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托福独立写作高分用词经验谈 表示差异常用词differ用法精讲
托福独立写作differ用法介绍
首先我们来看一下differ这个词。在托福写作中，凡是要表示差异区别或是不同的意思时，小编相信大部分考生的第一反应都是和differ相关的词汇，比如difference, differentiation, differentiate等等，而这些词汇在词汇用法搭配上都有所区别。需要大家了解其中差异才能正确运用。
1. 动词differ用法
先来看这一系列词汇中的动词differ，这个动词的意思就是区别于其它事物，基本用法很简单：
a. A differ/differs from B
b. A differ/differs from B to B
c. ____ (多个相似的事物) differ in C
a的意思是A和B不同，例句有：
English differs from Spanish in that it is not pronounced as it is written.
Korean cuisine differs from English cuisine, because it is much spicier.
注意第一个例句中的介词in，指的是两者区别的具体方面，大家可以把第二句也变成带有in的形式：
Korean cuisine differs from English cuisine in that it is much spicier.
b用法的意思是A在不同的B中有区别，光看解释可能不好理解，来看例句：
Laws on pollution differ widely from country to country.
Textbooks differ from school to school.
c的用法其实和b正好倒过来，多个相似的事物放在前面，然后这些事物在C这一方面有所区别，也给大家一个例句参考一下：
Although they are similar in many respects, bonobos and chimpanzees differ greatly in social and sexual behaviours.
2. 另一个动词differenciate用法
和differ相关的另一个动词differenciate，常有考生搞不清楚两者之前的区别，其实除了词性相同以及拥有相似的词根外，differenciate在含义上和differ还是有很大区别的。具体来说，differenciate更强调主动性，也就是主动去区别两者不同的意思，用英文来说就是identify the differences between things。而这个词主要的用法有两个，分别是：
a. differentiate between A and B
b. sth. differentiates A from B
a用法的意思是去区分A和B，注意这里用的是between，因此有着很强的比较对比的意味，来看两个例句：
Joe is color-blind and cannot differentiate between red and green.
The camouflage of octopuses makes it difficult for their predators to differentiate between them and rocks.
b的用法则是指某种特性或者特点让A不同于B，例句是：
The ability to speak differentiates humans from other animals.
Although both whales and sharks are aquatic animals, the fact that whales are mammals differentiates whales from sharks.
3. 名词differrenciation用法
说到differ的名词形式，很多同学可能都会想到differrence这个词，但其实除了它以外，还有一个比较好用的名词是differrenciation。这个词从拼写上就可以看出，其实是上面那个动词differenciate变化过来的，因此作为名词，它的含义和differrence的区别也在于强调主动性，也就是带有主动去辨别区分的含义，比如上面的某个例句，就可以改变成用differenciation来表达的形式：
Joe is color-blind and cannot differentiate between red and green. =>
Joe is color-blind and cannot make a differentiation between red and green.
大家如果还是没完全搞懂的话可以再看两个例句体会一下：
Product differentiation is an important aspect of business.
Companies should work hard to achieve differentiation in products.
托福写作：题库范文附思路解析
1. Why people remember special gifts they have received?
People remember special gifts or presents that they have received. Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
『分析』
因为特殊的礼物带来的特殊的意义，或者特殊的改变。
相关题目：[33]、[142]
『范文』
One custom that is prevalent in all societies around the globe is that of gift-giving. This is a time-honored tradition in all countries, and evokes different feelings or emotions in all of us. Gift-giving has many different functions in Chinese culture. One can receive a gift as a token of affection, or one can receive or give a gift to stimulate business opportunities. In both of these cases, the gifts are always well received, and serve the function of a memento.
Perhaps the most common situation in which a gift is given is on a special day, for example, one's birthday or an anniversary. These gifts come to a person from loved ones, and usually symbolize affection or admiration.
These gifts can be large or small. For example, my father bought me a digital camera for my last birthday. This was a great present, and was quite expensive. I did not appreciate the gift because of its monetary value, however. I valued it because it was a very thoughtful gift, as my father knew I was interested in photography. Other gifts have less monetary value, but are still just as meaningful. An example of this is when a boyfriend buys flowers for his girlfriend. The flowers do not cost a lot of money, but they evoke feelings of happiness and love.
Gifts can also be given to stimulate business. For example, many businessmen in China will take their most important clients on a special vacation to see the sights of another city. This trip does not relate directly to business, as in many cases, the business at hand is not discussed. Instead, the businessman will offer such a trip as a token of trust and respect. The client appreciates this gesture, as it shows him/her that the businessman is serious about work, and values him/her as a customer.
In both of these cases, the gifts signify to the receiver that he/she is cared about and is important. It is always a treat to receive a gift, and most people view this as a sign of friendship-Gifts serve as mementos of the people who give them, which is why we hold them in special places in our hearts.
2. Do famous athletes and entertainers deserve high salaries?
Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
『分析』
尽管是有一些不公平，但是这些人收入高是有其道理的。
每个行业的薪酬不同是正常的现象
娱乐、体育行业(industry)是市场最广阔的行业，也就是说是销售额最大的行业，而这样的行业，薪酬很高根本不奇怪。
很多人认为歌星只不过唱一首歌就可以赚很多钱，非常不公平，这是肤浅的看法。要知道明星成名背后的辛苦。
每个国家都征收所得税(income tax)，要知道很多明星收入的60%是用来交税的。他们对社会的贡献也非常大。
『范文』
There are many famous entertainers and athletes who gross millions of dollars every year. I tend to believe that they in a sense do deserve such high paying salaries. Being a famous entertainer or athlete requires copious amounts of hard work. This job also forces one to give up all of their privacy. Moreover, working in these fields means that one must be the very best.
To become famous, whether in the sports industry or the movie industry, takes a lot of hard work. One must train for years and years to make it to the level of a professional. Not only is this tiring, it also costs a lot of money.
If one hopes to reach the level of a superstar, he/she must spend money on training and bettering himself/herself.
This is not an easy lifestyle, and requires dedication, which many people do not have.
Second, these stars deserve to make a lot of money because they must give up their privacy to serve the public.
As soon as stars leave their homes, they are subjected to constantly being pestered by people who want their autograph or want to take pictures of them. Famous people must undergo the intense scrutiny of the media; television and newspaper reporters take note of every action these people do, and publicize it. Again, this is a difficult lifestyle to lead, as one must constantly be careful of what one says in public.
Finally, working in these industries means that one was born with natural talent. They have harnessed a skill that very few others can call upon. If there were no people in society who could play such a role, the entertainment industry would quickly fall into oblivion. We need these people's skills to entertain us.
In conclusion, I think that famous athletes and movie stars deserve their pay. While it seems like too much money when we first hear how much they make, after careful consideration, we realize that they must put a lot of work into their careers, much more than ordinary people do in many cases.
3. Is literacy more important today than in the past?
Is the ability to read and write more important today than in the past? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
『分析』
一定程度上，同意这个说法。(In a sense, it is true that…)
阅读并理解(Comprehend)的能力，在信息过度丰富的今天，更加重要。现代人的阅读量要比过去高出许多倍(过去大学生就是很高的学历，现在博士后[postdoctoral]才算是高学历)。需要更多的能力去辨别真伪。
写作的能力更是如此，比如在工作中，写报告是一项重要内容，公司的规模越大，越是如此。没有写作能力，就等于没有升迁机会。
『范文』
As the world becomes smaller and smaller due to the process of globalization, it becomes more and more important that everyone learns how to read and write. If one is to keep up with the fast pace of the world, literacy skills are of utmost importance.
Technology is expanding at an ever-increasing rate. Computers, and the Internet, have become common terms in almost all nations in the world. If one wants to be able to communicate with others using this efficient method, one must learn the basics of reading and writing. The objects we have in our home are also becoming increasingly more complicated. For example, if one wants to use a DVD player with their television, one must be able to read the manual to learn how to work it. Even the most basic technologies come with an instruction guide: if one is unable to read, they will constantly be struggling to figure out how to work these technologies.
As mentioned above, the world is becoming much smaller. More people are finding it necessary to leave their homes in small towns and villages, moving to the big cities where there is more opportunity. Some of these people find it quite difficult to navigate around the city, as one must know how to read in order to understand the street signs. If one cannot find the place where one has to report for work, it would be very difficult to make a living.
Finally and perhaps most importantly, being able to read and write gives us the opportunity to think for ourselves. Wherever we are, people in authority positions tell us what we should believe. However, in many cases, it is not in our own best interest to follow the leader's ideas. People must learn to read and then examine the information for themselves. This is the only way that culture can evolve. Therefore, I think the skills of reading and writing are of vast importance, no matter where one lives in the world. The world population will continue to grow, and the only way to keep ahead is to learn to read and write.
托福独立写作高分模板分享
题目：Students can use their mobile phones to surf on the Internet or listen to the music while doing their homework.
立场：不同意
理由：做作业的时候干别的很难集中精力，必定会影响效率
【段落示例】
[1] Firstly， it is impossible for students to concentrate on their homework while doing something else at the same time. [2] This is because homework usually demands a relatively quiet place and full concentration from the student. [3] Conversely， if a student is doing homework and listening to music or surfing online as well， his or her attention will be torn apart， and the efficiency of finishing homework will be inevitably affected. [4] A good case in point is my own experience. [5] When I am working on a mission such as preparing a presentation， I have to devote all my attention to it and cannot afford any slight disturbance. [6] If I randomly refresh my Weibo or Wechat on cell phone， my job would be bound to last for a longer time.
[1] 主题句：It is + adj. + for sb. to do A.
[2] 正面说理：This is because….
[3] 反面说理：Conversely….
[4] 引出例子：A good case in point is X’s experience.
[5-6] 阐述例子： Content of the example
【模板总结】
It is important or beneficial for sb. to do A in order to X. This is because A 对于 X 的重要性或者好处。Conversely， 如果不做 A 对于 X 的坏处。A good case in point is Eg1’s experience. 2-3 句阐述例子。The story of Eg1 perfectly illustrates the importance of A.
这里把 impossible 变成了 important or beneficial 因为大部分题目我们都是支持的。既然支持，原因自然是 A 很好或者 A 很重要，自然这两个词就变得非常通用。最后又加了一个对于例子的总结，我们需要做的就是写清楚 A 对于 X 的好处是啥，不做 A 的坏处是啥，以及补充例子的具体内容。当然了，这只是一个非常理想的情况，如果由于某些原因不能保证正反说理和例子同时存在，可以酌情去掉。比如没有例子可以只有正反说理，只不过各说 2-3 句即可。类似的，如果没有反面说理，可以例子或者正面的说理多说一句。极端情况下，主题句和说理都不会写，那直接上例子呗。
【模板应用示例】
Agree or disagree， it is better for children to choose the jobs of their parents.
It is important for us to choose a job that suits our interests in order to distinguish ourselves in a particular field. This is because not only could we have much higher work efficiency by devoting ourselves to a job that interests us，but also we are more likely to come up with innovative ideas. Conversely， following in the footsteps of our parents without thinking of what fascinates us is likely to lead us to nothing but mediocre life.A good case in point is Kobe， a shooting guard who plays for the Los Angeles Lakers of the National Basketball Association. He is one of the most influential basketball players in the history of NBA， not solely for his success in leading the Lakers to three consecutive NBA championships， but for his courage to choose a career that he is obsessed with. The story of Kobe perfectly illustrates the importance of personal interest in one’s career development.
【重点句式】
Not only could we …， but also we are more likely to ….
….， not solely for A， but for B.
【重点表达】
devote A to B
suit one’s interest | interest sb | fascinate sb | be obsessed with
come up with
without thinking of
following in the footstep of sb
【模板替换】
主题句
No one would deny the fact that the importance of A to X should never be overlooked.
The fact that A is of vital importance to X is hardly a surprise.
There is no denying that A is conducive to X or A is closely bound up with X.
On no account should we underestimate the importance of A to X.
By no means are we supposed to close our eyes to the importance of A to X.
It is A that plays an essential part in X.
What we have to admit is that A is a major contributor to X.
正面说理
因
One of the most obvious reasons of this point is that ….
What may explain this point is that ….
The reason is that ….
Of the various reasons attempting to account for this point， the most likely one is that ….
It is generally believed that X results from A.
果
That is the reason why ….
….， as a result of which ….
….， which may explain why ….
反面说理
On the contrary | In contrast | Conversely | On the other hand
引出例子
To illustrate， we may refer to the example of A.
A is a good demonstration of this point.
For relevant examples， we just need to turn to A.
There is no better illustration of this point than the example of A.
There are myriads of examples in our lives that can be used here to substantiate this point， one of which is...
If anyone needs convincing that…， here is the proof.
If anyone looks for further evidence that …， they should look at ….
Those seeking more conviction that … can now turn to ….
Examples of this point abounds in our lives， one of which is ….
… can be cited here as an example of this point.
总结例子
The story of Eg. perfectly illustrates the importance of A to X.
It can be seen from the story of Eg. that A is an indispensable ingredient of X.
Without A， Eg. could have never done X.
Needless to say， Eg’s story indicates that X is largely a result of A.
Had Eg. not done A， Eg. would have never done X.
托福写作必备的四大技巧
一、阅读：寻找核心句和关键词，切忌word by word。
英美人写文章的总体逻辑可以概括为总分或总分总。而托福综合写作的阅读材料多为前者布局，且多为四段式(首段总起，三段分别展开)。
首段主要用来提供背景信息或者提出话题，(注意：阅读和听力是同一个话题，极少考到观点相互补，多为观点相对立。)而作者的立场或论点多位于首段的最后一句，聪明的考生会把注意力多集中于首段的尾句，确定作者的立论点，从而对于下一阶段的听力大致话题和论述做到心中有底。
随后的段落即展开给出作者之所以立论的三个分论点或论据，在单个的段落当中，又遵循了西方人惯有的总分模式，单个段落的首句多为topic sentence，考生可以只关注三个段落的首句以快速获取段落主要内容，从而避免全文通读速度不够而导致的来不及看完阅读。
二、听力：判断说话人立场，记录观点和支持性论据
听力环节的笔记很重要，是决定综合写作能否顺利完成的关键因素。没有经过训练或者疏于练习的同学会对于该记什么无从下手，结果就是笔记做了，自己看不懂，或者笔记太过凌乱，毫无可利用性。
要知道听力该记什么怎么记，此时应当牢记心里的仍然是西方人的逻辑性。“总分”表明了在听力的开始段是表明说话者立场和论点的，那么按照我们之前分析的，阅读和听力必然是同主题，所以听力开始时候大家不必忙着乱记一通，事实上，什么都不用写，镇定情绪，听清说话者的立场即可。
接着，和阅读中相似，说话者会从三个方面阐述支持自己的观点，很多情况下，这三点和阅读中的三点是刚好契合，一一对应的。但听力三方面的分论据往往是从阅读中无法推断的，所以分论点及论据是需要同学进行笔记的，应当记的是key words，切忌洋洋洒洒想记全一句话，最后自己也难以读懂。
三、想办法提高自己的记忆容量。
各位考生不妨观察一下自己抄写英文句子的情况。大多数未经训练的第二语言学习者很可能都是每写下一个词就要回去重新读一次才能继续抄下去——有的时候甚至可能需要每写一个字母就要返回文本重看一眼才能继续。这说明此人的记忆容量只能容纳一个词(或者甚至连一个词都容纳不了)。
记忆容量大的人理解文本更为容易，又因为能够理解所以记忆文本更加容易，进而又因为能够记得住而联系上下文更为轻松，而记忆容量过小的人基本上连看完一篇文章都非常吃力。
不过，只要稍加训练，记忆容量就会扩充至足够用的地步。迅速将自己的英文记忆容量提高到“够用”的地步，最好的方法就是通过“跟读”、“朗读”训练平日积累。因为朗读可以非常有效而又迅速地提高文字理解能力。这很关键，记不住的最重要原因并非“记忆力差”——无论记忆力多好，都很难记住无法理解、无法关联 的信息——听得懂才容易记得住。
四、是大家比较关心的模板问题。
综合写作中，要将阅读和听力观点整合起来时，如果在准备阶段备有一套好用的模板，那么就是如虎添翼了。建议考生应当备有自己独一无二的模板，通过对同义换词，句型多变，做到集多个好模板于一身，又毫无雷同的独家模板。
最新托福写作场上技巧
第一步：审题、确定立场、列出理由最少3分钟最多5分钟。 要避免两个极端：((只需要在草稿纸上用英文单词或汉语列出各个理由，防止遗忘)) 用时太少，理由没有想清楚就开始写作，不仅造成文章逻辑结构不清，还会引起行文中频繁的修正，欲速则不达; 用时太多，不要追求一次思考就能把每一条理由及相关例证都想出来。其实想出两条之后就可以动笔，各个理由的例证可以写到该段时边思考边写。这一点你不必怀疑，只要你的思维还是正常的，一定能做到。 第二步：正文写作。最少22分钟最多26分钟。 a.各段写作时注意对段落的不同部分给予不同的重视。 主题句给予最大重视，注意炼句，别说你不想写主题句，主题句可以使读者和笔者本人更清晰该段落写什么。各段中支持性细节写作不必遵循相同的模式。有n种选择可供参考：1. 举具体事例 2. 说对方相对缺点3. 使用数据 4. 使用假想例子 5. 使用类比、比喻、引用等修辞手段来论述。 哪一种你最容易想出来，就用哪一种。 b.考前将文章开头、结尾、例证、让步等各种句套背熟练,并且练习和模考时把他们用熟，要象做完型填空一样对待考场作文。别试图在考场上再现去决定比如哪种开头好，怎样结尾好。使用自己选种的套话。 c.当被告知还有5分钟结束时，一般你已经该写到最后一条理由，或者已经在做结尾。要确保文章有结尾段。(不排除将他和最后一条理由的末段结合在一起的可能性。) 第三步：检查。需要1-3分钟，有侧重点地检查。 1、句法：确保每句话是完整的，有谓语，且简单句只有一个谓语。 2、时态：文章绝大部分使用的是一般现在时;一般现在时第三人称要使用单数;使用过去发生的事例时用的是过去时; 3、主谓一致。 按此三步，持续练习5篇以上，可以确保时间问题。 整洁： 1、TWE要求必须用铅笔写作文，你要自己准备好铅笔和橡皮。橡皮要有韧性，太硬会擦破纸，有错误要擦干净再改; 2、第一遍写作时要求字迹不要太大也不要太小，通常一行写10-12个左右单词为宜。如果书法不好，可以在考前练习写一下斜体的26个字母的写法。
怎样提升托福写作Limited
首先我们来看一下Limited(1.0-2.0)的评分标准
Your response was judged as limted due to
Failure to understand the lecture or reading passage;
Deficiencies in relating the lectrue to the reading passage;and/or
Many grammatical errors and/or very unclear expressions and sentence strutures.
Limited分数段为1.0-2.0，对应8-14分。文章特点：没有说清楚听力或阅读的内容;听力和阅读文章的关系表达不清晰，存在很多语法错误，词汇或句式运用不当。
那么接下来，我们就要看看如何来备考写作，提升自己的水平了。
一，背，输入永远是输出的基础
如果不看范文不背好词好句就会永远都是破词、破句、破逻辑没有任何进步。还可能越写越词穷，所以背永远是写的前提。
但抱着《红宝书》背单词对写作没意义，要背词组，词组包含搭配。还可以在看范文时积累好看的句子、好词。积累并背熟，否则考场上根本写不出。背的越多考场上能想起的就越多，文章也会写的越好。
二，练习一定要全面
大家在备考时一定要把各个题型都练习一遍。比如写教育、朋友;再比如环保、科技、甚至古今对比的题材都要有所触及，以防考试时出现没有练习过的题型影响成绩。
另外，练习要卡好时间，考试时综合写作20分钟，独立写作30分钟。但我要求17分钟综合写完，27分钟独立写完，都要留三分钟检查。这样可以避免手误影响阅卷人读懂文章。但托福有E-rater，大家拼错的词，小语法错误都逃不过e- rater。所以注意减少错误频率，这对于高分来说非常重要。
三，写完修改
首先，自己修改写过的每篇文章，尽力美化每句话，把语法错误降到最低。
然后，请专业老师修改。因为有些错误自己看不出，没有人会认为自己逻辑有问题。所以你认为好理解的事情写在作文里但读者可能认为完全不能接受，这就需要老师帮助查看逻辑。
另外，需要专业老师帮助检查语言问题，查找语法漏洞，查漏补缺很重要。
四，总结是反思和思考的过程
改后总结，比如“为什么我觉得好老师觉得不好”，“哪些方面需要提高”?多积累多思考，建议建一个纠错文档，把所有错误进行总结，经常复习，避免下次犯同样错误。
写作的提高是一个有机整体：背、练、改，总结哪样都不能少。不背不提高，练一篇扔一篇只能越练越错，只有多练才可熟能生巧。
但盲目练习没意义，练完要认真思考，盲目赶超进度没有意义，注意反思文章错误，否则练得越多错的越多。
托福独立写作攻略一：把握好作文重要的因素
要想托福写作能够拿高分，那么就要掌握一篇好的作文最重要的因素，那就是有论点及论证。一篇好的作文，论点可以提纲挈领，论证可以丰富文章内容。
由于考试时间的限制，很多英语程度好的学生也会出现一些问题。比如说一个学生对作文的论点言之凿凿，但就是写不出东西，或是写不出令自己满意的句子。所以，上考场前，脑中一定要装一些东西，好的例子，好的句子等。
这里强调论据的重要性，不是忽视逻辑和论点的重要性。相反，只要你能够掌握一些万能的论据，对你谋划全篇的结构，以及段落发展，是有好处的。
论据的准备也可以称为素材，这种素材可以是一个短语，一个人名，或是一个完整的例子。这种例子能够辅佐你的乱点，能够画龙点睛。
托福独立写作攻略二：把握好文章写作思路
怎样发展成为一篇逻辑性很强的文章呢?下面为大家介绍一些实战做法。
1.首先应该审题，尤其关注作文题目中的绝对性词汇。
比如：Improving school is most important factor to sucessful development of country. 看到most ，我们自然想到用他因法。
2.其次用20秒的时间，整理脑中所有能用的素材，让这些素材称为支持你段落的骨架，然后开始确定段落的论点。
3.尽量使你的语言句式丰富一些。
形式主语，主动，被动，动名词To do作主语，倒装句，there be，以及强调句等等。特别强调一点，为了使你文章的逻辑清晰可见，要使用逻辑连接词。
4.把握好过渡词的使用，和适当的论述方法完善你的作文，使之成为一个逻辑整体。
论述方法：条件(假设)法，比如：if 我按照论点那样做，就能cause siginificant effects，除了用if，还能有with, when, only through + 方式+倒装等。
具体操作步骤如下：
第一步，将一篇优秀的托福独立习作翻译成中文。优秀的托福作文的来源可是是OG给出的4、5分的范文，也可以是市面上各种辅导书所给出的参考范文，甚至可以是老托福TWE185题的李笑来范文。这里需要注意一个细节，我们所做出来的翻译应该和原文放在一个文档以方便我们的后续检查和比较。
第二步，打开一个新的文档，将翻译好的汉语文本进行复制粘贴。这里需要注意的是最好粘贴在非word文档里。由于word具有自动改正的功能，所以很多明显的拼写语法错误会自动修正，而在真实的考场上，ETS给出的软件完全不具备类似的功能(这本来就是考试所要考查的内容)，所以，对word依赖越大，考场之上，失误的可能性就越大。
第三步，对照自己的汉语文本，将汉语翻译成英语。
第四步，将自己的英语文本与原先的范文文本进行对比，标注出自己表达与范文表达不同的地方，并进行修改批注。但是，进行到这一步，大家千万不要以为万事大吉了，确切地说这才是做好我们整个工作的准备环节，真正关键的步骤是第五步。
第五步，也是整个环节中最重要的一步，就是要静心地思考你的英文译文同范文文本的差异，学习范文文本的起承转合的技巧，学习范文文本长句短句的错落交叉，学习范文文本的精确用词--这些都是在你的文章有了思路和结构之后阻碍你得高分的重要因素。
第六步，作为选择步骤。如果前五步，特别是第五步你已经做的无可挑剔，那么这一步可以选择不做。但是如果你在前五步做完之后还有一些困惑，那么请一定要严格执行第六步，即背下这篇范文。为什么不是直接背下托福作文范文呢?因为只有通过这样一步一步地翻译，一点一点地对比，你才能知道并且是真正你自己的表达弱点在那里。这种做法看似麻烦，其实比直接背范文的有效性要高出很多。
通过这种方法，在经过20篇左右的训练之后，任何人在英语表达上都会有极大的提高。你也会惊喜地发现，曾经苦恼你很久的地道英文表达已经不再是你托福独立写作的拦路虎。所以，“工欲善其事，必利其器”，只要找准了方法，你的语言也会熠熠生辉。
托福独立写作怎样得高分 ETS提出了三方面要求
托福独立写作的结构
很多同学会认为，好的结构，就是给段落的开头加上first, second, 给结尾加上in conclusion，但这种观点并不准确。
OG中指出 “be aware that just using transition words, such as first or second does not guarantee that your essay is organized. The points you make must all relate to the topic of the essay and to the main idea you are presenting in response.”
也就是说，只用“首先”，“其次”这类词并不能够保证organization部分的得分。
想要得到高分，还需要保证unity(统一), progression(推进), and coherence(连贯)，也就是所给出的分论点能够证明总论点，并且段落中的每一句话都能够证明分论点，即文章要扣题。
关于扣题，OG中作出了进一步的解释，文章要避免冗余重复、离题和不清楚的联系。比如上面提到的“做兼职能够帮学生们减轻家庭的经济负担”的段落展开中，很多同学在写完用自己赚的买东西的内容之后，得出的结论是，“我的生活质量得到了提高”。虽然买买买确实可以提高生活质量，但这并不是主题句想要证明的内容。如果这样对段落进行展开，就属于离题。
托福独立写作的语言应用
很多同学认为托福写作要写得很高级，文中应该尽量用上托福学术词汇和长难句。
其实这是一个错误的观点。
托福独立写作评分标准最后一条关于语言运用的描述，并没有提到语言要高级。ETS对于词汇和句式另有要求。
首先，对于词汇，评分标准要求variety和appropriate word choice。
Variety要求考生做到用不同的方式表达相同的意思。例如，作文中多处想要表达“重要”，就不能每一次都用important，还要用其它近义词替换。
Appropriate word choice要求考生选词恰当。大多数同学在写作时，容易忽略所选词汇是否符合语言习惯。比如，big, huge, gigantic三个词中，gigantic相对高级，但当形容一个人眼睛很大时，显然用big eyes表达更自然。所以，大家在选词时，一定要首先保证词汇准确得当，再考虑其它。
其次，对于句式，也有多样性的要求。作文中要避免同样的句式重复太多，要能够长短句结合，各类句式灵活运用。
最后，关于语言错误，OG中指出文中可以出现小的语言错误。“小错误”，指的是不影响理解的错误。例如，偶尔出现单数三人称动词后面忘加s，并不会影响考官对作文的阅读。但如果出现类似 “Some lies are acceptable in terms of making people’s life more profusely. Not everybody has to know the truth, and it will lead them more happier not knowing it” 这样的句子，考官会读起来会很费解，那么就会造成扣分。
总而言之，想要在托福写作中取得高分，必须从文章展开，结构和语言三个方面进行提高。
托福写作难点话题一览
What makes a good boss?
What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.
写作思路展开结构分析
这道题目给出的范围很大，而且和实际生活密切相关，考虑到托福中国考生主要以学生为主，很多人可能对老板这个概念其实并不太熟悉，缺乏足够的实际认识。大家可以从一些具有和老板类似性质的职务上来寻找灵感，比如学校里的老师领导，或是同学中的课代表之类的角色，都能从中得到一些参考。小编整理的一些比较常见的思路是：慷慨大方，有明确的发展思路，善于和员工交流沟通等等。
本话题高分范文赏析
A good boss is imperative to a successful workplace. The best bosses are serious, creative, and flexible. If a boss lacks any of these qualities, problems are certain to arise in the workplace.
While humor and kindness are important characteristics for bosses to have, work is a serious business, and must be approached with a serious attitude. A boss must be able to keep his/her employees working hard and on schedule. He/She must set down rules, enforce them, and also personally adhere to them. If the boss comes in late to work, leaves early, or spends all day joking with the co-workers, then the employees will neither respect nor work hard for him/her. A boss must have a serious and professional attitude that sets an example for all of the employees in the workplace.
To confront the countless problems that arise every day in the workplace, a boss must be extremely creative. If a client needs the company to meet a deadline earlier than expected, a boss must find ways to motivate employees to work faster and harder. A boss who lacks creativity might force his/her employees to work overtime. In this case, the employees might be very tired and upset; they might work slower or produce lower quality work as a result. A creative boss might spend a small amount of money, and treat everyone to dinner at the office to encourage employees to stay late. In this way the company might meet the deadline, preserve quality, and keep employee morale high.
Finally, the most important quality that a good boss must possess is flexibility. While needing to set serious, strict rules, he/she must also recognize that at times the rules need to be bent or broken. For instance, a boss should strictly enforce attendance policies in the workplace. But if an employee with an excellent attendance record needs to take a day off for personal reasons, the boss should let him/her do it. In this way employees' loyalty to the company will be strengthened, and they will be more happy and productive in the workplace.
托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：small town or big city
托福写作难点话题一览
Live in a small town or in a big city?
Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
写作思路展开结构分析
考生完全可以结合自己的实际情况来写。两种选择的优缺点其实都是比较明显的。具体来看，生活在大城市的优缺点是信息发达、工作机会多、生活设施完善但是人情淡薄;而生活在小城镇的优缺点是环境温馨，安静，空气好;人们相互了解、友善但是信息闭塞、没有好的工作发展机会等等。当然大家也可以采取“it depends”的策略，不同的阶段有不同的偏好来展开同样也是不错的写法思路。
本话题高分范文赏析
People seldom agree with each other even in such trivial issues as preference between a big city and a small town. It's a little bit haste to say that it is better to live in a big city than in a small town, or vice versa.
Living in a big city has several benefits. First, there're more job opportunities readily available in big cities than in a small town. Moreover, not merely are there more job positions in big cities and the qualities of the position are much higher as well. In addition, the pay is more decent. Second, children are supposed to be able to receive an education with a higher quality compared with their counterparts who live in a small town. For families,children's education is always put in the first place. Finally, living in a big city usually has a superior living standard to that in a small town. There are more commodities and services in city markets; there are more public utilities available in big cities; there are even much more television channels in big cities.
However, living in a small town also has some advantages. People who live in a small town often have a much comfortable life style. Most of them do not have to suffer high working stress. Although the average pay is much less than that of big cities, the price of daily necessities, such as vegetables or meat, is usually less expensive. Instead of suffering loneliness which is prevalent in big cities, children might grow up more healthily because of harmonious relationship among residents in small town. People in a small town do not have to get up so early in the morning because there has been no traffic jam, and nobody drive so fast in a small town as to cause car accidents. They might have fewer channels in television, but they have more friends readily available to chat or entertain with.
According to my current situation, although I am longing for the cozy atmosphere and relationship among neighbors and friends which almost only exist in small cities, I have chosen to live in one of the biggest cities in my country—Beijing, since I have found a pretty good job here, and a decent pay. I think I would prefer living in a small town when I get retired one day.
托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：luck or hard work
托福写作难点话题一览
Does luck have anything to do with success?
“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
写作思路展开结构分析
首先题目里的nothing to do有点太过极端了。很明显是出题者给大家挖的坑，即使同意这个观点考生也不能太过武断，要避免观点太过绝对和偏颇。所以建议大家选择的态度是不能完全同意也不能完全不同意，如果要同意立场尽量维持在“很大程度上同意”会比较好。考生可以指出luck确实存在，然后展开说可能导致人们成功的若干原因：诚实、睿智、幽默;执著;肯于做不喜欢的事情等等。
本话题高分范文赏析
Here is a true story, a story about an African man called Cinque who slew a most terrifying beast that any one has ever seen, a lion. His siblings in the village who know about this anecdote gave him great respect and call him the big man. However, he told the truth later. “It had killed several people, even hunters among us. Everyone including me was afraid. ”I was lying down with my family, when out of nowhere it appeared. “As it came for me, I picked up a big rock and I threw it. And that wasn't bravery, because any man would do the same to protect his family. ”But by some miracle, you see, I hit it. I don't know how that killed it, but it did. A rock, you see, a rock. “I received the gratitude of everyone in the village. I was given respect. They treated me as if I was a prince. They gave me the finest country cloth. All these things they gave me, I took them all. But I knew I didn't deserve it, for when I threw that rock at that beast, if I missed it, I wouldn't be sitting here today trying to explain these things to you or somebody else, I'd just be dead. I'm not a big man, just a lucky one.” You see, luck does exist. When it appears, mathematicians describe in such a way that something has an extremely small probability but it does happen. People often say, one has to have an opportunity to succeed. In this case, luck is the opportunity, and to some extent is an indispensable factor to achieve success.
When people say luck has nothing to do with success, I wonder it is not their intention to deny existence of luck, but to encourage. Because luck in fact is a factor that one can not and should not count on, even though we know people who have succeeded have their own luck. It is somewhere, but nobody knows where. It happens sometime, but we don't know when. By contrast, hard work is something that everyone can count on, and as is often the case, hard work might bring luck. Therefore, luck itself is of no hope, and lack of luck should not be an excuse to failure.
托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：universities finance students
托福写作难点话题一览
Should universities finance students' sports activities equally as libraries?
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
写作思路展开结构分析
不能完全同意。“same”是一件做不到的事情。普通大学，应该或更多的钱在图书馆上;而体育专科大学，当然应该花更多的钱在体育设施上。资金分配的重要原则是产出应该大于投入，而大学的办学原则是要better brains;也要better bodies.另外，从资金投入的角度来说，资金分配问题中关于资金的有效运用(efficiency of money allocation)的重要体现是投入产出比(input-output ratio)。即便是nonprofit-making organization也要保证资金的投入产出的平衡(balance of input and output)。
本话题高分范文赏析
The main responsibility of a university is to develop a student's academic ability. While physical health is an important prerequisite for mental health and academic achievement, sports should play a comparatively small role in college student's lives. Since a student's main activity outside of the classroom is studying, occupying from four to eight hours of their day, a peaceful studying environment plays an important role in a student's academic development. College dorm rooms can have up to eight students sleeping in one small room and are not good environments for students to study in. To provide excellent studying environments for their students, universities must build large libraries designed to accommodate students as well as books. Since sports should occupy a much smaller part of the student's time, perhaps only an hour a day, sports facilities need not be as extensive or well-equipped as libraries. In addition to the costs of building adequate library faculties, a university must also pay every year to keep its collection well organized and up-to-date. The goal of every university library should be to have the most current books and materials its students need in order to study and do cutting edge research. The larger the student body, the more comprehensive a library's collection must be. A well-trained staff must also care for the materials and help the students. Continuing costs for sports, on the other hand, are relatively low, requiring only a few part-time staff and maintenance routines. For the most part, students are happy to organize their own sporting events and exercise routines quite independently of the school. Although a student's health is critical to their academic success, the investment that a school needs to make to ensure a physically fit student body is relatively small. Considering that the main mission of the school is to develop a student's mind and not their body, the school should put more of its resources into its libraries and not its sports activities.
托福写作难点话题一览
Attending classes: required or optional?
Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
写作思路展开结构分析
这个话题其实两边都是有些片面的，因此建议考生不要急于选择哪一个观点。正确做法是先尽量多地列举两种观点的优缺点，然后进行比较，最终选择一个立场。大家可以考虑一下这几个问题，比如在培养大学生时，是否应该以培养学生的自主能力为主?如果强制所有的学生去上课，是否真的会提高所有学生的学习效率?有些学生可能在某些课堂上得不到有效的帮助。如果允许所有的学生都可以自由选课，是否会有些学生失去目标?另外现行的选修课和必修课制度是否已经一定程度上解决了这个矛盾。考虑清楚这些问题的答案再选边站会比较好一些.
本话题高分范文赏析
The most important responsibility of college students is to pursue their course of study to the best of their ability. In most cases, this would mean attending every class. In reality, however, not every student is the same,and not every class is the same. If a student can study more effectively in another way, then that student should be allowed to pursue his/her studies to the best of his/her abilities, and not be required to attend classes that are not helpful to him/her.
Some students find it difficult to concentrate in large lecture classes and find reading quietly a more effective way of studying. If a student can achieve more by reading in the library and meeting with a professor during office hours than students who attend every class, he/she should not be prevented from studying in the most effective way for him/her.
The most important measures of a college student's academic progress are tests. In the weeks before exams, college student's need to arrange their own schedules becomes critical. For instance, if a student is very good at math but very poor at English, it might make more sense for that student to skip math class and spend the extra time preparing for an English test. If students are required to attend classes whose content they are already familiar with, at best they will be bored by redundant material, at worst they will fail tests in subjects they are less proficient in.
The argument might be made that it is the school's responsibility to organize its curriculum so that students are always challenged and therefore truly need to be at every class. I contend that it is impossible to tailor an entire school's curriculum to the individual needs of every single student. The best that can be hoped for is a well thought out curriculum with enough flexibility to handle the differences between individual students. Schools should trust the students to make choices that are in their own best interests, and use testing as the final arbiter of academic excellence.
托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：what makes a good neighbor
托福写作难点话题一览
What makes a good neighbor?
Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor?Use specific details and examples in your answer.
写作思路展开结构分析
这道题目的展开需要考虑两个问题，首先是邻居能够带给你哪些帮助?其次是邻居可能会给你造成哪些困扰?把这两个问题的答案都写下来，基本上你就能找到话题展开的方向了。一般来说，形容邻居比较常见的一些quality有intelligence, honesty, a sense of humor等等。当然这也是描述各类积极的正面的人群都很容易用到的基本优点，还有比如optimistic and positive; politeness; loyalty大家也可以考虑用到这篇文章的话题展开当中去。
本话题高分范文赏析
Neighbors are extraordinarily important people in our lives. Many people make a decision about what place they want to live in based on their future neighbors. People most want to live near neighbors who are respectful, vigilant, and community-minded.
The foundation of any relationship, whether among neighbors or friends, colleagues or family members, is mutual respect. Respect between neighbors means that when they see each other they will be warm and polite.
Neighbors don't have to be friends, but they need not be strangers either. Because neighbors live close together, sometimes it is unavoidable that they will learn personal details about their neighbors. A respectful person will not intrude upon their neighbor's privacy, or share these private details with anyone else.
Another important aspect of being a good neighbor is to be vigilant. If people see a robber trying to break into their neighbor's house, then they should call the police. If they see a neighbor's young child in a dangerous situation, they should help the child, or at least give the alarm. If the government posts new regulations, they will help inform their neighbors of the new laws. If everyone in a neighborhood watches out for each other's safety, then the neighborhood will be a safer and more pleasant place. Moreover, good neighbors are community-minded. They care about their local environment. Good neighbors will not throw trash on the ground, and if they see trash on the ground they will pick it up. They will make decisions based with consideration to their neighbors. They won't play loud music late at night or get drunk and fight in public. They want to live in a happy, peaceful community and they believe that their personal actions have a direct effect on the happiness of all of their neighbors. If all the people in the community think about the good of the community when they make decisions, the whole community will benefit.
托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：opinion on a new restaurant
托福写作难点话题一览
What's your opinion on a new restaurant built in your neighborhood?
It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
写作思路展开结构分析
这道题目相信大家很容易联想到实际生活，因此无论从支持还是反对的角度来展开应该都能想出不少理由和论据。比如正面的有小区内的餐馆越多，竞争就越激烈，那么价钱就会更公道，反面的可以写可能会出现卫生问题，也可能有客人酗酒闹事等等。总之此题目可以联系实际生活想出不少例子，展开难度还是比较低的。
本话题高分范文赏析
Until recently our neighborhood hasn't had any restaurants. We have a local food market and several small convenience stores, and even several street side food stands, but no real restaurants. I'm personally in favor of opening a new restaurant in our neighborhood, and believe it will make people's lives more convenient, support the local economy, and create a healthier community spirit. Cooking at home every night is time-consuming and tiring for local families. After a long day at work, local people have to spend at least one hour to shop for groceries, and even more for cooking dinner, and cleaning up after the meal. By the time all is finished, they almost have no time to enjoy the company of their families. Eating out would save time if there were a restaurant nearby, but the closest restaurant is a 30-minute walk away. If a restaurant opened in our neighborhood it would allow local people to relax for a night or two every week and enjoy more time with their families.
A new restaurant would also help the local economy. Building the restaurant would require the labor of local carpenters, plumbers, and electricians. The new restaurant would need to buy a great deal of food and produce from local markets and supplies like furniture, cooking utensils, and everyday items from local merchants. It would also create jobs for waiters, managers, and chefs. Perhaps most importantly, a new restaurant could also potentially attract business from the surrounding neighborhoods, bringing more investment into our community.
托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：learn by yourself or with a teacher
托福写作难点话题一览
Learn by yourself or with a teacher?
Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
写作思路展开结构分析
这道题算是托福写作中比较经典的一道题目，类似的变体题也有很多。小编建议大家先不要急于选择哪一个观点，因为两个观点都有些片面。从好处上来说，有老师的好处是系统的指导、提供疑难解答、更快、更有效率等等。而自学也有其存在的必要性，比如自学能力应该是追求知识的过程中最重要的能力之一。比较合理的写法是两者结合来说，比如任何科目都应该指导和自学相结合。或是不同的科目、不同的阶段有不同的选择。
本话题高分范文赏析
Whether we need a teacher or not depends on circumstances. The relationship between a teacher and a new subject is somewhat similar to that between a tour guide and an unknown city. When we come to an unknown city for the first time, we definitely need a tour guide. We might have a detailed map, but it is unlikely functional—it isn't surprised that we can hardly interpret those mysterious symbols. Likewise, when we are beginners, it is wise to learn with teachers. They can tell us where to begin with, what we should do, and which reference we should choose. When we confront difficulties, we can ask them for help, and their advices will always be tremendously helpful. With teachers' assistance, we might learn easier, faster, and more interestingly.
After a period of time, we have learned a lot. We now know the city pretty well, even though there are still many places we haven't been to. It doesn't matter. Now that we are able to recognize those mysterious symbols on the map, what we need perhaps is not a tour guide but a more detailed map.
Similarly, we need richer references for learning. There are still many fields unexplored; they are, nevertheless, no longer puzzling. The task is simple: we will explore them one by one, little by little. If we are working on a certain skill, practice more; if we are preparing a test, practice more; whatever we are learning, what is always to bear in mind is that, like people always say, practice makes perfect. After another period of time, we might have become others' tour guide, but we still want to make out more. We want to know which restaurant is the most decent, which bookstore is the most professional, which coffee shop is the most classical. Even the most comprehensive map doesn't have adequate information. We again need experts.
In learning, it's much the same. We need experts to consult for specific problems. Furthermore, the most beneficial merit of consulting experts is that we can not merely refer to them but even discuss with them in depth. As is often the case, a solution for a complex matter is not waiting for us right there and then, sometimes it comes out of inspirations of discussion.
In short, having a good teacher is always better than having none, but the importance of a teacher varies from period to period, and more often than not depends on different stage in which we are learning.
题目：
Businesses are as likely as are governments to establish large bureaucracies, but bureaucracy is far more damaging to a business than it is to a government.
模板：
Contrary to the statement’s premise, my view is that businesses are less likely than government to establish large bureaucracies, because businesses know that they are more vulnerable than government to damage resulting from bureaucratic inefficiencies. My position is well supported by common sense and by observation.
点评：
开门见山式的开头段写法其实是比较标准的一种写法，因为托福的独立写作从题目要求来说本质上就是一篇议论文，而且还是立论文，需要考生自己提出观点然后论述证明。那么在开头段就直接鲜明地亮出观点无疑是很合理的写法，对考官来说也能第一时间就看到你的观点，可以说是对读者比较友好的一种写法。比如上面的这个模板，就是第一句话直接写出了自己对题目的反对立场，并且最后给出了引出下面正式论述的引导句。这种开头段写法虽然不玩花样看似有点平淡甚至BORING，但对于不要求太多文笔更看重论述逻辑的议论文来说确实是比较高效的写法，也很适合新手考生进行模仿学习。
托福独立写作开头段高分写法：引用谚语名言
题目：
“As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.
模板：
As a saying goes, “God helps those help themselves”, which is true in most cases. But as far as the large numbers of laid-off workers caused by the technological and market changes are concerned, I believe the government and the business certainly have an unshakable responsibility to take.
点评：
这种写法就比较有创意了，当然大家在写中文作文时肯定也用过，就是开头就先引用个名人名言压一下场面，比如某某曾经说过。。。这样的写法。这种写法对考生的英语积累有一定要求，引用的谚语或者名言既要符合题目场景切题，考生也需要完整记住这句名言而不能自行修改甚至凭空捏造，无论是强行凑名言还是伪造的做法都只会让结果适得其反。当然这种写法能够一定程度上展现出考生的英语素养和积累，可以说是一种比较炫技的写法，大家如果在英语的言语名言方面有不错的积累可以考虑一下这种写法。
托福独立写作开头段高分写法：先复述再引出观点
题目：
“We shape our buildings and afterwards our buildings shape us.”
模板：
I believe this statement should be interpreted broadly—to mean that we are influenced by the exterior shape of buildings, as well as by the arrangement of multiple buildings and by a building’s various architectural and aesthetic elements. While I doubt that buildings determine our character or basic personality traits, I agree that they can greatly influence our attitudes, moods, and even life styles.
点评：
这种写法比起直接开门见山亮观点的写法来说可能更加稳妥一些，毕竟先简单复述题目再表达自己观点是托福官方指南OG中比较推荐的开头写法。而且无论考生对题目观点是否赞同，对题目复述之后进行适当的让步再亮出观点也是一种比较委婉的表述方式。当然这种写法需要注意不能引用太多原题，而且不能照搬需要用自己的话来适当改动一下。这其中的度大家需要把握好，否则反而会引起一些不必要的扣分。
托福独立写作开头段高分写法：自问自答表明立场
题目：
”As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.”
模板：
As technology and changing social needs render more and more jobs obsolete, who is responsible for helping displaced workers adjust? While individuals have primary responsibility for learning new skills and finding work, both industry and government have some obligation to provide them the means of doing so.
点评：
自问自答式的开头段写法在托福考试官方给出的范文类资料中是比较少见的。这种设问写法的作用也很明显，通过汇总其实也就是变相复述一下原题目，对其中比较尖锐的矛盾问题直接以提问的形式来引出之后自己的看法。这种写法其实是比较挑题目的，如果作文原题是那种有明显对立互斥观点，或者要求考生二选一的题目，那么用这种写法就比较适合了。而对于一些只要求考生给出自己的观点比较平淡一些的题目，这种写法可能就会给人强行挑事的感觉了。因此大家学习这种开头模板写法需要注意根据题目来选择使用。
托福写作语料库积累：国内和国外的电影哪个更有趣
Movies and TV made in your country are more interesting compared with movies and programs made in another country?是否同意本国的电影比外国的电影更加有趣?(2013.03.16)
托福写作立场： 外国的电影电视比本国的电影电视更加有趣
托福写作思路拓展
支持外国电影：
1. 外国的电影更加有趣，因为探究未知，满足好奇心是人之本性，由于文化和历史的差异，外国的电影通常对于人们的吸引力更大。例如，我个人喜欢看外国科幻电影，科幻电影畅想未来，可以激发我的想象力和创造力。然而，本国的电影，叙述历史，情节老套，背景熟悉，可以预测故事结局，因此，很多像我一样的年轻人不感兴趣。
2. 看外国电影是一种很好的拓宽视野的方式，放松身心的方式。
3. 外国电影吸引年轻人的另外一个重要的原因就是其优质的制作，很多外国电影，场面恢弘，人物俊美，情节起伏，因此可以给观影人带来持续的新鲜感。
支持国电影：(让步段使用)
本国的电影也有利好，可以加深我们对于本民族文化的洞察，拓宽我们的知识面，激发我们的爱国热情。
托福写作语料库
1. foreign movies or TV programs = movies or TV programs made in another country 外国的电影电视
2. home-made movies or TV programs 本国的电影电视
3. exert a far more profound influence on sb 对于…… 施加了更加深远的影响
4. I enjoy a fairly diverse range of films and TV programs 我喜欢看很多类型的电影和电视节目。
5. The movies and TV shows made in foreign countries can，to larger extent， intrigue my personal interest 外国的电影电视，更大程度上使我感兴趣。
6. arouse my sympathy 引起我的共鸣
7. Science fiction movies can stir my wild imagination and develop my vivid creativity 科幻电影可以激发我丰富想象力以及创造力。
8. bring me constant sense of refreshment 给我带来持久的新鲜感
9. deepen my insight into exotic cultures 加深对于异国文化的洞察
解析：exotic adj.异国情调的
10. When I watch a foreign movie or show, I can always be greatly attracted by its gripping plot，eye-catching heroes and unexpected ending.
看外国的影视剧，我总是被其引人入胜的情节，帅气美丽的主角以及出人意料的结局所吸引。
11. Language is another reason why foreign movies and TV programs can be more fascinating than the counterpart made in one's own country.
语言是另外一个原因，为何外国电影比本国电影更加有吸引力。
12. The debate reminds me of An American classic movie, Titanic ……争议使得想起了经典的美国电影，泰坦尼克
13. Success only favors those who dare to give it a try, take risk, assume responsibilities and accept challenges.
成功青睐哪些敢于尝试，敢于冒险，承担责任以及接受挑战的人。
14. The brave ended up wining honor and enjoying tremendous reputation.
故事的结局是，勇敢者最终获得荣誉以及声名远播
解析：end up doing sth 最终以 ……为结局
15. Many home-made movies fail to arouse my interest and impulse of watching.
很多本国电影无法引起我观看的兴趣和冲动
解析：impulse n冲动
16. A good domestic movie or TV show might also be captivating.
本国制作的电影电视，也许也是有意思的。
解析：captivating 引起兴趣的;有魅力的
拓展：amusing = interesting 有意思的
拓展：fascinating =attractive 有吸引力的
17. arouse our patriotism 激发我们爱国热情
18. deepen our insight into national culture and history. 加深我们对于民族历史和文化洞察
19. In comparison with A, I have a preference for B 和…… 对比，我更加喜欢……
20. I prefer to do sth rather than do sth 我喜欢做…… 胜过做……
托福写作语料库积累：度假时是否应该带手机
Some people believe that if people are on vacation, they should leave their mobile phones at home ，to what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人认为人们在度假的时候应该把手机留在家里，你是否认同?
托福写作立场 人们在旅行的时候，携带手机是利大于弊
托福写作思路拓展
旅行时携带手机的好处：
1. 手机的一些功能可以给旅行提供具体的帮助，例如手机的APP地图软件，就可以帮助游客在谋生的城市，准确定位，及时找到目的地。同样，游客们可以使用手机预订机票和酒店。
2. 携带手机可以随时和家人朋友保持联系，尤其是在发生紧急事件的时候。
3. 手机本身具有强大的娱乐功能，可以作为旅途中一种消遣的方式。例如，我在旅行的时候，喜欢使用手机听歌、照相和刷微信。
旅行时携带手机的弊端(用于让步段)：
我不得不承认，携带手机度假有时候也会有其弊端，尤其是对于难得休闲的职场人士而言，度假的目的是为了暂时地放下工作的压力和烦恼，如果旅行中突然收到公司的业务电话，需要自己结束旅行，也是令人苦恼的，但是，我认为这种情况的发生的概率还是很小的。
托福写作语料库
1. Vacation is a time for relaxation 度假是为了放松。
2. People’s preferences differ greatly in determining whether or not it is advisable to take a cell phone when they take a few days off in some hot scenic spots.
在一些热门的旅游景区度假的时候，是否携带手机，人们的喜好差异很大。
解析：People’s preferences differ greatly in determining whether or not it is advisable to do sth 关于是否做……是明智的，人们的喜好不同。
3. As for me，the merits of taking a phone outweigh its possible demerits.
对于我而言，我认为携带手机的利大于弊。
解析：the merits of …… outweigh its possible demerits ……的利大于弊
4. Taking a cell phone can help us keep in touch with our family members and friends, especially in time of emergency.
携带手机可以帮助我们和家庭成员和朋友保持联系，尤其是在发生紧急情况的时候。
解析：in time of …… 在……的时候
5. When spending holiday, people usually choose to visit some unfamiliar cities or countries，if they take a cell phone， then ，they can deal with crisis easily .
度假的时候，人们喜欢选择陌生的城市和国家，如果他们携带手机，那么，他们很容易危机处理。
解析：if …… then …… 如果…… 那么……
6. Taking a mobile phone is of great necessity for us because it is a good source of entertainment.
携带手机对于我们是必要的，因为，手机是很好的娱乐的源泉。
解析：It is a good source of entertainment 这是娱乐的源泉。
7. While travelling, people may have to spend great amounts of time on taking various public transit， seeking hotels or booking tickets，in this sense，using the various cell phone APP softwares can be time-saving and trouble-saving.
度假的时候，人们需要花费大量的时间乘坐公共交通工具，选择酒店，预定机票，因此，使用手机的APP软件可以省时省力。
解析：take various public transit v 乘坐各种公共交通工具
8. The mighty entertainment function of the cell phone can be used as a good stress-reducer. 使用手机强大的娱乐功能，是一种很好的缓解压力的方式。
解析：…… is a good stress-reducer ……是很好的缓解压力的方式
9. Playing on-line games, listening to favorite music or watching humorous movies can an ideal way to relax our bodies and ease our minds.
玩在线游戏，听我们喜爱的歌曲，看相关的幽默电影还是理想的方式放松身心。
解析：…… is an deal way to relax our bodies and ease our minds ……是很好的方式来放松我们的身心
10. Indeed，I have to concede that taking cell phones on vacation is never without its demerits.
我不得不承认的是，度假时携带手机不是没有其弊端。
解析：is never without 远非没有……
11. Constant phone calls may ruin our holidays不断地接听手机也许会毁掉我们的假期。
解析：ruin our holidays v 毁掉我们假期
12. The purpose of spending holidays is to temporarily to take a rest from stressful and arduous work.
度假的目的是为了暂时地放下工作中的压力。
解析：stressful adj 压力大
解析：arduous adj 繁重的;费力的
13. It must be quite annoying if an emergent phone call requires us to end our hardly earned vacation.
如果旅行中突然收到公司的业务电话，需要自己结束旅行，也是令人苦恼的
解析：It must be quite annoying if …… 如果……一定是令人苦脑的
解析：hardly earned vacation n 来之不易的假期
14. However， the incidence of this situation is very small because those who are on vacations， in most cases，will perfectly handle their problems in advance.
但是，我认为这种情况发生的机会是很小的，因为度假者通常会事先做好工作安排。
15. Overall，I am still convinced that it is wise to take cell phones during the vacation.
总之，度假的时候带着手机是有利好的。
解析：Overall，I am still convinced that …… 总之，我深信……
解析：it is wise to do sth 做……是明智的
托福写作语料库积累：广告是人们不健康饮食的根源吗
Do you agree or disagree: the advertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits? 广告是人们不健康饮食的根源?
托福写作相关提问：
Do you agree or disagree? Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past. 是否同意，现在比过去更加容易保持健康?
注意审题：不健康饮食不等于不健康
托福写作思路：让步反驳写法：(三分让步，七分反驳)
托福写作立场：广告是人们不健康饮食的根源之一，但是，不是唯一的主要的原因：
托福写作思路拓展：
让步段：广告为何是人们不健康饮食的根源：
1. 快餐食品广告会导致人们的不健康饮食。具体而言，现代人，生活节奏快，竞争激励，忙于事业，因此，为节省时间，很多人依赖快餐，但是，过度的糖分，脂肪，热量的摄入必然是有害健康。 因此，快餐广告是人们不健康饮食的根源之一。
反驳段：除了广告，不健康饮食的更加重要的原因有哪些：
1. 不健康的饮食习惯， 例如过度节食，很多年轻女孩喜欢追求苗条身体，很多人认为节食是最好的方法，但是，美丽的代价就是营养不良。
2. 不健康的饮食习惯， 例如暴饮暴食，很多人为了满足食欲，饮食无度， 过度营养物的摄入(例如海鲜类食品)必然是有害健康。
托福写作语料库：
1. Alarmingly, many modern people, especially youngsters, have been suffering from unwholesome eating habits.
令人担忧的是，很多现代人，尤其是年轻人，一直受到不健康饮食的困扰。
2. Conflicting ideas clash in whether or not the advertisement is the root cause of people’s unhealthy dietary habits.
关于广告是不是人们不健康饮食的根源，人们的观点是矛盾的。
点评：unhealthy dietary habit = unwholesome eating habit n不健康的饮食习惯;
3. In addition to the subtle influence of ads， there are still many other reasons that contribute to people’s undesirable eating habits.
除了广告的微妙影响，还有很多的原因导致了人们的不良饮食习惯。
点评：contribute to = give rise to = lead to v 导致……
4. So fierce is the competition and so fast is the tempo of modern life that the vast majority of people nearly have no time available to do the home meal.
现代社会，竞争激励，生活节奏快，现代人几乎没有时间回家做饭。
点评：fierce competition n 激励的竞争
5. Eating too much fast food is health-threatening, for fast food contains too much fat, sugar and calorie.
吃了太多的快餐有害健康，因为不少的快餐含有太多的脂肪，糖分和热量。
点评：too much intake of fast food = eat too much fast food v 吃太多的快餐食品
6. To be more precise = more precisely adv具体来讲
7. a rich variety of = various kinds of = manifold adj各种各样的
8. carbonated beverage = carbonated drinks n 碳酸饮料
点评：carbon n碳;beverage n饮料
9. …… is physically detrimental = is health-threatening = undermine one’s health v 有害身体健康(经典三剑客)
10. obesity or over-nutrition n肥胖或者营养过剩
点评：
obese adj肥胖的
over-nutritious adj营养过剩的
nutrient n营养品
11. exert a subtle influence on 对于……有微妙的影响(推荐背诵;广告必用)
12. …… is inevitably health- threatening …… 是不可避免地威胁健康
13. food preference or engorgement are still contributing factors of people’s sub-health.
偏食和暴饮暴食同样是人们亚健康的原因
词汇：engorge vt. 狼吞虎咽
14. fail to maintain well-balanced diet v不能保持均衡的饮食
15. A great many young ladies are pursing slender figure nowadays, many of them tend to believe that cutting food intake is the best method. Unfortunately, the cost of beautiful look is the mal-nutrition.
很多年轻女孩喜欢追求苗条身材，很多人认为节食是最后的方法，但是，美丽的代价就是营养不良。
