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雅思写作分析：一种语言的消失是否值得挽救
今日学习主题
一种语言的消失是否值得挽救
主题解读
关于一种语言的消失是否值得挽救的话题，实际上涉及到两个雅思写作中比较重要的考点：1、语言相关的话题，可以从不同角度来出题。2、救不救的问题，包括动物救不救，植物救不救，文化救不救，语言救不救等，大家学习时要善于从“考点”的角度来看待素材，使备考更加具有针对性。
英文句子
Losing a language forever is obviously regrettable, so it may be worthwhile for a government to intervene with funding to keep it alive, depending on the future prospects of the particular language.
一种语言永远消失显然是令人遗憾的，因此依据这一特定语言的发展前景，政府通过拨款使其继续存在或许是值得的。
雅思写作语言点精讲
1. 本句可以作为观点句使用，首先说明一种语言永远消失不是什么好事，但表述也并不绝对，因为在句尾补充到“要看这一特定语言的前景如何”
2. losing a language forever，动名词做主语，表示“一种语言永远消失”
3. regrettable，表示消极意义的形容词，意思是“令人遗憾的”，“可惜的”，之前使用副词来修饰形容词，obviously表示“很显然”，“明显地”。日常写作中应该不断增加表示积极或消极意义形容词的积累
4. so 表示因果关系，属于句内衔接
5. it may be worthwhile for sb. to do sth. 常用句型需要积累，同时注意may be属于非绝对化表达，雅思写作的议论文中不会有太多非黑即白的观点，因此很多时候表达中需要“留有余地”
6. intervene with funding，干预，干预用的手段是funding，即“提供资金”，同时需要注意介词with不要用错，补充：to hope for government funding 希望获得政府资助。
7. keep it alive，表示“使之继续存在”，注意keep+n+adj的用法
8.depend on 表示“取决于…”，“根据…”，此处用作状语
9. the future prospects 表示“前景”
10. the particular language 表示“特定语言”
今日练习
1. 除了句中出现的regrettable，整理表示积极和消极含义的形容词各3个，并造句，注意在语境下是否适用，不许使用good / bad -_-!
2. 关于今天的主题，写一个自己的观点句，写不出来就把今天这句话背下来
雅思写作分析：语言的历史和文化价值
今日学习主题
语言的历史和文化价值
主题解读
一般考到少数人使用的语言“救不救”的话题，必然涉及到这种语言的价值，那么提到这种语言代表了一个民族或者人群的历史和文化就是顺理成章的理由，也是需要积累的句型，因为除了“语言”，还有许多东西可以与“历史和文化价值”联系起来，所以这也是议论文中常用的理由之一。
英文句子
A language is both an expression of a people’s history and culture. If it were lost, a rich and unique cultural heritage would be gone forever.
语言能够表现一个民族的历史和文化。如果语言消失，丰富而独特的文化遗产将永远消失。
雅思写作语言点精讲
1. 这句话从语言的历史文化价值角度，说明语言的消失是很可惜的，同时通过虚拟语气进行假设，作进一步说明。
2. an expression of 由于express本身是“表达”的意思，这里使用名词结构，同样指“表现，表达”，需要注意的是，尽管这里是n+of的结构，平时中英文互译的时候，会发生词性变化的情况，所以用中文进行理解时，可以不将其理解为“…的表现”，而是直接按照动词形式进行翻译和理解即可，也就是“表现一个民族的历史和文化”。
3. a people’s history and culture 注意people表示“人”的时候，本身属于集合名词，前面不能加冠词a，但表示“民族”这一含义时，可以用a people表示“一个民族”。
4. if it were lost, … would … 非常典型的虚拟语气，从句一般使用if+主语+一般过去时，主句一般使用主语+should/would/might/could来表达，表示这是一种假设，而非现实发生的客观事实。例如：If there were no air or water, there would be no living things on the earth.
5. rich and unique 形容词结构的并列用法，表示丰富而独特的，都可以用来修饰后面的名词
6. cultural heritage 文化遗产，非常高频的表达。
今日练习
尝试使用虚拟语气来表示假设。给出一个观点，然后通过假设进行进一步说明。
雅思写作分析：小众语言政府应考虑是否介入
今日学习主题
对小众语言政府应考虑是否介入
主题解读
一般出现问题时，不少同学会写到需要政府如何如何，但是并不意味着所有情况政府都需要采取措施，因此“当…时候，政府就需要决定是否…”这一表达在议论文写作中是非常实用的。
英文句子
When a minority language is only spoken by a few individuals, governments must choose whether to step in and spend money to save it.
当一种小众语言仅有很少人使用，政府必须选择是否介入并通过花费资金使其保存下来。
雅思写作语言点精讲
1. when引导的状语从句，重点关注“when…, governments must/should choose whether to …”这一表达方式
2. a minority language，表示“少数人使用的语言”，“少数民族语言”，“小众语言”
3. a few individuals 表示“一些人”，“没多少人”
4. step in 非常地道的表达，从字面来看就是“一步进去”的感觉，所以含义是“介入，干预”
5. spend money to save it，花费资金使其保存下来，这里的it指前文中的a minority language
今日练习
使用“when…, governments must/should choose whether to …”这一句型进行造句。
雅思写作分析：即将消失的语言投资拯救无济于事
今日学习主题
面对即将消失的语言，可能资金投入也无济于事
主题解读
这两句话属于标准的“给出现象+原因分析”的结构，使用的句型也是非常经典的，政府投入资金或许是挽救即将消失语言的一种方式，但语言的核心在于“use”这个词，由于日常生活中，小众语言不会经常被用到，因此继续存在会很困难。
英文句子
In most cases, the speakers of a dying language are so few that no amount of money can rescue it. The main reason is that their offspring will often have no inclination or desire to use the language, because a more dominant language like English or Mandarin Chinese will be more relevant.
大多数情况下，由于一种即将消失的语言使用者过少，即使再多资金投入也无济于事。主要原因在于下一代的人往往没有意愿使用这种语言，因为像英语和普通话这种更为主流的语言与他们的生活更加相关。
雅思写作语言点精讲
1. in most cases，表示“大多数情况下”，是说明某种现象时常用的表达
2. a dying language一种即将消失的语言，其中dying表示“即将die的”，补充：a dying tradition / a dying industry
3. be so + adj + that …, 太…以至于…，这个句型一般用来表示某种事物的“程度和结果”
4. no amount of money在这里就是“没钱”或者“钱不管用”的意思
5. the main reason is that 引导原因常用的句型，表示“主要原因在于”
6. offspring 后代
7. have no inclination or desire to do 此处inclination表示“倾向”，desire表示“意愿”，所以这一表达的含义是“没有意愿去做某件事”
8. a more dominant language 一种更具有主导地位的语言，dominant表示“主导的”，动词形式为dominate
9. English or Mandarin Chinese 英语和普通话，这算是使用人很多的语言了，也是比较常用的表达，口语和写作里要会用
10. relevant 表示“相关的，有关的”，把relevant用在这里属于非常地道的用法，指的是这些语言与我们的生活更相关一些。
今日练习
使用今天学到的“给出现象+原因分析”的结构造句，可以直接用In most cases, …. The main reason is that….
雅思写作分析：现象表明对环境的破环已经非常严重
今日学习主题
一些现象表明对环境的破环已经非常严重
主题解读
海洋及陆地环境的破坏和如此多物种的消失证明如今要弥补对环境的巨大损害已经为时过晚。
英文句子
The destruction of marine and land environments and the disappearance of so many species is proof that it is already too late to reverse much of the damage.
大多数情况下，由于一种即将消失的语言使用者过少，即使再多资金投入也无济于事。主要原因在于下一代的人往往没有意愿使用这种语言，因为像英语和普通话这种更为主流的语言与他们的生活更加相关。
雅思写作语言点精讲
1. destruction，破坏，动词形式为destruct
2. marine and land environments海洋和陆地环境
3. disappearance 消失，动词形式为disappear
4. species 物种，注意这类词汇只以复数形式出现
5. is proof that + 完整句子，这里的that之后引导完整句子，是同位语从句，也就是后面这句话是proof的内容，中文可以直接理解或者翻译为“证明…”
6. it is already too late to do，这句话中it为形式主语，真正的主语是to do的部分，因此表达的含义为“做某件事已经为时过晚”
7. reverse 扭转，逆转
8. the damage 这里需要注意the可以作为指代关系使用，因此这里的the damage指的是上文中提到的那些现象。
今日练习
整理5-10个关于环境破坏相关现象的表达，如文中出现的the disappearance of so many species等。
雅思写作分析：人口增长和购买力增强给自然界带来过大压力
今日学习主题
人口增长和购买力增强给自然界带来过大压力
主题解读
自然界出现的损害多数是由于人的行为造成的，其中人口增长和人们购买力以及需求的增加是很重要的原因，所以这一观点的表述是很常用的，另外需要说明这种行为的不可持续性，句中 non-sustainable和non-renewable都是环境类话题中常用的表示消极意义的形容词。
英文句子
As the world’s population grows and people’s spending power increases, our veracious appetite puts unrealistic pressure on the natural world. This practice is non-sustainable, as we are exploiting resources that are non-renewable.
随着世界人口的增长以及人们的购买力增强，我们本能的欲望给自然世界带来了超出寻常的压力。这种行为是无法持续的，因为我们正在使用无法再生的资源。
雅思写作语言点精讲
1. 开头使用as进行状语从句的引导是比较常见的写法，需要注意as后面的内容和主句之间在逻辑上需要非常契合
2. the world's population 世界人口
3. people's spending power 人们的购买力
4. grow和increase都表示“增长”，需要注意使用的准确性
5. veracious appetite，其中veracious表示“真实的”，appetite表示“食欲”，此处表示人们为自身考虑产生的那些需求和欲望，而这些需求并没有考虑到对生态环境的影响
6. unrealistic 不切实际的，不合理的
7. the natural world 自然界，大自然
8. this practice指的是“这种行为”，这里作为指代关系，与上句话形成句间的衔接。
9. non-sustainable 不可持续的
10. resources that are non-renewable 此处resources表示资源，之后的定语从句对resources进行修饰，其中non-renewable表示“无法再生的”，补充：renewable resources表示“可再生资源”
今日练习
仿照本句写一句话，说明人的行为对自然界造成的负面影响。
雅思写作分析：森林过度被伐，动植物失去栖息处
今日学习主题
森林被过度砍伐，使动植物失去天然的栖息之处
主题解读
森林被砍伐是经常用到的素材，这里补充了被砍伐之后的用途，即农业和采矿及城市发展，同时，要学会通过表示结果的句型来说明一种行为的危害。
英文句子
The world’s forests are being felled at an alarming rate, primarily for agricultural land but also for mining and urban growth. As a result, native animals and plants lose their natural habitats and face extinction.
森林正以惊人的速度被砍伐，它们主要被用于农业土地但同样用于采矿和城市发展。因此，那里的动物和植物失去了天然的栖息地而面临灭绝。
雅思写作语言点精讲
1. The world’s forests are being felled，森林被砍伐，这里的felled是fell的被动语态用法，fell表示“砍伐”
2. at an alarming rate，以一种惊人的速度
3. primarily，主要地，相当于mainly的含义
4. agricultural land 用于农业的土地
5. mining 采矿
6. urban growth 城市发展
7. as a result 结果，可以用在两句话之间用来表示句间衔接
8. native 当地的
9. natural habitat 天然的栖息地
10. extinction，灭绝，face extinction表示“面临灭绝”
今日练习
使用一种行为+As a result + 后果的结构造句。
雅思写作分析：人类行为不改变，动植物灭绝速度依然会增加
今日学习主题
如果人类行为不改变，动植物灭绝速度依然会增加
主题解读
环境问题很多时候会说到人类行为对生态系统的过度开发，可以从积极角度进行论证，也可以从消极角度表达观点，即事情已经到了难以挽回的地步。同时也经常使用假设的方式，来表达如果人的生活方式不改变，形势会继续恶化。
英文句子
It is sadly too late to reverse the calamitous consequences of manmade exploitation of the earth’s ecosystems. If our high-consumption lifestyle is maintained, the rate of animal and plant extinction will inevitably increase.
很遗憾如今弥补人类对地球生态系统进行开发造成的不幸后果已经为时过晚。如果我们继续保持高消耗的生活方式，那么不可避免地，动物和植物灭绝的速度依然会增加。
雅思写作语言点精讲
1. It is too late to do 做某事已经为时过完
2. reverse 扭转，逆转
3. calamitous 灾难的，不幸的
4. consequences 结果，一般用作“后果”，来强调消极的一面
5. manmade exploitation 人类进行的开发
6. the earth’s ecosystems 地球生态系统
7. high-consumption lifestyle 高消耗的生活方式
8. rate 比率，率
9. animal and plant extinction 动植物灭绝
10. inevitably 不可避免地
今日练习
写一个句子，可以从积极或消极的角度，来表述人类目前对环境破坏会造成的最终结果，可以写“人类blabla，情况会好起来”，也可以模仿本句，说明已经到了不可弥补的时候。
雅思写作分析：人际能力和专业能力哪个更重要
今日学习主题
人际能力和专业能力哪个更为重要
主题解读
这一话题涉及到工作中需要的各种素质、能力，以及ta们之间的比较，需要知道各种能力素质如何表达，并且能够熟练地使用比较关系。
英文句子
Interpersonal qualities are equally as important as, or sometimes even more important than academic or professional qualifications in some jobs. In other cases, the opposite is true.
在一些工作中，人际能力和学术或专业资质同样重要，甚至会更加重要。而在有些情况下，则是相反的。
雅思写作语言点精讲
1. interpersonal qualities 人际能力
2. equally 同样地
3. as important as 与...同样重要
4. even more important than 比...更重要
5. academic or professional qualifications 学术或专业资质
6. in other cases 在另一些情况下
7. the opposite is true 相反的情况
今日练习
使用比较关系as important as 和even more important than分别写一个句子
雅思写作提高--转变思维是唯一办法
如果说有什么方法可以提高雅思写作成绩，我想从根本上提高的唯一办法就是转变思维方式，也就是把中式思维向英式思维靠拢，只有这样才能符合雅思考官的喜好，才能得高分。本文中，将具体介绍一下中式思维和英式思维的区别，以及怎样才能写出更符合雅思考官要求的作文。
事实上，如果脑袋里有一个中文的概念或者想法，要用英文来表达的时候总是免不了紧张，因为由于中英两国的文化不同，很多东西无法表达----非常可能不是因为考生的语言问题，而是因为这个中国的概念在英文里面根本就不存在。有数字统计过中英两国语言的词汇量只有40%能互通(所谓的equivalent)，而这就意味着剩余的60%的表达肯定是和原文有很大出入的。
甚至很多我们生活中经常使用的语言，不假思索就能说出的概念，在英语文化里很可能根本就没有对应的表达，例如“热闹”这个词，考生们可以试试能否在英文单词中找到让你满意的对得上号的词。“这个地方很热闹”这句话，根据语境可以有不同的翻译，但是总体而言，“热闹”作为一个词来说，在英文里几乎是没有对应的。
正因为如此，我们才强调，写英语作文，说英语口语，要用英语思维，不要用中式思维。这对于很多人来说是个很空洞的概念，只有当你真正用英语与外国人交流的时候才会体会到英式思维的重要性。
这的确很难，因为我们在中式思维里面扎根的太深了。事实上，这也和两国语言本身的特点有关。鲁迅就说过，中文和外文比，吃亏就吃在不够精确，具体到单词水平，就是“词汇量少”。因为词汇量少，因此中文特别讲究“上下文”，一个模糊的词只有在一个特定的语境里面才能让读者感到一个特定的意思。
相比而言，英文在这方面就不是这样，具体的说，大部分英语词都是有着非常确定的意思的，因此，那些在中文里面需要联系上下文才能端倪出的细微差别，也许在英文里面只是另一个单词而已。记住这点，笔者下面所说的也许会对诸位有用，在这里，笔者提供一个方法，就是如果你脑袋中有一个想法的话，仔细想想你到底想精确说的是什么意思。比如，当你想说某一个命题错误的时候，你最好想清楚它到底错在哪里，“illogical, irresponsible, biased, prejudice, fallacy, untrue”这些词之间都有着或大或小的差别，所以主要想看你到底想说的是什么。
所以，诸位想锻炼写作的话，建议要做的第一样功课，就是求精细。只有你自己求精细了，才能发现报刊、书籍中对相近的概念的不同表达法的精妙之处，才会由衷地为某篇文章的一个用词会心一笑。写作就是思维表达的一种形式。西方人直线式的思维方式体现在语言上就是西方人说话写文章喜欢开门见山，把关键性的话放在开头，然后再论及其它次要的内容。
而写作涉及到语言的方方面面，从语言的结构上来说最基本的因素包括遣词、造句和篇章。螺旋与直入的思维差异就会影响到这些方面，具体包括修饰语与中心词、句子和篇章。
修饰语与中心词
英语的修饰语，如介词短语、动词不定式、分词、定语从句等皆放在被修饰语的后面;而汉语的修饰语无论长短、繁简，皆置于被修饰语的前面。体现了直入与螺旋的不同的思维方式。例如：
1. The scientists everywhere in the world are looking for the efficient methods to make the air clean and protect it from the pollution by all kinds of industrial harmful waste gases.
汉语“全世界的科学家”，修饰语在前，中心词在后，而英语则是中心词在前，修饰语在后。“净化空气、防止空气受到各种有害工业废气污染的有效方法”同样是修饰语在前，中心词在后，而英语则相反。
2. We appreciate your words about the relations between our two countries.
汉语“有关我们两国关系的谈话”，修饰语在前，中心词在后，而英语则是中心词在前，修饰语在后。“有关我们两国关系”，同样是修饰语在前，中心词在后，而英语则相反。
3. The hungry boy ate up everything he could have his hands on from the refrigerator.
“他从冰箱里所能拿到的吃的东西”，修饰语在前，中心词在后，而英语则是中心词在前，修饰语在后。
4. The problem arose of how to fairly distribute the world natural resources.
比较而言，该句主语太长，谓语太短，构成了不连续性修饰语，不过还是有些突兀，但修饰语还得后置。而汉语“怎样合理分配世界自然资然的问题”仍是修饰语在前，中心词在后。
句子
英语句子开门见山，其主谓结构是全句的“纲”，其余成份是“目”，一般先下结论，后叙事，从近到远，新近发生的事先出现，重心落在句首。汉语句子一般以逻辑关系和时间的先后顺序排列，一般先叙事，后下结论，由远及近，重心落在句尾。这种差异体现了直入与螺旋的不同的思维方式。
中国学生在英语写作时往往会受汉语思维的影响，写出下面的句子：
1. When I stayed in Guangzhou last month, you helped me. I am grateful for that.
2. Tom’s mother died when he was only two years old, so he did not remember her.
3. After we left China in 1959, the natural calamities happened one after another for three years in the country. While we read about it at home, we had been dismayed.
4. It looked rain that evening, yet Dad came all the same. That made us very joyful.
如果按英语直入的思维方式，以上几句要改写成：
1. I am very grateful for your help to me during my stay in Guangzhou last month.
2. Tom did not remember his mother who died when he was only two years old.
3. We had been dismayed at home while reading of the natural calamities that happened one after another for three years after we left China in 1959.
4. It looked rain that evening, yet to our great joy, Dad came all the same.
这种思维方式的转换要是更复杂一点，对中国学生来说，是需要操练的。例如：
1. 我认为如果他们初次相识时，她很穷，他未必会爱她。这位女性由于对他有好感而帮助他，使他心存感激，这种感激之情很容易发展成为真挚的爱情。
I do not suppose he would have loved her if she had been poor when he first knew her, but the gratitude which he felt for the help which he owed to her kindly interest in him easily developed into a sincere affection. (条件关系和多层因果关系的转换)
2. 她去深圳参加一个会议，会议结束后，她就到香港去购物，昨天才回来。
She came back yesterday from Hong Kong where she had gone shopping after the meeting in Shenzhen.(时间顺序的转换)
段落篇章
总体而言，英文篇章，一般都采用直线型的形式，尤其是说明文和议论文，更是一般——具体式的。英语篇章是a writer-responsible pattern, 即作者在篇章中有责任、有义务向读者交代其主旨或目的。为使读者省时高效，英语篇章开门见山，一开头就直接点明段落的主题句 (topic sentence) 或全文的中心思想 (thesis statement), 即亮明作者的观点、态度、看法等;或者以引言开门，即“首先用一个熟悉的事实、观点、故事、引言等开头，然后直接见到作者全文的观点思想”。
由以上分析可知，西方人的直线式思维和中国人的螺旋式思维存在明显的差异，体现在语言中，几乎渗透到语言的各个单位，包括词汇、句子、段落和全篇。当然，笔者无意说思维模式孰好孰坏，正如我们不能断言文化模式孰好孰坏一样。但作为学英语的中国人，学原汁原味的语言是我们要达到的最高境界。自然，这里的语言也应包括discourse或text。
因此考生们要知道，一种思维是一种文化长期的积淀，它已进入该民族的潜意识，根深蒂固，如果只学语言本身，不会知其所以然，一旦到了使用语言时，汉语思维自然突现，写出Chinglish, 浑然不知。此外，建议考生多背诵和模仿英语经典文章，如《新概念英语》第三册上的文章，笔者认为皆为语言的精华，不但文词优美，每课都是一篇范文，原汁原味，多读这样的文章，一定会有所启发。由此看来，老生常谈而又令人费解的“学会用英语思维”，倒不如换个说法——学会英汉思维转换，即懂得英汉思维的差异，在平时读书的时候去真实地领悟，久而久之，就能写出地道的英文来，至少不会写出那么多的Chinglish。
综上所述，想要取得雅思写作7分甚至更高的分数，单靠所谓的模板和复杂的句式是做不到的，只有从写作思维模式上进行改变，才有可能取得好的写作成绩。而中式思维的根深蒂固必定会对正确的英语写作思维产生阻力，因此，临摹英式思维的文章以及阅读海外学术著作对于转变写作思维有着至关重要的作用。
雅思写作分析：庆祝节日被认为是青年人需遵循的传统
今日学习主题
对一些职位而言，软技能比专业资质更重要
主题解读
职业类话题中，会涉及各种能力素质间的比较，这时候最需要的是把问题论述的明确而具体，不要泛泛而谈，今天的素材涉及不少可以用于“把事情说具体”的内容，同时也会学到一种举例论证的方式。
英文句子
There are a range of customer service and retail positions where soft skills are more valuable to an employer than qualifications. A waiter who can serve customers cheerfully, or a call centre representative who can solve a client’s problems tactfully are good examples.
中文翻译
对一些顾客服务和零售类职位而言，对雇主来说，软技能比资格证书更宝贵。很好的例子便是可以开心地为顾客提供服务的服务员，或者是可以巧妙地解决客户问题的呼叫服务中心代表。
语言点精讲
1. a range of 表示“一些，各种”，对于range而言，大家同样要掌握range ... from ...的结构
2. customer service 顾客服务，客户服务
3. retail positions 零售类职位
4. soft skills 软技能
5. be more valuable to 对...而言更加宝贵
6. cheerfully 开心地
7. a call centre representative 呼叫中心代表，注意representative表示“代表”
8. tactfully 巧妙地
9. ... are good examples 常用表达，可以在给出一个观点之后，下一句使用 ... are good examples来进行举例论证。
今日练习
造句练习，参考本句写一句表示“对一些职位，软技能比专业资质更重要”，并进行举例论证。
2. equally 同样地
3. as important as 与...同样重要
4. even more important than 比...更重要
5. academic or professional qualifications 学术或专业资质
6. in other cases 在另一些情况下
7. the opposite is true 相反的情况
今日练习
使用比较关系as important as 和even more important than分别写一个句子
雅思写作分析：擅长交流与合作的员工会获得更多工作机会
今日学习主题
擅长交流与合作的员工会获得更多工作机会
主题解读
工作场景下的合作、沟通能力是经常用到的素材，其中涉及的语料需要准备好。
英文句子
Positions that require teamwork and collaboration are also more successfully filled by socially adept employees. Many companies organise their workers into teams to complete projects. To work well within a team, each member has to be outgoing, a good communicator and able to work with others.
中文翻译
擅长社交的员工成功地占据了要求团队合作和协作的职位。很多公司组织他们的员工通过团队合作去完成项目。一个团队要工作的好，每一个员工需要是开朗友好，擅于交流，并能与他人一起工作的。
语言点精讲
1. positions 职位
2. teamwork and collaboration 合作
3. socially adept employees 擅长社交的员工
4. organise 组织
5. to complete projects 完成项目
6. outgoing 开朗有好的
7. a good communicator 擅于交流的人
8. able to work with others 能够与他人一起工作
今日练习
写2-3句话，说明沟通和协作等能力对工作的重要性。
雅思写作分析：社交能力对一些工作的成效没有影响
今日学习主题
对一些工作而言，社交能力对工作成效没有影响
主题解读
这类文章中，各种能力的“重要”与“不重要”都应该会表达，并且能够举出合适的例子。
英文句子
Some jobs call for high qualifications and few if any social skills. Some celebrated scientists, for example, tend to be unsociable, Their work is often carried out in isolation, so the ability to socialise has no impact on the efficacy of their work.
中文翻译
一些工作要求高资历，而对社会技能的要求少。比如，一些知名的科学家往往并不擅于社交。他们的工作通常是独立完成的，因此，社交能力对他们的工作的效率没有影响。
语言点精讲
1. call for 需要
2. high qualifications 高专业资质
3. if any，即使有的话，而之前的few表示否定含义，因此这里的few if any表示即使有也非常少
4. social skills 社交技能
5. celebrated 著名的
6. tend to 往往...
7. unsociable 不善社交的
8. carry out 执行，实现
9. in isolation 在孤独中，独立...
10. the ability to socialise 社交能力
11. impact 影响
12. efficacy 成效，效果
今日练习
仿照本句，写一两句话，说明对一些工作而言，社交能力并不重要
雅思写作分析：年轻人需要判断一种传统是否值得遵循
今日学习主题
年轻人需要判断一种传统是否值得遵循
主题解读
这里说到的是关于是否follow traditions of a society的话题，年轻人需要判断这种传统所代表的的价值取向，而不是简单地遵循或者拒绝一种tradition
英文句子
A young person needs to judge the value of a tradition for themselves to decide whether or not it is worth following.
中文翻译
年轻人需要评判一种社会传统所代表的价值取向，从而使自己决定是否值得遵循这一传统。
语言点精讲
1. a young person 年轻人
2. judge 评判
3. value 价值
4. tradition 传统
5. whether or not 是否...
6. be worth doing 值得做某事
今日练习
仿写一句话，说明你对于年轻人是否应当follow traditions of a society的观点
雅思写作语法讲解：宾语从句
宾语从句是雅思写作中非常常用的另一种句型。它一般用来提出观点。
以下的宾语从句句型在雅思写作中都常常用到。希望大家能认真掌握，灵活使用。
1 Some people think that
2 Some people believe that
3 Some people do believe that
4 Some people do strongly believe that
5 Some people hold that
6 Some people point out that
7 Some people insisit that
8 Some people maintain that
9 Some peopel argue that
10 Some people contend that
11 Some people deem that
12 Some peopel are convinced that
13 Some people are fully convinced that
14 Some people are firmly convinced that
15 Some people take it for granted that
16 We should admit that
17 Nobody can deny that
18 Some people agree that
19 Some people conclude that
20 Some people assert that
雅思写作语法错误分析 高频句型用好不容易
很多备考雅思写作的同学最爱用的高频句式，也是从小接触英语最开始的句型there be，可以说是人见人爱(虽然对考官来说，也许是人见人厌)，在各种话题，雅思大小作文中都通用的结构，可是，它也是很多烤鸭经常不注意就出错的陷阱地方。比如说，我们想表达“有好几个原因导致了这个结果。”，如果按照字面的意思直接翻译，很容易写成“There are several reasons lead to the result.”这样的句子。这样一来，我们会发现，这个句子中出现了双谓语： are和 lead。这种错误，我们可以通过提醒自己，在写there be句型时，be动词部分保持主谓一致，但其他的行为的描述我们去写非谓语或者从句。
也就是说，刚才错误的句子我们可以改成There are several reasons leading to the result. 或者There are several reasons which lead to the result.大家可以立刻尝试下，结合非谓语或者从句翻译下面的句子：“有一些公司允许员工在家工作。”
除了双谓语的这样的雅思写作高频错误外，很多同学在处理中文想说的比较长难的句子时候，也会直接翻译，而反映出中式英语或者很多语法错误，我们来看一个例子。“在生活中出现的问题可以解决，对未来有可能出现的麻烦进行规避。”你会怎么写这句话呢?曾经有同学写出过 “Life problems can solve， future trouble can prevent.”这样的翻译版本。各位同学如果仔细挑一挑错误，会发现，一个句子中出现了双主语，双谓语。那么，解决办法最简单的是把逗号变句号，写成两句话。或者进行相关的连接词的衔接，比如此句中可以加and来连接两个简单句。除了这个错误外，我们还会发现，问题自己怎么解决?麻烦自己怎么预防?所以，这种中文说起来像主动，但是在英语表达中我们实际上需要被动的翻译，是大家要去多注意和检查的雅思写作陷阱地方。如果对应中文直接翻译，就出现了多动词，语态不合理的问题了。所以这个句子应该改成Problems in life can be solved and trouble in future may be prevented.
所以说，很多在雅思写作中的语法错误其实是因为直接对应中文进行翻译而产生的，如果各位备考雅思的同学可以在写作的过程中多注意这些陷阱，就可以减少错误出现的几率直至避免。
雅思大作文7种写作误区实例解读 观点含蓄无人懂
请看雅思写作误区实例：
①it seems arbitrary to assume that older generation’s traditional ideas are not the right way in the present age.
②First of all, international travel requires more than just money, People generate prejudice to(against) a place for their lack of knowledge about it
再跟笔者提供的表达进行比较
①older generations' ideas so often still have their place in a modern world。
②people may build prejudice against a place on their ignorance of it during an international travel.
雅思写作的观点句要求清晰明了，开门见山是最基本的要义，不要玩任何拐弯抹角的文字游戏。一位考官指出中国考生的作文，最致命的问题就是在导入段开始，一是表达自己观点不清不楚;二是话题都没有读懂，一动笔已偏题。这样的作文，开头寥寥几句读完，考官就给你定好了分数段了。
开门见山的表达如何实现，其实很简单，用主动句，用主谓宾句型就可以了。
附雅思考官写作的导入段欣赏：开门见山最佳范例
①People have different views about how much choice students should have with regard to what they can study at university. While some argue that it would be better for students to be forced into certain key subject areas, I believe that everyone should be able to study the course of their choice.
②It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced films. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by subsidizing the industry.
雅思大作文7种写作误区实例解读 措辞武断惹人厌
请看一个雅思写作例子：There is no denying that encouraging industries or businesses walk out densely populated cities will diminish the inequality between urban and rural areas. But here is the thing, do we really keep the pros and avoid the cons via this attempt? The answer is obviously “no”, or otherwise we should be naturally born in balanced development society. In fact, I think that encouraging industries and businesses to move out the cities is an attempt of no point.
这段话里，有三处读了觉得不爽的地方：There is no denying that，obviously “no”，an attempt of no point。虽然这些表达展现出了作者十分的自信(我很欣赏)，但是是谁给你的这份自信可以这么决绝地表达。那我作为一个雅思写作考官，就不能deny了么?作为支持产业迁出大城市的一方，我的attempt就变成no point了么?我同这位作者进行了交流，原来他的这番决绝是事出有因的：其实我抓不太准写作的强硬度，之前被说观点不明确(因为题目通常正反两面都可我就都说一下)所以。。。大概是过犹不及现在只陈述单一方好像又太武断= =
感觉好为难啊。所以，作者为了让己方的观点更为明确，便如此用词。相信，这个用词的初衷是很多人都有的吧。我对他的答复是：在雅思写作中，你所说的观点不明朗和表达观点时的稳重，中肯一点都不矛盾。要有明显的立场，只需要你采取一边倒的论证方式就行。就算是在陈述反方立场时，你也要表明它的局限性。总之给予站方立场更多的话语权就行。但是表达观点时的中肯，是要杜绝absolutely之类表意极端而轻佻的用词，你的tone不要读起来很决绝(很非此即彼)，你是在用你的逻辑一字一句的说服别人，要有这种感觉。
在雅思大作文中，如何让自己的口吻更加温和，说理更加中肯?其实有一些常用的学术审慎语可供使用：
some most many/much a few/a little/sometimes usual/usually normally generally/in general on the whole/tend to/may might likely/likelihood probable/probably perhaps/maybe might as well
像大多数人在雅思写作时都容易中招的there is no denying/doubt that…是一个经典的粗暴句式，其实稍稍修改，它就会温和很多。试着读一读：there is little denying/doubt that…。如果要进一步软化的话，可以写成：there is arguably/probably little denying/doubt that…。
雅思大作文7种写作误区实例解读 语法错误最致命
还是看雅思写作实例，大家可以一起来找茬
Last but not least, those who lacks skills to deal with people and fails to control their emotions would more likely to form prejudice during their international travel. It is a common situation to get cheated by people there for the reason of ignorance of local situation. Necessarily, open-minded is required to deal with unjudged treatments. Otherwise the bad memories would not only affect the journey but lead to the prejudice towards all the citizens of the place.
再来看结果
Last but not least, those who lacks(lack) skills to deal with people and fails(fail) to control their emotions would (be)more likely to form prejudice during their international travel. It is a common situation to get cheated by people there for the reason of ignorance of local situation. Necessarily, open-minded(open-mindedness) is required to deal with unjudged(这个词是什么意思?unfair吧?)treatments. Otherwise the bad memories would not only affect the journey but lead to the prejudice towards all the citizens of the place.
语法和词汇是语言的两大基石。在雅思写作中，所有渴望高分的烤鸭无不希望能有一双让自己自由翱翔的翅膀。可是很多时候，语法基础的薄弱，让不少人在尝试复杂句型时频频出错，而另一方面，最基础的一些语法，如名词单复数，冠词，动词时态等又时常被很多人忽视，于是一篇用词屌屌，思路涛涛，自我感觉甚好的文章被打入6—的冷宫时，某些人可能还不知罪在何处。
因为有些逛外文论坛的经验，跟国内论坛进行，国人在遣词造句时，对语法的要求真的是很low，各种错字，错词，莫名其妙的表达层出不穷，而我们大都淡然。所以，这种随意也自然地在很多人的作文中得到了体现。学好语法，重视语法，只会让自己的雅思备考之路越走越宽。
雅思写作审题误区分析 以讨论性话题为例
首先我们来看一下Discuss问法的议论文都包含哪几类：
1) Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (C8T1)
2) Some people think international cooperation has brought benefits to worldwide environmental protection, while others believe more benefits have been brought to international business. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (.7.26)
3) Some people believe that technology has increased the gap between rich people and poor people, while others think it has opposite effects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (.1.10)
这三道雅思写作题目虽然都是Discuss类，但从Task Response角度分析，其立场选择并不相同，看看正确的雅思大作文审题方法：
1)题中，两个观点本身并不矛盾、可共存，那学生可以从以下三种立场中任选其一：
a). 家长负责，学校也负责
b). 家长学校均负责，家长负更大责任
c). 学校家长均负责，学校负更大责任
2)题中，题目中包含一个key word：more，这就要求学生在写作中倾向观点中的某一方，此时学生最好从以下两种立场中选择：
a). 对经济有益，但对环保更有益
b). 对环保有益，但对经济更有益
3)题中，所给定的两个观点彼此互相矛盾，类似于辩论赛，考生仅能从两种立场中选择：
a). 支持：扩大贫富差距
让步反驳：增加穷人收入，但与富人相差甚远
b). 支持：缩小贫富差距
让步反驳：收入差距并未缩小，只是生活水平差异弱化
下面我们将以上题目稍作变形，可以得到以下三道题目：
1). Some people believe that parents, rather than school, should teach children how to be good members of the society. To that extent do you agree or disagree? (C8T1变形题)
2). Some people believe that international cooperation has brought more benefits to international business than to worldwide environmental protection. To that extent do you agree or disagree? (2008.7.26变形题)
3). Some people believe that technology has increased the gap between the rich and the poor. To that extent do you agree or disagree? (2009.1.10变形题)
现在，三道雅思写作真题均由Discuss类变成了Agree类，但由于其中包含的信息量不变，因此写法上也不会产生本质区别，我们的立场选择也是一样的。学会雅思写作的审题，就是从最基本的题型判断开始。
g类雅思书信小作文范文 建议信：写给loacal council
雅思g类书信小作文话题
Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
为了消减开支，有关部门打算关闭一处体育休闲场所，对此你有一些意见和建议。
give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
explain why the centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
雅思g类书信小作文范文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to the proposed closure of the town's sports and leisure centre.
First, I would like to stress how important the centre is for my own family. My wife and I both use the gym on a daily basis, and our two children attend weekly gymnastics and football clubs, which they enjoy
immensely.
I also believe that the leisure centre is an integral part of the local community. It is where people go to do exercise, play sports, take part in group activities, and to socialise and make friends. It really is a social hub in the town.
If you do close the sports and leisure centre, the local residents will lose a treasured facility. As there are no other sports centres within a reasonable distance, the closure would have a detrimental effect on health and quality of life in the area.
I hope that you will take these concerns into consideration before making a decision.
Yours faithfully,
Paul Jones(168)
g类雅思书信小作文范文 表扬信：写给餐厅老板
雅思g类书信小作文话题
You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter
在某餐厅的朋友聚会，食物与服务都很满意，写信给该餐厅老板。
give details of your visit to the restaurant
explain the reason for the celebration
say what was good about the food and the service
雅思g类书信小作文范文
Dear Sir,
I am writing to thank you and your staff for making our celebration meal so special last Friday evening.
I made a booking for ten people at very short notice on Friday, and you managed to find us a table. When we made the spontaneous decision to eat out that evening, we were amazed to find a table for such a large group, and we could not have chosen a better restaurant.
The ten of us were celebrating our university graduation. The ceremony had taken place, and my friends and I were all so relieved to have finally received our degree certificates. Nobody wanted to go home, so I suggested that we find somewhere to have dinner together.
As soon as we walked into the restaurant, we knew that we were in good hands. Your waiters were extremely friendly and obliging, and the food was delicious. We were also impressed that both you and the head chef came to check that everyone was happy with their food.
All ten of us would like to thank you for giving us such a memorable
evening.
Yours faithfully,
Paul Jones(189)
雅思写作短期快速提高流程
雅思写作短期快速提高之写
要练习写雅思真题。雅思真题可以练剑桥雅思系列的。只有练了雅思真题才能对于雅思的出题思路和题目构成有清晰完整的了解。在练习的时候要注意应该在规定时间内完成。只有在有时间限制的压力下写作，考生才能在考试的时候发挥自如。在练习写作的时候也不一定非得要写完整的文章，有时候可以进行段落论证的写作。比如，专门花时间练一练开头段或结尾段的写作。有时把文章分解了写可以更能磨练写作技巧。有时候也可以专门练习某种论证手法的写作，甚至对于常用的句型可以进行造句练习。在练习频率上，基本应该保持两天写一篇以上。
雅思写作短期快速提高之读
如果只是一味埋头苦练的话，那只能提高写作速度而在写作水平上不一定会有长足的进步。只有看了好的文章，考生才会知道应该往哪方面努力以及自己的文章到底有什么不足。最重要的是要看考官写的例文，比如剑桥大学出的Cambridge IELTS 2以及Cambridge IELTS 3等。看的时候不要只看懂就行，而要着眼于三个方面：考官范文是如何提出观点并进行论证的，运用了哪些论证手法;范文是怎么安排段落的，段落之间以及句子之间是怎么连接在一起的，运用了哪些衔接手段;范文里有什么精彩的词、词组和句型是值得我们模仿的。如果考生能够举一反三，仔细思考并且适当借鉴的话，那么看一篇就会有一篇的受益。除了考官范文以外，其它的一些优秀范文也可以参考。各种精彩段落，包括雅思阅读文章里面的一些论证方法和有用表达也可以成为学习的对象。
雅思写作短期快速提高之改
雅思写作常见错误分析
中式英文
Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
Topic 2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.
观点模糊态度暧昧
Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
偏离主题
Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)
I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.
语法错误惨不忍睹
Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题)
About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.
过分简单没有重点
Topic-The importance of environmental protection
This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!
用词不当 表达不准
Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.
意思重复原地踏步
Topic-Your opinion on DINK families
My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.
中国俗语胡乱翻译
Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?
I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……
正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children
Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?
We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know,don’t know is don’t know”……
Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?
Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix,rat’s son can make hole……
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.
观点武断 态度强硬
Topic1-The importance of confidence
In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.
Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem
I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obeythe traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’msure there will be no traffic problem any more.
雅思写作需注意的10个核心准则
Elementary principles of composition
1. Make the paragraph the unit of composition: one paragraph to each topic
不同的段落构成文章，每个段落仅传递一个观点
2. As a rule, begin each paragraph with a topic sentence; end it in conformity with the beginning
规则：每个段落均以主题句开头，并且首尾呼应。
A. the topic sentence comes at or near the beginning;
主题句前置
B. the succeeding sentences explain or establish or develop the statement made in the topic sentence;
段落围绕主题句展开，后面的句子对主题句进行展开解释
C. the final sentence either emphasizes the thought of the topic sentence or states some important consequence.
末尾句或者对主题句进行强调，或者阐述主题句带来的结果。
3. Use the active voice
主动句永远比被动句直接有力
Eg: There were a great number of dead leaves lying on the ground
= Dead leaves covered the ground. (清晰生动)
Eg: The reason that he left college was that his health became impaired.
= Failing health compelled him to leave college. (简洁有力)
Eg: It was not long before he was very sorry that he had said what he had.
= He soon repented his words. (简洁有力)
4. Put statements in positive form
以肯定的形式表达否定的意思, 避免使用平淡、毫无色彩，犹豫不决和含糊其辞的语言。
Eg：He was not very often on time.
= He usually came late.
Eg: He did not think that studying Latin was much use.
= He thought the study of Latin useless.
Eg: The taming of the Shrew is rather weak in spots. Shakespeare does not portray Katharine as a very admirable character, nor does Bianca remain long in memory as an important character in Shakespeare’s works.
= The women in The Taming of the Shrew are unattractive. Katharine is disagreeable, Bianca insignificant.
5. Omit needless words
删除冗词
Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but that every word tell.
有力的写作一定简洁。
Owing to the fact that
=Since (because)
In spite of the fact that
=Though (although)
Call your attention to the fact that
=Remind you (notify you)
The fact that he had not succeeded
=His failure
6. Avoid a succession of loose sentences
别写流水账，找找语言的逻辑关系，通过who, which, when, where, and while 这些词把句子串起来。
7. Express co-ordinate ideas in similar form
Parallel structure平行结构讲究对称美：内容对等，结构一致。
Eg: Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method, while now the laboratory method is employed.
Parallel structure: Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method; now it is taught by the laboratory method.
8. Keep related words together
词的位置决定词的关系，所以遵循‘物以类聚’，意思关联紧密的词放在一块。
A: 主谓之间不分割，补充信息需前置
Eg: Wordsworth, in the fifth book of The Excursion, gives a minute description of this church.
Eg: In the fifth book of the Excursion, Wordsworth gives a minute description of this church. (状语前置，主谓毗邻)
B：关系代词紧随先行词出现
Eg: There was a look in his eye that boded mischief.
Eg: In his eye was a look that boded mischief. (名词look先行，关系词that紧随)
9. In summaries, keep to one tense
总结通常使用现在时态，如果使用过去时，请保持时态一致。
10. Place the emphatic words of a sentence at the end
欲擒故纵的圆周句(periodic sentence)中，强调信息后置。
Eg: Four centuries ago, Christopher Columbus, one of the Italian mariners whom the decline of their own republics had put at the service of the world and of adventure, seeking for Spain a westward passage to the Indies as setoff against the achievements of Portuguese discoverers, lighted on America.
Eg: With these hopes and in this belief I would urge you, laying aside all hindrance, thrusting away all private aims, to devote yourselves unswervingly and unflinchingly to the vigorous and successful prosecution of this war.
雅思作文：常用来表达看法与立场的英式短语&句型
Functional Expressions:
Expressing Thoughts and opinions
have mixed views on
(人们)各持不同的看法
实战例句
It has been around fifteen years since the Internet was first introduced into British households but people still have mixed views on whether it is a positive or negative influence on society.
从因特网第一次走进英国家庭到现在已经有将近十五年了，但人们至今关于网络对社会产生的影响究竟是积极的还是消极的仍然意见不一。
常见的反义短语或句型
reach consensus on...
(人们) 对某事达成一致意见
例句
I will be difficult for people to reach a consensus on this issue.
要让人们对这一事件达成统一的意见是十分困难的。
I take the view that..
我所持的看法是……
例句
I take the view that free education should be available to financially needy people.
我所持的看法是应该时那些财务紧张的人们提供免费的教育。
be of the opinion that...
(某人的) 个人意见是 (注意不能遗漏句型中的介词of)
例句
They are of the opinion that morality cannot be legislated.他们的意见是道德是不能由法律来规定的。
be a highly charged issue
是一个引起激辩的话题
实战例句
Euthanasia is a highly charged issue in many European countries.
安乐死在许多欧洲国家都是一个备受争议的话题。
常见的近义短语或句型
ignite fierce debate
引发了激烈的争论
例句
The song's lyrics ignited fierce debate last year.
这首歌的歌词在去年引发了激烈的争论。
be a well-established fact
(某事) 是为人们所共知的事实
例句
It is a well-established fact that very young children learn best by rote.
人们普遮公认低龄儿童更适合通过机械记忆来学习。
The tide of opinion is now running steadily against...
目前的观点普遍倾向于反对……
实战例句
The tide of opinion is now running steadily against the new traffic law.
目前人们的观点普遍倾向于反对新颁布的交通法。
常见近义短语或句型
The majority of people oppose…
多数人反对……
例句
The majority of people oppose the proposed tax reform.
对于提交上去的税制改革方案，多数人持反对意见。
It stands to reason that...
(某现象) 是符合常理的
实战例句
It stands to reason that a child who is constantly criticised will grow up to have no self-confidence.
一个在不断被挑剔的环境中长大的孩子，在成年后会变得毫无自信，这是符合常理的逻辑。
常见近义短语或句型
The concerns that... are well-justified.
对于某事的担心是完全合理的
例句
The concerns that the new law will curtail(削减)NGO (非政府组织)activities are well-justified.
人们关于新法规可能会减少非政府组织活动的担心是完全合理的。
It is an inescapable fact that...
是一个无法回避的事实
实战例句
It is an inescapable fact that some students behave badly and damage the learning environment.
有一些学生行为恶劣并且破坏学习气氛的问题是一个无法回避的事实。
常见近义短语或句型
be unavoidable
是不可避免的
例句
Many people feared that war was unavoidable.
许多人害怕战争最终还是会无可避免地来临。
... be noticeabie
(某种现象) 十分显著
实战例句
The differences between the British and American academic systems are noticeable.
英国和美国的学术体制差别十分显著。
常见近义短语或句型
...be substantial differences
某种差异是本质性的
例句
There were substantial differences in the proportion of men and women at various levels.
在不同的级别上，男女人数的比例有着本质性的差异。
The underlying cause of sth. is…
某现象的深层原因是……
实战例句
We should look into the underlying cause of this problem.
我们应该从更深一层去剖析这个问题的原因。
常用联想短语或句型
A fundamental mistake made by sb.is...
某人所犯的根本性错误是...
例句
Their fundamental mistake is to rely too much on technology.
他们所犯的根本性错误就是太过于依赖科技了
下次雅思写作中要表达立场或者看法的话，不愁没法下笔了吧~
对于那些基础不好的同学，语法上有很多错误的，或是要求分值不高的，像是只要5或是5.5，甚至更低的，笔者便给出了模板，当然所用的句型都是比较基础的，操作起来简洁，方便。
曾经有个考生在考场上题目没看懂，于是就干脆把模板原封不动的默上去，结果可想而知，分数很不理想，很显然，这位考生把模板当成是救命符了。而另一个考生(四十多岁，G类)合适恰当地运用了同样的模板，当然她的要求不高，只要考总分3.0。在给她的一对一课程中，笔者发现她单词几乎都不认识，而且记性很差，3.0这样的分数好像也特别奢侈。
笔者跟她详细讲解了辩论型和报告型模板的构架，把里面的词全都换成了和她的水平相当的。至于题目中的陌生单词，都给她准备了历年的真题来熟悉词汇，在最后的考试中她取得了写作5.5的分数，这样的分数对于她来说是想都不敢想的。不管怎么样，模板在对于她这样的学生来说，确实省力不少，而且更有自信心了。
现在还有一群大学生，基础不是特别扎实，但是因为要考研，所要的分数几乎都在6.5以上，对于这样的学生，笔者一般都是让他们一步步来，写作对于这样的基础来说，没有框架也是不行的。笔者的要求是先让他们按照框架模板把作文写顺了拿到5.5，然后再尝试脱离模板自己动手写作往6甚至6.5上靠。
对于基础较好的同学，笔者就不建议用模板了。上课的时候笔者只会大概讲个思路。这样反而不会束缚他们的创新的想法，当然如果出现了错误，笔者们也是会拿出来详细分析的。
去年有个学生裸考了两次，写作都是5，拿了作文给笔者看，笔者说按照你的水平，写作至少在6.5以上，但就是因为他是从网上弄的模板来说，束缚了他本身的水平，所以自然就吸引不了考官的眼球了。课堂上，笔者讲解了大致的思路，配合上他的努力，在第三次的考试中拿到了写作单科7.5的高分，可以说是个非常大的跨越。.
雅思写作话题预测：禁止儿童广告
Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
雅思写作题目讲解
作为广告类话题，这一类agree/disagree题型不属于二元对立题，而是出现了极端表达 “should be banned”。那么针对这种题型的写法，我们一般是打“极端表达”这个店。比如此题我们的写作思路就可以整理成为：一些广告缺失存在负面效应，如虚假广告或者一些传播负面思想或行为的广告，但是并不能因为这一部分广告的存在就否定整个广告产业，我们需要做的是如何有效地去监管以及规制这些广告。另外，审题时还要注意的一点就是题目中所关注的人群，即小孩。那么针对小孩这个群体，他们有一些自身的特点，如自身发展不成熟，易受影响等。
雅思写作大作文范文：
Advertising has been considered as an effective way to boost the sales of advertised products, which is widely used in diverse areas. However, some side effects produced by the advertisements especially those directed at children have aroused the concern among the public. From my perspective, these advertisements should be strictly regulated rather than banned.
It is undeniable that advertisements can inform consumers about new products and services, which helps children and parents make informed choices. The advertising campaigns not only allow consumers to get to know a variety of alternative goods, but also the distinctive features of each brand, hence children or their parents can make a comparison of those products and purchase the ones in need. Apart from that, advertising is an important source of entertainment which gives children a lot of fun. As many advertisements shown on TV are both educational and attractive to children, they can gain many benefits while watching. For example, those funny cartoon characters can teach children to dance or sing.
On the other hand, some negative influences should also be taken into consideration. Due to the fact that children have not developed physically and mentally to a full extent, they can be easily swayed by advertising. If the advertisements contain some misleading information, children may not have the ability to distinguish right from wrong, and consider the information or the specific action to be acceptable. Meanwhile, some of the advertisements can be deceptive. In order to pursue profits to a larger extent, some companies may deliberately exaggerate the advantages of their products and hide those potential risks. As a result, children may pester their parents to buy these products which turn out to be not exactly the same.
To summarize, children-aimed advertisements can bring both positive and negative effects. Instead of banning them, the government can attach tighter regulations in the procedure of examination and approval. At the same time, parents should take the responsibility of guiding children when the false advertisements occur.
[模板无罪]5步创出专属的雅思写作模板
1.雅思写作模板之结构
条理清楚，最好一个段落表达一个意思，段落宜适中，不宜太长。针对IELTS250字，
可如此分配：para 1: introduction: state the fact, and show ur standpoint.(for or against, better both)
para 2: key sentence+support evidence (for)
para 3: key sentence+support evidence (against)
para 4: conclusion
根据你的ideas，for / against，可以多写一段，写出两个for or 两个against, 表明你更倾向于哪一方面。
在表达观点时，要记住一点，should之类不应用得太多，因为你是在阐述一个观点，这是主观的，不要太绝对，如果换作是中文，你一讲就是“你应该怎么样”? 读者会觉得，你在强迫他接受你的观点，可以用一些be likely to or may/might。
2.雅思写作模板之连词，副词和短语的运用
在有清晰的结构之后，要有连词把各个段落有机联结在一起，还在有段中，句与句之间的连接。副词来增强形容词与动词的表现力;另外不必一定要使用复杂的词汇，真正地道的英文，短语用得非常多。
比如连词：hence
副词：dramatically
短词：be likely to
3.雅思写作模板之简单，复杂句的并用
如果一篇文章一看没几个“，”，几乎全是复杂句，显得很有水准，但reader-friendly? 每段的中心句可用复杂句。
4.雅思写作模板之语法
语法错误是难免的，但要尽量不要犯一些低级的，比如单复数，还有最易错的是怎样运“the”.还有不要把did not 缩成didn't.
5.雅思写作模板之用词的多样性
常用的单词可多记几个同义词，这样在文章中读起来更舒服些。比如可能,may,perhaps,be likely to 因此hence, thus, consequently, as a result. 重要important vital crucial
整理一下我自己认为重要的一些词与短语，相信对写作有所帮助
burning question 目前急待解决的问题，最吸引人的问题，可用于第一段，亦可用pay attention to, attract .... , raise ... concern
完全地 altogether , completely, pure and simple(完全的)
基本上 by and large
全面地 across-the board
全面的 comprehensive
许多：a plethora of (opportunities)=a large number of 不可能数用a large amout of
scads of , dozens of ，the bulk of
几个：a couple of =several
唯一而不可缺少的 unique and indispensable
不可避免的 inevitable = unavoidable，Unpalatable fact 不如人意的事实
Peter out 慢慢消失fade away 逐渐减弱Play a pivotal role = vital 关键的= important
from the minuscule low to the majestic high 从最低到最高Expedite = speed up = accelerate 加速
Tackle (fix, deal with, handle, solve) the problem(issue) 解决，处理问题
better off,更好，eg. It is better off taking a rest. 休息一下会更好。
归因于Ascribe to = attribute to，由于 by virtue of = due to = thanks to 接名词+ 从句 because = inasmuch as
在考试中的发挥，可能写不出平时练习的写作水平，因为时间紧迫再加上考试的压力，所以，还是建议写四段。
★ 雅思写作模板
★ 雅思写作短语
★ 雅思写作真题
★ 雅思写作怎么学好
★ 雅思写作素材名言
★ 雅思写作高分技巧
