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雅思写作考官9分范文：工作满意度
As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
工作满意度的影响因素，期望所有的劳动者都满意现实么?
剑雅考官参考范文：
Nowadays many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high. So feelings about one’s job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole, and because of this, job satisfaction is indeed very important for the wellbeing of that person.
Employees get job satisfaction in a number of ways. Firstly, a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work, so positive feedback from superior is very important in his respect. A sense of fulfillment is also encouraged if a worker feels the job is worth doing because it contributes to the society or the economy as a whole. Secondly, when someone feels they are improving or developing their skills through training opportunities, for example, then there is a sense of progress and purpose that rewards a worker. The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to job satisfaction because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives. Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for the loyal to a team.
Of course not everyone enjoys their work. Hard economic realities mean that many people have little choice in the kind of job they can get. In some cases an employee is working in a job that suits neither their skills nor their personality. Some jobs are repetitive and boring, and labor relations may be poor and lead to resentment and insecurity rather than to job satisfaction.
However, even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in their work, I think it is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job. If the factors identified above implemented, then any job can be improved and more workers can feel greater degrees of job satisfaction.(303words)
雅思技巧：雅思写作技巧之如何突出句子重点
有效的句子要有重点，并且要突出重点。
句子的重点可以通过下列方法，加以突出：
1. 把重点摆在句首或句尾。
一般而论，最显眼的位置是在“句尾，其次是在句首，中间的位置最平淡，乏善可陈。例如：
(1) Incorrect grammar and improper construction invariably distract readers'attention.
(2) The history of vocabulary is, in many ways, the record of civilisation.
把重点放在句尾是种“吊胃口”的方法，读者或听者非得读完或听完整句不可。
2. 在复杂句里，把主句放在从句之后。
除了名词从句和形容词从句之外，因为它们位置较固定，副词从句中有几种的位置灵活，可以在主句之前出现，
也可以跟在主句之后。通常我们就把这样的副词从句提前，重点则放在后头的主句，如(3b)：
(3a) I came upon an old classmate when I went to town yesterday.
(3b) When I went to town yesterday, I came upon an old classmate.
副词短语更是如此，如 (4b):
(4a) Steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools because of its durability.
(4b) Beacuse of its durability, steel is commonly used to make knives,razers and other useful tools.
3. 把较重要或有分量的词语放在后头，如(5b)和(6b)：
(5a) I was delighted and amused by the classical opera
(5b) I was amused and delighted by the classical opera.
(6a) That singer's life was tragic and brief.
(6b) That singer's life was brief and tragic.
4. 把句子中一系列的项目作逻辑性的排列。例如：
(7) Tony ate his dinner, watched TV, and then went to bed.
(8) Were you bored with years of study in elementary school, high school and institute of higher education?
5. 必要时，重复重要的语词或概念。
例如：
(9) Jackie enjoys the company of ladies. He likes their beauty, he likes their delicacy, he likes their vivacity,
and he likes their silence.
(10) ...the land stretched out without names. Nameless headlands split the surf; nameless lakes reflected the
nameless mountains and nameless rivers flowed through nameless valleys and nameless bays.
6. 尽量用主动说态，因此(11b)比(11a)好：
(11a) A pedestrian was struck on the head by a flying stone.
(11b) A flying stone struck a pedestrian on the head.
7. 适当时候，可用倒装句和平行句，如：
(12) Seven dwarfs lived here in the centre of the dark forest. → Here, in the centre of the dark forest
lived seven dwarfs.
(13) Severity breeds fear; roughness breeds hatred.
(14) Honesty recommends that I speak; self-interest demands that I remain silent.
雅思技巧：雅思写作的有效备考建议
一、雅思写作备考前期：
单词是一篇文章的最小单位，所以对于词汇的掌握是很有必要的。但是在词汇准备的过程中，要注意以下两个问题：
A. 雅思写作对单词量的要求在4000-6000左右，换句话说考生掌握了相当于大学英语六级或以上的词汇水平，就足以应对雅思写作考试了。
B. 对于写作词汇而言，量只是一个最基础的需求，不要盲目地背诵单词，更多的要关注词的应用，比如词组的搭配、词性的辨别和词意的辨析等，为以后写出正确的句子打好基础。
建议考生背词汇时要注意以下几个方面：
l 注意单词的词性，以及不同词性所代表的不同意思;
l 注意动词词组的搭配;
l 多看例句;
l 注意单词的英文解释;
l 注意单词的同义和反义替换
二、雅思写作备考初期：
考生们要注意，语法好是写作会变好的一个前提，但并不是会让写作拿高分的必要因素，句型多样化的灵活运用更为重要。好的句子是好文章的基础，考生要保证句子的准确性，灵活运用句子的多样化。基础薄弱的考生一定要练习写出正确无误的句子，在此基础上，尝试不同句式结构的替换。多多背诵一些与雅思写作相关的句子，这样在以后的雅思写作中才能熟练地用英文表达出自己的想法和观点。基础较好的考生，要注意句子的灵活运用，不要简单的认为写长句就能拿高分，用复杂句就能拿高分。有一些考生特别喜欢用定语从句，写出来的句子效果却是让考官很无语的：
例如：The public should take some actions to deal with the environment which is fragile.
上面这个定语从句用的没有太大作用，可以直接将形容词fragile放到environment前面。
三、雅思写作备考中期：
在词汇和句子之后，就要开始写文章了。但是不能过于着急，还有另外一个很重要的环节是连接词的运用，这是一个穿针引线的过程。这里，小编提醒各位考生，一定要弄清楚所用连接词的意思和作用。方法可以看相关的例句或者范文，也可以看一些适合自己的英文文章。很多情况下，考生用了一个表示转折逻辑关系的词语，但是前后语句的语义关系却看不出有转折关系。在练习初期，可以把相同话题的句子用恰当的连接词按合理的逻辑关系串联起来。建议考生可以参照类似话题的范文研究和学习其中观点句和连接词的运用。
另一方面，考生在这个时期要关注雅思写作考试的话题趋势，找一些相关的话题进行练习，练习时要注意句子的运用和段落内外的逻辑关系。
四、雅思写作备考后期：
这是最后的冲刺阶段，面对题目繁多的写作题库，考生不可能把考过的每一个话题都写一遍。因此，小编建议考生要将写作话题有类别的进行复习。话题与话题之间本就存在一些直接或间接的联系，这样做的好处在于无论考官出什么样的写作考题，我们都可以应对自如。在此基础上，随时关注写作考题方向的变化，有目标、有重点的针对重要话题进行分析和考前练习，并对自己写的文章进行再次推敲和修改。
此外，需要特别注意的是，不要跑题。看范文时，除了学习一些好的词汇和句子，范文中的论点和论据也有参考价值。
最后，雅思写作需要充分的准备，考生可以根据自己的问题在任意阶段加强学习和练习。当然，练习写文章也不是写得越多越好，要不断的修改，不断的推敲自己写的文章。最好是能找老师修改，老师可以指出问题所在，帮助考生有效的修正并得到提高。雅思写作备考是一个艰苦的过程，但是只要我们有了良好的写作基础，在考前做好充分的准备，就一定会达到考生预期的目标!
雅思技巧：雅思写作短期冲刺三步走
第一：写
要练习写雅思真题。雅思真题可以练剑桥雅思系列的。只有练了雅思真题才能对于雅思的出题思路和题目构成有清晰完整的了解。在练习的时候要注意应该在规定时间内完成。只有在有时间限制的压力下写作，考生才能在考试的时候发挥自如。在练习写作的时候也不一定非得要写完整的文章，有时候可以进行段落论证的写作。比如，专门花时间练一练开头段或结尾段的写作。有时把文章分解了写可以更能磨练写作技巧。有时候也可以专门练习某种论证手法的写作，甚至对于常用的句型可以进行造句练习。在练习频率上，基本应该保持两天写一篇以上。
第二：读
如果只是一味埋头苦练的话，那只能提高写作速度而在写作水平上不一定会有长足的进步。只有看了好的文章，考生才会知道应该往哪方面努力以及自己的文章到底有什么不足。最重要的是要看考官写的例文，比如剑桥大学出的CambridgeIELTS2以及CambridgeIELTS3等。看的时候不要只看懂就行，而要着眼于三个方面：考官范文是如何提出观点并进行论证的，运用了哪些论证手法;范文是怎么安排段落的，段落之间以及句子之间是怎么连接在一起的，运用了哪些衔接手段;范文里有什么精彩的词、词组和句型是值得我们模仿的。如果考生能够举一反三，仔细思考并且适当借鉴的话，那么看一篇就会有一篇的受益。除了考官范文以外，其它的一些优秀范文也可以参考。各种精彩段落，包括雅思阅读文章里面的一些论证方法和有用表达也可以成为学习的对象。
第三：改
有时候考生越看范文会越觉得郁闷甚至沮丧，因为发现自己的低水平文章和高分作文之间似乎存在着不可逾越的巨大鸿沟。要想跨越这条鸿沟，弥补其中的差距，关键在多修改。考生应该自己先在规定时间内完成作文，然后对照范文，看看自己作文中存在的问题。有没有审题错误?结构是否混乱?有没有表达不清的地方?然后仔细琢磨一下，范文是怎么展开论证的?看数遍范文以后可以试着根据刚才学习范文的体会和收获来修改自己原先写过的文章，把论证不够充分的地方重新论证一下，关联不当的地方修补一下，错误表达改正过来。当然，如果能够有老师的指导，效果会更好。这样，练一篇，看一篇，改一遍。写一次就会有一次的收获。
题目：The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
参考范文：
It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten.
On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the ‘rules’ around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.
On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world. For example, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally, I believe that young people would lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighbourliness.
In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.
9分考官级雅思大作文范文之罪犯用经历教育青少年
题目：Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?已走回正途的前牢友是教育孩子预防犯罪的好方法，同意与否。精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。烤鸭加油。
范文：
It is true that ex-prisoners can become normal, productive members of society. I completely agree with the idea that allowing such people to speak to teenagers about their experiences is the best way to discourage them from breaking the law.
In my opinion, teenagers are more likely to accept advice from someone who can speak from experience. Reformed offenders can tell young people about how they became involved in crime, the dangers of a criminal lifestyle, and what life in prison is really like. They can also dispel any ideas that teenagers may have about criminals leading glamorous lives. While adolescents are often indifferent to the guidance given by older people, I imagine that most of them would be extremely keen to hear the stories of an ex-offender. The vivid and perhaps shocking nature of these stories is likely to have a powerful impact.
The alternatives to using reformed criminals to educate teenagers about crime would be much less effective. One option would be for police officers to visit schools and talk to young people. This could be useful in terms of informing teens about what happens to lawbreakers when they are caught, but young people are often reluctant to take advice from figures of authority. A second option would be for school teachers to speak to their students about crime, but I doubt that students would see teachers as credible sources of information about this topic. Finally, educational films might be informative, but there would be no opportunity for young people to interact and ask questions.
In conclusion, I fully support the view that people who have turned their lives around after serving a prison sentence could help to deter teenagers from committing crimes.
(287 words, band 9)
9分考官级雅思大作文范文之企业社会责任
本文为大家带来雅思写作范文，题目是As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?除了赚钱，企业还有相应的社会责任，同意与否。精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。烤鸭加油。
范文：
Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the social obligations that companies have. I completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more for society than simply make money.
On the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in a competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as employees’ wages and payments for buildings and utilities. On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company is unable to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health.
On the other hand, companies should not be run with the sole aim of maximising profit; they have a wider role to play in society. One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects or education initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to minimise their tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system.
In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.
(285 words, band 9)
9分考官级雅思大作文范文之保护野生动物是浪费
本文为大家带来雅思写作范文，题目是Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?在当世，保护野生动物纯属浪费钱财。同意与否。精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。烤鸭加油。
范文：
Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with this point of view.
In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no place in the 21st century. I do not believe that planet Earth exists only for the benefit of humans, and there is nothing special about this particular century that means that we suddenly have the right to allow or encourage the extinction of any species. Furthermore, there is no compelling reason why we should let animals die out. We do not need to exploit or destroy every last square metre of land in order to feed or accommodate the world’s population. There is plenty of room for us to exist side by side with wild animals, and this should be our aim.
I also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources. It is usually the protection of natural habitats that ensures the survival of wild animals, and most scientists agree that these habitats are also crucial for human survival. For example, rainforests produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the Earth’s climate. If we destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet would far outweigh the costs of conservation. By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth.
In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.
(269 words, band 9)
9分考官级雅思大作文范文之外国游客是否应额外收费
本文为大家带来雅思写作范文，题目是Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?外国游客游览旅游景点应该额外收费。同意与否?精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。烤鸭加油。
范文：
It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be charged more than local residents to visit important sites and monuments. I completely disagree with this idea.
The argument in favour of higher prices for foreign tourists would be that cultural or historical attractions often depend on state subsidies to keep them going, which means that the resident population already pays money to these sites through the tax system. However, I believe this to be a very shortsighted view. Foreign tourists contribute to the economy of the host country with the money they spend on a wide range of goods and services, including food, souvenirs, accommodation and travel. The governments and inhabitants of every country should be happy to subsidise important tourist sites and encourage people from the rest of the world to visit them.
If travellers realised that they would have to pay more to visit historical and cultural attractions in a particular nation, they would perhaps decide not to go to that country on holiday. To take the UK as an example, the tourism industry and many related jobs rely on visitors coming to the country to see places like Windsor Castle or Saint Paul’s Cathedral. These two sites charge the same price regardless of nationality, and this helps to promote the nation’s cultural heritage. If overseas tourists stopped coming due to higher prices, there would be a risk of insufficient funding for the maintenance of these important buildings.
In conclusion, I believe that every effort should be made to attract tourists from overseas, and it would be counterproductive to make them pay more than local residents.
(269 words, band 9)
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think the university education is to prepare students for employment, others think it has other functions. Discuss and say what the other functions are?
You should write at least 250 words.
You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Some people think the university education is to prepare students for employment. While we admit that preparation for employment is an important function of education, it is not the only one. We should see this issue with an all-sided view. In the perspective of society, education is for improvement. Students make use of what they have learned to create new theories and tools. This is the way in which our human society develops. And also, through education, government can teach people how to be appropriate citizens, thus in this way, people’s moralities and behaviors are constrained in a value system and the social stability can be maintained.
In the perspective of individuals, education can enrich personal lives. Through education, we can explore different cultures and customs. Thus in this way education can open our eyes and broaden our mind. And education can also meet interests of each student.
While of course, all the functions mentioned above have one common prerequisite: one can make a living in the first place. For this society is practical, many university students have studied for four years, but their ability to deal with practical things is too low to be acceptable. So education should provide the basic general knowledge to university students, so that they can be get employed and make a living. And if a nation wants to develop and to compete with other nations, it needs skilled workers to support economic development and to maintain the people creative, which can only be achieved through education.
So it has some sense to realize that students’ preparation for employment is the function of education, but it has far more function which should not be neglected. (280 words)
雅思写作9分范文：old people
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Should old people stay at home or be placed in nursing homes?
You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Parents have devoted all their lives and energy to their children and when they are old, it is time for their children to repay their care and love. Therefore, it seems that it should be the children’s responsibility to take good care of their parents in their later years. However, I believe that a better way of ensuring that aged parents lead a happy and healthy life is to put them in nursing homes.
Living in nursing homes, they have more opportunities to communicate with their peers. Keeping each other’s company, they don’t feel lonely and can do a great deal of things together, such as morning exercise, playing games, and exchanging memories and stories from their past. On the other hand, if they live at home, they are often left alone when their children and grandchildren are away working or studying.
In such retirement homes, aging people can receive intensive medical care from professional doctors. Besides, they can receive a proper diet prepared by dieticians to meet their individual requirements. This is especially good for those old people in poor health. Moreover, they could have regular medical check-ups so that any disease could be diagnosed in its early stage. What is the most beneficial is that if any disease strikes them, medical services are immediately available.
Indeed, there are also benefits for children’s work and study when nursing homes take over the task of caring for the elderly. Children, free from care, can devote themselves to work or study and achieve more success.
Since nursing homes benefits seniors and other family members so much, I believe that old people should be sent to nursing homes. (276 words)
雅思写作9分范文：children with poverty
Children who are brought up in families which have not great amount of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children are brought up by wealthy parents. Do you agree or disagree?
Among the factors that influence a child’s development, family financial background is a critical one. Empirically kids from rich families, after entering adulthood, deal with problems differently from those from less well-off households. Generally the latter is more capable of problem-solving.
Lack of wealth in a family usually helps children to become independent and responsible individuals. Rich kids have more toys. If a toy truck gets broken, parents would buy their children another fancier, more expensive one. Rich kids go the best school in the neighborhood. On the contrary, children from an ordinary family have to take good care of their toys. Their parents are often busy with work. So children have chances to make many of their own decisions. Many kids babysit younger brothers or sisters or even take small part-time jobs to help the family. Such differences in the upbringing often tough them for adult life.
Children from less affluent families learn about competition early in life. For example, they go to a good school only because they have excellent grades, not because daddy donates a building for the school. Hard work and constant trying are the only way to change their life. So they fight to be a winner. But rich kids are so over-protected by their families that they hardly know the harsh world until they leave college and start to work. There are more successful entrepreneurs, actors, doctors, and lawyers from poor families than from rich ones. Poor kids know how to survive in the big wild world better than their rich friends.
But there are cases in which children from rich families have grown up to be very smart, accomplished individuals. Many of them even start businesses independent from their families. But still most of them know more about having fun than about being a good working professional.
To sum up, less privileged family background generally enables children to be more responsible and independent. Poor kids value hard work more, handle competition better than rich kids, and cope with problems better after becoming adults.
这篇雅思写作范文的写作思路：文章着重讨论贫富不同家庭出身的孩子在成年以后解决问题能力也不同，普通家庭出身的孩子此方面能力更强。
态度：同意
论点一：Lack of wealth in a family usually helps children to become independent and responsible individuals.
论据：对待玩具的不同---more responsible，对待学习的不同-----more independent，帮助家庭工作---more responsible and independent
论点二：Children from less affluent families learn about competition early in life.
论据：普通人家出身孩子对待改变人生的态度和出身富家孩子的对比
让步段论点：But there are cases in which children from rich families have grown up to be very smart, accomplished individuals.
结论：总结之前的提到的主要观点
总结：这篇文章需要考生会设身处地考虑出身不同的孩子长大后如何用不同的方式态度对待生活中问题。在考试或者练习写作的时候尽量学会使用生活中普通的例子说明支持自己的观点。
雅思写作9分范文：animal experiment
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Should experiments be conducted on animals for the benefit of human beings?
You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Every day, thousands of people are saved from painful diseases and death by powerful medical drugs and treatments. This incredible gift of medicine would not be possible without animal testing. Despite these overwhelming benefits, however, some people are calling for animal testing to be banned because of alleged cruelty. This essay will examine arguments for and against animal testing.
Those against the use of animal testing claim that it is inhumane to use animals in experiments. I disagree completely. It would be much more inhumane to test new drugs on children or adults. Even if it were possible, it would also take much longer to see potential effects, because of the length of time we live compared to laboratory animals such as rats or rabbits.
Opponents of animal testing also claim that the results are not applicable to humans. This may be partly true. Some drugs have had to be withdrawn, despite testing. However, we simply do not have alternative methods of testing. Computer models are not advanced enough, and testing on plants is much less applicable to humans than tests on animals such as monkeys. Until we have a better system, we must use animal testing.
A further point often raised against animal testing is that it is cruel. Some of the tests certainly seem painful, but the great majority of people on this planet eat meat or wear leather without any guilt. Where is their sympathy for animals? Furthermore, animals clearly do not feel the same way as humans, and scientists are careful to minimize stress in the animals, since this would damage their research.
I agree that we need to make sure that animals who are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways.(311 words)
雅思写作9分范文：affect of advertisement
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people believe commodities that are popular among consumers reflect the power of advertisement rather than the real needs of people. Do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Whether we like it or not, advertisement has been pouring into our daily life. They are so powerful that some people believe that it is not the needs of people but the power advertisement that makes commodities popular. Personally I don’t agree with this opinion.
First, let’s make clear what the real needs of people are. Real needs can be divided into two categories: the material satisfaction and spiritual satisfaction. People tend to regard material satisfaction as real needs and spiritual satisfaction as waste of money and time. This is not true. Some commodities may not be useful but they can give the owner a kind of satisfaction.
Second, let’s make clear the reason why advertisement is powerful. The key principle of advertisers is to grasp the needs of consumers, then pass the potential consumers the information that their commodities can meet your need. Advertisers can promote the needs of people, exploit the needs or even produce the needs of people. But whatever they do, it will be based on the needs of people.
But there are some advertisements that exaggerate the functions of the commodities to tell the wrong information to consumers. They make the commodities popular by cheating the majority of consumers. And also there are some commodities that do harm to the health of consumers and to the society. For example, smoking is poisonous, but the advertisements try to make a heroic image of the smokers, as the result smoking is popular among young men who are dreaming to become heroes in women’s eyes. But such advertisements are minorities.
In summary, advertisements bring us convenience to choose the commodities that can meet our needs. Most of the commodities are popular due to their usefulness, only some of them are due to the influence of advertisement.(298 words)
You should say:
1.who this person is
2.how you know this person
3.where this person travels to
4.and explain why this person likes to travel by plane.
参考范文：
I think this person would be my father who is an engineer. Due to his work, he has got loads of clients to the big cities such as Shanghai, Hangzhou and Guangzhou, and even in other countries. And almost two-third of the time in a month, he is on business trip to meet clients, attend meetings and tackle some severe problems. That’s why he has travelled a lot especially by air to different places.
I feel that as for a businessman, taking the airplane would save him much time and he is able to finish his work with high efficiency. Sometimes the price of a flight ticket can be negligible if he successfully make orders with clients. Also, the service on the plane is much better than that on the train. The flight attendance will offer various beverages and food, and the passengers can even ask for free blankets and back cushion. The passengers on the plane are not as many as that on the train, which makes the plane a cozy place for relaxation. My father always tells me that the quietness on the plane makes it possible for him to take a rest between the two cities. I think that’s the main reason why he insists on taking planes for business trip.
雅思口语part2话题考官9分范文学习:person in the news
You should say:
who he or she is
what this person shows up on TV
how you know this person and explain why you want to meet them.
参考答案：
I would say that I’d like to meet the incredibly famous Chinese pop singer, Jay Chou, whom is often seen in the entertainment channel on TV. He grew up in a single-parent family. When he was a little boy Jay didn’t get good grades at school.
His mother was really concerned about him, but he just looked on the bright side. When he felt down or lonely, he always looked for nice music to cheer him up. I firstly knew him in when he released his first album “Jay”, in which his soft voice was so unique and this album turned out to be an instant hit. I was really impressed by his voice, talent and versatility in music.
His music is always original, and sometimes blends with different genres, like R&B, hip-hop, and folk music. That’s why I simply adore him and just want to meet him in person. It seemed like he was really into giving his songs some traditional Chinese appeal, like he did in “The Porcelain”.
雅思口语part2话题考官9分范文:a person you admire
一个敬仰的人
Describe a person you admire.
You should say:
who the person is
what he or she is like
and why you admire him or her.
参考范文：
I'm going to talk about my father because he has been a major influence in my life.
My father was always a good role model for me as I was growing up. He's hard-working, patient and understanding; he's also got a good sense of humour and seems to get on well with everybody. Hopefully I've inherited some of these traits.
I admire my father because I think he brought me and my brothers/sisters up well; he was quite strict but always fair, and he has always been someone I can turn to for advice. I think my father set a good example by working hard and having a positive outlook on life. I remember that he used to leave for work early and come home quite late, but he always made time for me and my brothers/sisters.
雅思口语part2话题考官9分范文:an artist or entertainer you admire
Describe an artist or entertainer you admire
You should say
who they are and what they do
how they became successful
how you found out about them
and why you admire them
参考范文
I’m going to talk about a musician that I admire, called... He’s a singer who also plays the guitar and writes his own songs. I think he recorded his first album about 10 years ago, and he’s released several other CDs since then.
He became successful after many years of writing songs and performing live in small venues all over the country. Gradually he built a following of people who liked his music. I think the key to his success was one of his songs that was used on a TV advertisement. This meant that more people became aware of his music.
I found out about... because one of my friends got tickets to see him in concert. I hadn’t heard any of his music before, but I went along to the gig and really enjoyed it. After that I bought the first CD, and now I’ve got all of them.
The reason I admire... is that he has worked hard for his success: it takes years of practice to become a good singer and guitarist, and he spent several years playing to very small audiences before he became successful. I also like the fact that he writes his own music. I admire people who have worked hard to get where they are.
Note: 'Gig' is an informal word for concert or performance, but it's fine to use it in this context.
雅思口语part2话题考官9分范文:an electronic machine you want to buy
Topic： Describe an electronic machine you want to buy.
You should say:
what it is
when you know this machine
what specific features you want and explain why you want this machine.
参考范文：
Let me tell you about the electronic machine that I’d like to buy lately. It’s just a Mac Mini, produced by Apple. I first saw it in the Apple online store when I was buying the latest iPhone there last April.
It’s very small, nearly as portable as notebook, and can be taken away in my bag. Besides, it’s very energy-efficient which means that it can be running in my room all day long very quietly. So I won’t be bothered by the noise compared with other computers. Moreover, the cover of the machine can be removed so that it’s very convenient to upgrade the memory myself.
While the small computer is so light-weighted, it’s still very powerful to deal with various hard tasks. With the latest Intel processor and the large amount of memory, its performance is improved much greatly. I want to buy it and put it in the corner of my room, letting it be running day and night to provide home sharing services of movies, music and pictures for my whole family.
Topic： Describe an electronic machine you want to buy.
You should say:
what it is
when you know this machine
what specific features you want and explain why you want this machine.
参考范文：
Let me tell you about the electronic machine that I’d like to buy lately. It’s just a Mac Mini, produced by Apple. I first saw it in the Apple online store when I was buying the latest iPhone there last April.
It’s very small, nearly as portable as notebook, and can be taken away in my bag. Besides, it’s very energy-efficient which means that it can be running in my room all day long very quietly. So I won’t be bothered by the noise compared with other computers. Moreover, the cover of the machine can be removed so that it’s very convenient to upgrade the memory myself.
While the small computer is so light-weighted, it’s still very powerful to deal with various hard tasks. With the latest Intel processor and the large amount of memory, its performance is improved much greatly. I want to buy it and put it in the corner of my room, letting it be running day and night to provide home sharing services of movies, music and pictures for my whole family.
雅思口语part2话题考官9分范文:a film that you would like to see in the future
You should say：
what the film is called
what it is about
how you heard about this film and why you would like to see it.
范文：
I’m going to talk about a film that I’d like to see when it comes out later this year.
It’s the new James Bond film, and I saw in the news that it’s going to be called ‘Spectre’. I think ‘Spectre’ refers to the name of the imaginary criminal organisation that James Bond has to defeat in the film.
As ‘Spectre’ hasn’t been released yet, I don’t know exactly what it will be about. But I can guess that the hero, Bond, is going to be on a mission to save the world from an arch-criminal as usual. I’m sure it will be similar to most of the previous Bond films, with a plot line involving lots of twists and turns, and with Bond using his skills to defeat his nemesis in the end.
I first heard about this film when I was watching the news a couple of months ago, and since then I’ve seen the official trailer on TV. There have also been various articles in newspapers discussing the actors who have been cast to play supporting roles in the film. The James Bond films are always big news here in the UK, probably because Bond himself is an English character.
I’d like to see ‘Spectre’ at the cinema because I’m sure it will be full of action scenes and special effects, and I like the fact that Bond’s missions always take place in spectacular locations in different parts of the world. Of course Bond films are totally unrealistic, you could even say ridiculous. But they're always fast, entertaining and fun, a bit like a roller-coaster ride!
雅思口语part2话题考官9分范文:a modern building
Topic： Describe a modern building.
You should say:
where it is
what it is used for and why you like/dislike it.
参考答案：
I'm going to describe a modern building in Manchester. It's called the Beetham Tower, and it's the tallest building in the city, with about 50 floors.
Although it's called the Beetham Tower, most people know this building as the Hilton Hotel. In fact, the bottom half of the tower is the hotel and the top half is apartments. The apartments are expensive because the location and views make them very desirable.
I'm not sure if I like the design of the building, it's just a huge glass tower, but it definitely stands out. It has become a famous landmark in the city. You can see it as you approach Manchester, and it's an easy place to meet people because it's so distinctive and easy to find.
The most interesting thing about the Beetham Tower is that there is a bar/restaurant on the 23rd floor which has spectacular views of the city; it's definitely the best vantage point in Manchester because there are no walls, only huge windows, so you can look out over the city in any direction. I'd recommend anyone who visits Manchester to go there and experience the view.
雅思口语part2话题考官9分范文: a subject that you think should be removed
Describe a subject that you think should be removed from school education programmes.
You should say
- what the subject is
- why you think it is unnecessary for children to study it
- and explain what you would replace it with.
参考范文：
I’m going to suggest that art could be taken out of the school curriculum. In my experience, art lessons at school tend to include drawing, painting, and the making of collages using paper, fabric and other household materials.
There are a few reasons why I think that school art lessons are unnecessary. Firstly, I don’t believe that drawing and painting are essential skills that children will need when they leave school. Children might find these activities enjoyable, but it’s unlikely that they will need them in the working world. Secondly, children can draw, paint and make collages in their own time at home; parents can encourage this, and they can even join in. Finally, remembering my own art lessons at school, I don’t think we learnt any real art skills; the teachers left us to draw or create things, but they didn’t provide much technical instruction.
Instead of art lessons, children could do more work on core subjects like maths, science or language. These subjects are more likely to help children in later life when they enter the job market, and I think both children and their teachers would benefit if more time were devoted to them.
雅思口语part2话题考官9分范文:your favourite season in your country
Describe your favourite season in your country.
You should say
- when that season is
- what the weather is like at that time of year
- how that season is different from other seasons
- and why it is your favourite season.
Here's my sample answer:
My favourite season in England is winter. A typical English winter would last around 4 or 5 months between November and March, but when I say that I like the winter, I’m really thinking about the coldest month or two each year.
During those really wintry months, the temperature drops below zero and it often snows. Over the last few years we’ve had periods of quite heavy snowfall, to the extent that roads have been blocked and schools have had to close. Last winter I remember looking out of the window one morning and seeing everything covered in a layer of white.
Obviously the snow is what differentiates winter from the other seasons, but when it doesn’t snow there isn’t much difference between winter, autumn and spring; winter is just a bit colder.
The reason I’ve chosen winter as my favourite season is because I like the snow. I live near the countryside, and the landscape looks beautiful when everything is covered in white. We also celebrate Christmas and New Year in the winter, and these are my favourite festivals.
雅思口语part2话题考官9分范文
Describe a family celebration that you remember. You should say
- what you were celebrating
- who was present
- what you and your family did to make the celebration special
- and why you enjoyed the occasion.
Here's my sample answer:
I’m going to describe my sister’s wedding day, which took place a few years ago in the town where I grew up. For my sister it was the biggest and most important day of her life.
I think there were around 100 people at the marriage ceremony, which was held in a church. Even more people came to the party, or the wedding reception as we call it, after the ceremony. Of course, most members of my family were there, as well as the groom’s family and a collection of the bride and groom's friends and colleagues.
To make the celebration special, we did what families normally do. My mother made sure that the church and the reception venue were nicely decorated - there were flowers everywhere! Obviously we all dressed for the occasion, and there were bridesmaids, gifts, a huge wedding cake, and so on.
I enjoyed the occasion because it was great to see my sister so happy on her big day. The ceremony was perfect, and we all had a fantastic time at the reception. It’s rare for me to see all of my family and friends together in one place, so that’s probably what made the day so memorable for me.
雅思口语part2话题考官9分范文:a foreign country you want to visit but haven’t been to
Describe a foreign country you want to visit but haven’t been to.
You should say: where this place is
what it is like
what you can do in this country and explain why you want to visit the country.
参考答案：
The country that I have always wanted to go but have not visited yet is Canada. I’ ve been dreaming to visit there for more than 2-3 years. Canada has lots of picturesque landscapes and it also has a varied culture.
Canada boasts that it is one of the most beautiful countries in the world. For example, Vancouver is located right on the ocean, and there are enormous snowtipped mountains surrounding the entire city. There are a multitude of beautiful parks to walk through, and very nice beaches. Besides, all across the country there are small, picturesque towns located on mountains and valleys. In general, Canada is an incredibly clean country, which also helps its beauty.
Another reason I want to go there is to attend one of the universities there for my master degree. I think that it would be an excellent idea to go see the school, and perhaps even meet some of the professors that teach the courses I am interested in. It would also be beneficial for me to meet other students.
雅思口语范文:describe a favorite song of yours
雅思口语里面老题回归，这一季又问道“describe a favorite song of yours” 如果你是一位特别有情怀的、对世界充满爱的人，那么一定会喜欢下面这首歌：Heal the world.这首歌被誉为“世界上最动听的歌曲”，由迈克尔杰克逊作词作曲，以呼唤世界和平。正如度娘所说，这首歌的“歌词倡导人们保护和珍惜我们的环境，让战争远离，世界和平，我们的心中都有一个地方，那就是爱，让我们营造一个没有战争、没有荒地，生机勃勃，到处充满了温暖和关怀的世界，让孩子们可以自由的欢笑，让世界充满爱。”
于是，如此有深意的歌曲作为你的favorite song，会不会顿时让你的形象在考官眼里变得高大上了呢!
I’d like to talk about the song called Heal the World by Michael Jackson.
This song has been a hit ever since the day it was released almost 30 years ago.
He composed the song himself and expressed his wishes for world peace and turning the world to a better place, and he said that “Heal the World” is the song he was most proud to have created.
The song is about children, earth and love. We can see that from the lyrics he wrote. And there’s one particular sentence that truly touched me. It goes like ‘Heal the world, make it a better place, for you and for me, and for the entire human race’, which rhymes perfectly and has profound meanings.
The song started off with children’s laughter and cries, after knowing the background of the song, I couldn’t help thinking I could be the one who suffers from the war, especially when I saw the music video of the song which has a tremendous visual impact.
And when he sung this with the soothing melody, I could feel that the world is hopeful place. It let me realize only when the war ends can kids enjoy their childhood. So you see, this song is quite educational as well.
雅思语言点解析：
hit = a person or thing that is very popular 例如：
The duo were a real hit in last year's show.
a hit musical
The film was a hit for him in 2008.
Her new series is a smash hit.
start off = to begin by doing or being something
Let's start off with some gentle exercises.
We started off by introducing ourselves.
visual = of or connected with seeing or sight 例如：
I have a very good visual memory.
The building makes a tremendous visual impact.
dramatic visual effects
the visual arts
The photographs she takes are a visual record of her travels.
雅思口语话题：describe a wise solution
如果你玩儿微博，肯定不少看到各种“家用小妙招”之类的视频，或者题目为“一根皮筋儿的妙用”这类的短片，看完了不要随手关掉，想想怎么用英文讲给雅思考官啊，因为这就是雅思口语话题a wise solution的答案啊!如果你感觉太多专业术语或者不熟悉的词汇无法完整描述整个过程，那不妨直接找到一个国外短片，然后改述一下里面的内容就OK啦!
比如前几天微博上很火的janitor大叔与女学生斗智斗勇的视频，就特别适合这个雅思题目：女学生总是习惯在洗手间的玻璃上留下唇印，大叔每天要花好久把它们清理掉，报告校长也无法解决，最后大叔忍无可忍，放了大招：
This topic reminds me of a video I watched online the other day. It was about a clever janitor in a school. The girls in that school love to leave lip prints on the mirror in the bathroom, so each and every day he had to stay late to wipe them off. So he visited the principal and asked for help. She posted a public announcement, but instead of helping, the announcement only drew more attention to this problem, and the number of prints doubled. So the janitor came up with a plan. He had the principal gather several suspects and bring them into the bathroom. There he told the students that they’ve been making things so difficult for him ‘cause every day he had to spend so much time cleaning up those marks that are greasy and hard to get off. And he showed them what he had to do every day to make the mirror spotless again.
He put on a pair of rubber gloves, and dipped a cloth into the water in a toilet, and then, started to wipe the mirrors with that damp cloth.
The girls were so shocked and disgusted to see this. I mean, they pressed their lips to the mirror every day, and just the thought that they were actually kissing the toilet made them wanna puke.
So you see, I’m sure those girls would never do that again. And his brilliant idea has helped him get the last laugh.
知识点解析：
the other day = recently 例如：
I saw Jack the other day.
janitor = a person whose job is to take care of a building such as a school or a block of flats or an apartment building
wipe off = to remove dirt, liquid, etc. from something by using a cloth, your hand, etc. 例如：
She wiped off her make-up.
Wipe that stupid smile off your face.
Can you wipe the dirt off the windows?
come up with = to find or produce an answer, a sum of money, etc. 例如：
She came up with a new idea for increasing sales.
How soon can you come up with the money?
things = the general situation, as it affects somebody 例如：
Why do you make things so difficult for yourself?
Hi, Jane! How are things?
have the last laugh = to be successful when you were not expected to be, making your opponents look stupid
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