能。
College students are anxious about their future career development, leading them to take various different part-time jobs with the hoping to cultivate techniques as many as possible.
变为：
Anxious about their future career development are college students, leading them to take various different part-time jobs with the hoping to cultivate techniques as many as possible.
2)现在/过去分词+系动词+主语：
中国正发生巨大的变化。
The dramatic change is taking place in China.
变成：
Taking place in China is the dramatic change.
7-12岁的小孩上不了小学的现象已经一去不复返了。
The phenomena that many kids aging from 7 to 12 years old cannot attend primary schools are gone.
变成：
Gone are the phenomena that many kids aging from 7 to 12 years old cannot attend primary schools.
发展中和发达国家都遭受了前所未有的经济危机。
Both developing and developed countries are confronted with an unprecedented economic crisis.
变成：
Confronted with an unprecedented economic crisis are both developing and developed countries.
目前学校基础设施的质量正在经历巨大的提升。
The quality of infrastructure facilities in current schools is experiencing a huge improvement
变成：
Experiencing a huge improvement is the quality of infrastructure facilities in current universities.
日渐衰败的传统企业处于激烈的竞争市场中。
Traditional enterprises of gradual dilapidation is involved in the market of fierce competition
变成：
Involved in the market of fierce competition is traditional enterprises of gradual dilapidation.
3)介词 + 系动词 + 主语：
由睡眠不足引起的劳累和注意力不集中是导致交通事故的主要因素。
The fatigue and distraction caused by inadequate sleep are among the main contributors to traffic accidents.
变成：
Among the main contributors to traffic accidents are the fatigue and distraction caused by inadequate sleep.
新东方托福写作语料库：独处是最好的放松方式
独处是最好的放松方式语料库
Do you agree or disagree with: Spending time alone is the best way to reduce the stress?是否同意独处是最佳的缓解压力的方式?
相关提问：
Which way would you like to take to improve your health?
Eat more healthy food
Do more exercises
Reduce stress by other ways
独处是缓解压力的最佳方式文章布局：让步反驳写法:
薛鹏思路拓展：
为何独处不是最好的缓压方式，其他缓解压力的方式有哪些：
1. 参加群体性的体育活动(例证展开)
2. 和朋友们去旅行 (细节展开)
薛鹏原创语料库：
1. strain = stress = pressure n压力
2. feel stressful adj感到压力的
3. be under a pool of pressure v压力很大
4. burn the mid-night oil v开夜车(为工作，学习)
5. work far into the night v 工作到深夜
6. strike a proper balance between rest and work v劳逸结合
7. People always believe that they will be less busy in the future than now，however，they are, sometimes， too occupied to relax for a while. 人们一直以为将来会比现在轻松， 然而，有时候，他们太忙碌，以至于不能稍微放松下。
点评：relax for a while 放松一下
点评：too……to…… 太……而不能……
8. A lot of modern people with demanding jobs need a proper way to relieve their pressure caused by tight working scheme. 很多现代人，工作极有挑战性，因此，他们需要一种适当的方式缓解紧张工作引起的压力。
点评：tight working scheme n紧张的工作计划
9. Modern people are now under a pool of pressure ranging from pursuing academic excellence to sustaining the family to developing personal career. 现代人压力很大，压力来自追求学业，赡养家庭，发展事业。
词汇：range from v 从……到……
10. Some people argue that to enjoy the happiness of solitude is the best way to get relaxed. 有人认为享受独处的乐趣是放松的最佳方式。
11. In comparison with being alone, embarking on group physical exercises and travelling with friends deserve more praises in terms of reducing pressure. 对比独处，从事群体性的体育锻炼，和朋友旅行在缓解压力方面更加值得推荐。
词汇：in comparison with adv和……对比
点评：in terms of adv在……方面
12. …… is a good stress-reducer v ……是缓解压力的有效方式
13. …… is an effective way to relax one’s body and ease one’s mind ……是放松身心的良好方式
14. …… in this way, one’s circle of friends grows v因此，人的朋友增多了
15. to enjoy the company of intimate friends v享受好友的陪伴
16. …… add color to one’s dull routine of everyday life v ……增加了人们枯燥琐碎生活的乐趣
17. Spending time alone is merely a short-term stress relief. 独处仅仅是短期的缓解方式。
点评：relief n.(痛苦，压力等的)减轻
18. To climb the mountain with a group of like-minded friends over weekends is a superior approach to relax and entertain, which will increase one’s resilience over time. 在周末，和一群志同道合的好友一起爬山是更好的放松娱乐的方式，爬山运动可以增加人的乐观情绪。(例证展开)
点评：increase one’s resilience over time v 随着时间的推移，增加人的乐观情绪。
19. Those who like to spend time alone, to large extent, tend to become socially inadequate and thus fail to establish good interpersonal relationship. 喜欢独处的人，在很大程度上，易于变得社交方面力不从心，也很难建立良好的人脉资源。
点评：tend to become socially inadequate v容易变得社交方面力不从心 (推荐背诵)
20. Although to reduce pressure by being alone sounds appealing to some extent，I still enjoy the company of friends and group stress-reducing approach. 经管独自缓解压力在某种程度上听起来有吸引力，但是我依然喜欢好友的陪伴以及群体性的缓压方式。
提升教师的工资是提升教学效率最重要的因素的之一。
Increasing teachers’ salaries is one of the most indispensable methods to facilitate the improvement of teaching efficiency.
变成：
Among the most indispensable methods to facilitate the improvement of teaching efficiency is increasing teachers’ salaries.
新东方托福写作语料库：高薪好还是低薪好?
高薪低薪工作语料库
工作类：
A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time. 是否同意低薪假期多的工作比高薪假期少的工作好?(09.02.27 )【范文】
题目解析：对比类写法：
主题观点：支持高薪假期少的工作：
薛鹏思路拓展：
1. 工作是生活的重要部分，因此是幸福的源泉，很多人将自己的成就感和薪水的高低联系到一起。薪水高意味企业重视自己，因此，获得职业成就感和自豪感的机会就多。
2. 经管可能休闲的时间减少，但是，高薪可以给家人带来更加幸福的生活。具体而言，改善居住环境，子女接受精英教育，家人的医疗有保障，这些是幸福的源泉。
3. 工作着是美丽的，因为人不是怕忙，而是怕闲下来，工作通过有建设地利用了时间，使人心满意足，再也没有无聊之感。因此，世界上即使是最枯燥的工作，也比无所事事要强。
薛鹏原创语料库：
1. One of the traits of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom and flexibility in selecting their favorite jobs. 现代择业方式的重要特征之一就是人们在选择自己喜欢的事业方面更加自由，灵活。
点评：One of the traits of……is that …… 的最重要的特征之一就是……
2. It often happens that modern job-seekers often fall into a dilemma when faced with the option of choosing a handsomely paid job with less vacation or opting for a career with meager salary but less leisure hours. 人们常常陷入两难的困境，是选择高薪假期少的工作好，还是低薪假期多的工作好。
3. a handsomely paid job with less vacation n高薪假期少的工作
点评：vacation 假期(美国);holiday 假期(英国)
4. a career with meager salary but less leisure hours n低薪假期多的工作
5. When it comes to the issue that whether people shall take up the job with more freedom or the counterpart that could provide them alluring economic incentive, there never lacks debates and arguments. 当提及到是应该选择自由时间更多的工作，还是经济回报更好的工作的时候，人们常常争议不断。
点评：alluring economic incentive n诱人的经济鼓励
6. Many people prefer to secure a well-paying job even though they may have less time at their disposal. 很多人喜欢高薪的工作， 尽管他们的自由时间减少。
点评：at one’s own disposal v 可以供自己支配
7. Making large sums of money could improve one’s quality of life 挣到很多的钱可以提高生活的质量(细节展开)
8. to receive fine education with high quality v接受精英教育
9. to smell the flowers when aging v老年的时候，偷得余生半日闲(作家文采)
10. to take a few days off in luxurious seaside resorts when vacation comes v 假期来临，在海边的奢华度假胜地享受生活
11. take their salary as an indication of happiness v把薪水当成是幸福的一种象征
12. have a meager salary = have a low-paid job v有低薪的工作
记忆：m + eager = meager adj 少量的
13. enjoy more freedom = have more time at one’s own disposal v有更多的自由
14. enjoy the flexibility of work v 享受工作的灵活
15. have a flexible working time v有更加灵活的工作时间
点评：假期多的利好;远程办公的利好;远程教育的利好
16. have more time that could be allocated to their families， friends or hobbies 有更多的时间留给家庭，朋友和爱好
点评：谈及低薪假期多的工作的利好
17. A well-paid career indicates high social status，which could earn respect from others. Some top stars or financially richer business leaders could serve as perfect examples. 高薪工作意味社会地位高，也赢得他人的尊敬，明星和企业家就是很好的例证。
点评：financially richer business leaders n 富有的企业家(推荐背诵)
18. Working, by occupying time constructively, makes one contented and with no time for boredom. 工作，有建设性地利用时间，使人心满意足，再也没有无聊之感(推荐背诵)
19. A busy life is what every individual aspires after. 人人渴望充实的生活。
点评：…… is what every individual aspires after v ……是人人渴望的。
20. Provided workload is not excessive in amount, even the dullest work in this world is less painful than idleness. 假如工作不是过量的话，即使这个世界上最枯燥的工作，也比无所事事要强。
点评：provided = if 假如
A or B
将 原题复述___________________.When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity of _________is that_______.
The second reason can be seen by every person that________.In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________.
There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点__________.
In a word, _____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that________.
agree or disagree
Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a _____________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.The main problem with this argument is that it is ignoran to the basic fact that______________解释本段中心___________.
Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that______________.
What is more, some students are interested in__________.In a word, ________________.
A or B
In my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among count less factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.
The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For example,___________________.
Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For instance,_______________.
It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important . B________也好_________.
In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B.
A or B
Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________. 就理由进行解释_____________________. For instance,____________________ .
Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________. 就理由进行解释___________________. For example,_____________.The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________.Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as________________.
In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.
A or B
When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point. This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points.
We may look into every possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is ____________________. For example, ______________.
Also, ________________________.
This is arbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.
Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________.
Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方______________.By he same token, however, ______________B更好____________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_____________.
A or B
When it comes to______________, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
I agree with the statement that _________without reservation since___________.
Naturally ___________.It can be given a concrete example__________.
A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of __________is that. Obviously ________________.Take the case of a thing that____________.
Furthermore, what is worth noticing fact is that ________________. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that__________________.
Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent,_______________此处论述B的1-2优点___________.But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_____________.
A or B
____________ 改写并复述题目____________. There may be by one or two disadvantages to ___________________; however, I believe that there are far more advantages. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
First of all, perhaps one disadvantages to ____________is that ______________.For instance, ____________. Another drawback to _____________involves the possibility that____________. For example, ____________.
Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to____________, the advantages far outweigh them. The main reason for my propensity for __________is that _________. For example_____________.
Another reason for my inclination for _____________ is that _________________. For example, _________________.
In a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to _____________, I feel that the advantages are more obvious___________.重复优点__________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____________.
★ 托福写作以及技巧
★ 托福写作经典句型
★ 托福写作例证素材
