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独立写作技巧的思路解析
由此进入破题与立意结合的阶段。充分的破题所积累的大量思维方向给我们以信心，要做的只有一项遴选工序了。而这选并不是闭上眼睛随手挑，而要符合以下条件：
1，要与论题相匹配。论题问的既然是提高生活质量与否，一些无关紧要的改变就应该弃之不用，比如烹调时间缩短这一项改变，是事实，且未对生活质量有直接明显影响，就应该避免用作主要论点。
2，要能言之有物。这是再功利不过的一条标准。比如我自己提到了食物准备时间缩短能让人性情改变，破题时觉得不无可能，真落笔时却不知道由何说起，如果选了这一条为一个主要论点，结果是我说了一句话就走人，那还不如选个能下笔，能展示语言功底，也能显示思维缜密的写作方向。
3，选择的无论是2个还是3个论点，内在一定要有联系。这其实是整个立意阶段的重头。要立意，就是要明白自己表达的对象是什么，明确立场。然后站在这个立场上，挑选支持自己的论点。
破题结束后，第二要做的重要事项便是整理行文思路。破题过程其实是个发散思维的过程，而立意，则是要把思维收回来，组织化，理清它的脉络纹路，让他们按照自认为最有说服力的顺序排列好，准备落于纸上的过程。这个说服力的强弱，应该以什么标准判断呢？笔者认为，能说服读者的议论，在论点选择上应该遵循一个原则：三个（或者两个）论点不能在层面上有交叉，但要符合一条明线：支持全文观点。而最打动读者的论点选择，不仅遵循上面的原则，三个看似不交叉的论点间还有一条暗线贯穿一致。令全文浑然天成，回味无穷。
立意的地一步，按照上面的原则看，当然是先确定观点。以题目为例，笔者愿意选择否，食物易于准备降低了人们的生活质量。第一步踏出去了。
确定观点后，破题时得到的思维方向，明显不利于我的就应该排除。比如营养价值改变这一条，虽然速食文化的确对人体有害，但另一项速食：生疏和熟粗粮，就是向有益方向改变的，两者势均力敌，仅管是很容易想到，也很容易举例论证的论点，却不宜使用，因为如此贸然用了，有思维不缜密之嫌。然而，这毕竟是一块好啃的骨头，如果其他论点都不好论证，还可以回头捡起这一条来，隐去健康速食那个事实进行作文，当然，这依然是下下之选。
排除异己 之后，便该比较遗留的可能性论点，选取能言之有物且不交叉的项目，作为主要论点了。发散思维时，思维如洪水，席卷一切进入视野的可用之材，但大浪淘尽后，选择时就要格外注意这些素材的特征属性，看准了着手点才能下手。一个可能的论点必须作者有话可说才能选用，但如果对一个论点有太多话要说，就应该停下来，看看这些话能否安插在其他论点上。这也是出于观察论点间交叉性的需要。比如我选生活节奏改变，引发出速食对食量的影响，再引出对身体的影响，但第一个选择的论点是营养价值对身体的影响，两个论点就交叉在一起了。
在挑选论点，寻找言之有物这个“物”的时候，一定要注意避免层面的交叉，而这个层面，也要从题目中来：题目问的是对生活质量的影响，这些选择的层面一定和生活质量有关。生活质量又有什么层面呢？身体健康是一层，心理健康是一层，这两者合并在一起，是人类健康生活的基本要求，而物质享受是在基本要求上的锦上添花，又可以算一层，三层不交叉的层面就找到了。以此为依据，再回头找匹配的论点，事半功倍。此处也需要注意，破题时给出的.方向只是方向，不是成熟的论点。有需要时，可以把匹配的几个方向糅合成一个论点，方便下笔。 针对本题，笔者草拟三个论点如下：身体健康下降：速食对食量的影响。心理健康下降：快速的生活节奏造成压力。物质享受下降：精心调配的美食是一种格调，人们正在沉沦于生活压力中，丧失享受的品位。
为调整思路，笔者绞尽脑汁才准备出这三个论点，大家可能都看得心满意足，以为思路完成了，可以下笔了。事实上就这么下笔，的确已经可以成文了。可要写成一篇动人的议论，还是不够。因为这三个论点虽不交叉，却只有一条明线为关联：这条明线就是支持全文观点。细细研究，它们再无其它联系，如果写成文章，读后不会有一气呵成的畅快淋漓之感，也不会特别深入人心。
这条暗线，应该是什么呢？是让文章从死板规矩的举例说理，三片豆腐块儿拼成的死文字，变成有思想，又灵性，能从纸上走出来，走进读者内心去的，作者的心声。这暗线，就是前文提过的，能赋予文章品格的，刚柔之论，是或者以情，或者以理，串联整篇文章。以这个题目为例，笔者决定以理服人。
既然这条暗线要贯穿全文，就必须与各个论点有一定联系。而在串连所有论点的同时，要避免交叉，就使这个暗线出于一个全新的视角。之前笔者从题目用词的角度发散思维，再根据题目提问的出发点将发散开的思维分成三股收束起来。从题目本身入手，已无处再用力，可以使用的视角，只能从个人经验和知识中采凿――而这正是独立写作的基本要求：writing based on knowledge and experience。 仍然以题目为例，笔者醉心心理学，因此这一次的暗线会从心理角度入手。调用笔者的心理学知识储备，在遗留的可能性论点中寻找可以嵌含的切入点，将可以利用的心理角度理论排列出一定顺序，落笔时以暗线而非明线的顺序依次展开论证。
独立写作技巧的解析
一个字眼，一个是题，心里要满装着题目，一个字一个标点也要看得清清楚楚，不可以有哪怕一个空格的疏漏。另一个是破，要对题目里的每一个单词都细嚼慢咽，深刻理解，读过了的词如百步穿杨，准确无误的明了其所指，这也包括该单词的引申含义，言外之义。
此处将以从OG提供的195道例题中随机抽的一题为例，进行详细示范。
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live？ Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
我们看见了一个nowadays，指的是现代生活，现今时代，今年甚至是今天，也就是我们正在每天体验的生活。我们又看到food，今天的`人们有什么吃的呢？健康饮食理念者爱吃生疏加熟粗粮，不健康饮食理念者也有肯德基麦当劳。儿童有糖果饼干果冻，大街上随处都有的买。正规家居过日子的人也有各种原料和佐料等着下厨。这个food指的是什么呢？继续看，food has become easier to prepare，有个比较级，是要和谁比较，比较什么？
从to prepare判断，原来是比较准备出食物的难易程度，这不可能是和人们还不知为何状的未来的食物相比，那么就是和过去，也就是和传统食物相比了。这个比较可以从多种角度入手。
围绕着现代食物比较容易准备，我们能够轻易想到的有：准备时间缩短了，食用方式可能改变，营养价值可能改变，人们烹调时的心情改变，食用心情改变，对身体的长远影响改变，烹调方面节省下来的时间可以用在其它方面，导致生活节奏改变，生活重心改变，长此以往情趣格调改变，兴趣爱好改变，乃至性情改变等等等等。
从题目给出的条件，我们得到了这么多可能的后果，那么题目问的是什么呢？has this change improved the way people live ？大汗无语中，从上面的破题结论看来，这个论题有着太多的选择方向。那么多可以改变的条目，我们选什么做立意之根本呢？请看：新托福独立写作技巧解析之思路立意篇
关于破题的独立写作技巧解析
破题的两个字眼，一个是“题”，心里要满装着题目，一个字一个标点也要看得清清楚楚，不可以有哪怕一个空格的疏漏。另一个是“破”，要对题目里的每一个单词都细嚼慢咽，深刻理解，读过了的词如百步穿杨，准确无误的明了其所指，这也包括该单词的引申含义，言外之义。
此处将以从OG提供的195道例题中随机抽的一题为例，进行详细示范。
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live？ Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
我们看见了一个nowadays，指的`是现代生活，现今时代，今年甚至是今天，也就是我们正在每天体验的生活。我们又看到food，今天的人们有什么吃的呢？健康饮食理念者爱吃生疏加熟粗粮，不健康饮食理念者也有肯德基麦当劳。儿童有糖果饼干果冻，大街上随处都有的买。正规家居过日子的人也有各种原料和佐料等着下厨。这个food指的是什么呢？继续看，food has become easier to prepare，有个比较级，是要和谁比较，比较什么？
从to prepare判断，原来是比较准备出食物的难易程度，这不可能是和人们还不知为何状的未来的食物相比，那么就是和过去，也就是和传统食物相比了。这个比较可以从多种角度入手。
围绕着现代食物比较容易准备，我们能够轻易想到的有：准备时间缩短了，食用方式可能改变，营养价值可能改变，人们烹调时的心情改变，食用心情改变，对身体的长远影响改变，烹调方面节省下来的时间可以用在其它方面，导致生活节奏改变，生活重心改变，长此以往情趣格调改变，兴趣爱好改变，乃至性情改变等等等等。
从题目给出的条件，我们得到了这么多可能的后果，那么题目问的是什么呢？has this change improved the way people live ？大汗无语中，从上面的破题结论看来，这个论题有着太多的选择方向。那么多可以改变的条目，我们选什么做立意之根本呢？
托福独立写作满分范文写作技巧解析
一.审题很重要
托福独立写作满分范文都很切合题目，所以大家在写作过程中也要注重审题。如果你在审题的过程中存在任何的偏差，那么你的论述无论多么的有质量，但是依旧不能取得高分。建议考生在看到题目的时候，首先把题目通读2遍，看看题目中存在哪些名词和动词。其实，在独立写作中，可以把写作的文章分为两类，分别为观点选择类和对比分析类。如果题目中给出了两个观点或者一个观点的两方面，要求考生进行比较论述并给出自己的观点，那么这就是一个观点选择类题目了;如果要求考生根据两个对立的观点做出选择的话，那么这就是比较分析类的题目了。
二.文章架构合理
托福独立写作满分范文的架构也非常值得大家学习。大家在审题过后，应该都有了选择，也都有了自己的论点论据了。如何把这些论点论据更合理的分配到文章中去呢?这就要考验你的文章架构能力了。在组织论述的时候，你可以采用五段式的方式去表达个人的观点看法，而且考虑到逻辑性的安排，我们在确定论点先后顺序的时候应该斟酌慎行，一定要合理排序。考生可以按照论点的重要性排序，把最能突显观点的论点放在最前面;或者安排论点的时候可以按照范围的大小来排列等，不管是怎样的方式，一定要有逻辑。
三.句式多样，内容丰富
托福独立写作满分范文的句式和内容都非常不错，这也是它能够作为满分范围的原因之一。我们在话语的表述上面，一定要尽量丰富，不要呆板的使用一些简单的句式表达。句式可以是主动、被动、动名词等作主语、倒装句、there be句型等等句型。此外，因为文章要求有逻辑性，所以在文章的叙述中，也应该尽可能的多一些逻辑连接词，从而使你的文章逻辑清晰可见。
托福考试作文独立写作范文：了解跟你观点相反的人更重要
托福写作真题题目：
8月27日托福独立写作题目208月27日托福真题及答案解析
A/D: It is more important to read and watch news presented by people whose opinion is different from your own view than by people whose opinion are similar to yours.
写作参考一:
With the increasingly diverse means of acquiring information, it has become a common phenonmen that we are exposed to conflicting ideas about a single event, which has aroused deep social concern. A growing boday of average people are wondering whether it is more important to read and watch news presented by people whose opinion is different from your own view than by people whose opinion are similar to yours. From my pesepective, it is advisable to be a good listener to the different viewpoints.
Firstlly, receiving news presented by people with dissenting perspective can help people have access to the comprehensive information and get closer to the truth of the events. As is common sense, every single event or piece of news is not as simple as we expect. So it is an indisputable fact that nobody can have a panoramic view of the truth of the incidents due to the limited experience and knowledge span. In this case, gaining news from our opponents will definitely deliver a brandnew perspective and make us have a second thought of our own viewpoint. In other words, the clashes of different views will temper and refine our opinion about the events, with the result that a whole picture is formed. On the contrary, just selectively listening to the similar ideas, people will become narrow-minded.
Besides that, another potential benefit of obtaining news from those with opposite view is the higher likelihood to make acquaitance with more people. As is known to all, the way person responds to someone whose opinion differs drastically from theirs reveals their true character. To be specific, being tolerant of different voices about one thing reflects that a person is endowed with the quality of inclusiveness and humbility, which can make him/her leave a good impression on others. Consequently, no one, including those from opposing party, will refuse to become friends with humble and inclusive ones. Instead, those solely accepting same opinion are usually self-centered and arrogant so that they not consider others’ thought or feeling but impose their own opinion. Thus it is unlikely that they will build friendship with those with different ideas. Even worse, the alreadly established friendship may also end, once the disagreements occur.
In a nutshell, it is sensible for people to read or watch news from people with dissenting perspective, in order to gain the whole picture of the news and enlarge the social network.
写作参考二:
年8月27日托福独立写作范文二：With advent of new technological gadgets, like laptop, tablet and smart phones, people now have access to all sorts of news sources. In face of the overwhelming news sources, some people tend to watch news that present similar ideas with them, while other prefer to watch news with different perspectives and ideas. I, personally, think it is far better to watch news with distinctive opinions and viewpoints based on the following reasons.
First off, news from various sources are biased and it is quite irrational to read or watch news from a single source, actually it makes better sense to be exposed to news that provide different kinds of ideas. Even though it is very essential for news media to be fair and unbiased, nonetheless, in reality, most of the news media are biased and prejudiced. Part of the reasons is that the news sources can be various, like the government, independent institutions or even think tanks. Lots of media or news agencies use phrases like “expert believes”, “most people agree” or “observes argue that”, all of which are pretty much biased since “most people” is a slippery word. The people might not represent the majority of the people and lack of diversity in terms of race, gender and other demographic factors.
Additionally, being exposed to news with distinctive opinions and ideas can help people to develop critical thinking skills and thus have a fair and more justified stance on certain issues. People varying in past life experience, education background and economic conditions tend to have totally different opinions on certain issues. Having access to different ideas can broaden people's horizons and enrich one's experience. For instance, I took it for granted that every child at an appropriate age has the chance to go to primary school until I watched a documentary about the elementary school enrolment in the poverty-stricken region in my country. Their family can barely feed them and the local government has little educational resource to provide them proper education. This documentary totally changed my perspective on the primary school enrolment in hinterland.
In all, exposure to news with different perspectives has lot of benefits since news sources are generally biased, and by watching news with different opinions we can have a much more fair and clear view.
托福考试作文独立写作范文：大学生应该选择哪种专业
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：
students should be encouraged to take courses like science, technology, engineering and math that are likely to lead to job opportunities rather than subjects they might be interested in.
2016年11月5日托福独立写作题目真题：
Students should choose the major such as science, technology, and engineering which can help them find good jobs instead of the major which they are interested in.
点睛
题目大意：大学生应该选择哪种专业：能够帮助他们找到好工作的专业(比如科学类，技术类和工程类)VS自己喜欢的专业。此题目波波建议选择感兴趣的专业：理由如下1.学习更有动力 2.从长远来看，更有利于就业。
范文参考一:
The question of “ what is the most important subject or skill the schools should teach? ” has never failed to attract attention from educators, school administrators and even politicians especially when it comes to subjects like technology, engineering and math. Some argue that students should be encouraged to take such classes rather than the ones they are interested in since they give them a better shot to find jobs. However, personally, I am not in favor of this position based on the following reasons.
Admittedly, it is true that courses like technology, engineering and math are very
technical, most of which can be applied in solving real world issues. However, the exposure that students have to apply these theories are very limited in class. Taking technical oriented classes will not give students a competitive edge to ensure future jobs opportunities, on the other hand, there are enormous benefits for students to take courses that they are interested in.
First off, taking courses that students are interested in can be a great motivation for them to achieve higher goals. Old saying “ interest is the best teacher” remains relevant as it did a century ago. Interest serves as the internal motivation for students to explore in the area that they are interested, on the contrary, if they are forced to take courses for a utilitarian purpose, they might not keep their interest for a long time thus have a lower learning efficiency. Recent study conducted by the Society of Developmental Psychology shows that students will be more enthusiastic and passionate about learning when given the freedom to make their own choices to take classes. Also, giving students the opportunity to choose the classes they are interested in can help them to explore their real interest, thus their potential can be fully tapped before heading off for career options.
Additionally, taking courses students are interested in have enormous practical purposes and they can be a great source of leisure and relaxation. For instance, lots of students like art and music but seldom do they have a chance to learn. Actually, taking art and music classes help to develop creativity and make the students more imaginative. Actually, lots of scientific research in the psychological field shows that early exposure to art and music not only boosts academic achievement but also promotes creativity, self-confidence and school pride. Students who spend more time in learning art and music end up having higher analytical thinking and reasoning skills than those who don’t.
In conclusion, taking courses that students are interested in can be a great motivation for them to achieve higher goals and it can also be a great source of leisure and relaxation.
写作参考二:
Under the current system of higher education, with the majors becoming increasingly diverse, how to choose an appropriate major has never failed to attract the attention of the general public. Most parents strongly recommend that it is much better to choose a major which can guarantee a good job, while college students, the receiver of higher education, tend to choose the field which caters to their interest. As far as I am concerned, the latter viewpoint is more reasonable, with the reasons listed below.
First of all, selecting the major that students like can help them to grasp the knowledge better. Just as a saying goes, interest is the best teacher, which is true of undergraduates. To illustrate, under the drive of interest, students are more likely to automatically devote more time and energy into what they major in, thus definitely having a better command of professional knowledge and skills imparted by teachers. By contrast, without any interest in what they are taught, college students who generally lack in self-motivation may do anything but study in class. For instance, on campus in China, it is not uncommon to see that many students squander their valuable time by taking a nap, whispering or even playing smart phones while attending the class. What’s worse, some of them may even skip classes. The reason underlying the above phenomenon is nothing but lack of passion for what they learn.
Secondly, choosing a major students are interested in can do a better job in helping them secure a good job. As we all know, with the constant change and progress of society, the job market is also changing quickly. In other words, some promising industries a few years ago might very well become obsolete, which means that the major one chooses cannot necessarily guarantee a good job. By contrast, under such a society full of fierce competition, it is the professional skills and abilities people own that play the key role in landing a decent job. Obviously, only when people select the field they have passion for can they establish a solid foundation of specific knowledge and skills in this field. Therefore, the major catering to one’s interest can better improve his or her competence, thus increasing their likelihood of securing a decent job.
Taking all the above into consideration, we can draw the conclusion that choosing the major which interests students is much better, in terms of making undergraduates have a better command of what they major in and find a suitable job.
托福
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should take at least one year to work or travel before they go to universities.
根据题目，我们可以总结为该不该利用Gap year去工作或者旅游?
什么是Gap year?
A gap year is a year before going college or university and after finishing high school or taking a year off before going into graduate school after completing a bachelor as a undergraduate. It is also known as a sabbatical year. During this time students may engage in advanced academic courses, extra-academic courses and non-academic courses, such as yearlong pre-college math courses, language studies, learning a trade, volunteer work, travel, internship, sports or more.
思路拓展：
Gap year has numerous benefits, but typically the two most commonly cited reasons for taking a gap year are a desire for increased self-awareness and to address academic burnout.
当然，大家还可以从以下几个方面汲取所好，展开论证～
1. travel the world and discover new countries and cultures
2. enjoy a once in a lifetime experience and a real personal adventure
3. step outside one’s comfort zone and get a new perspective
4. meet new people and make friends of lifetime
5. take a break and return refreshed and refocused on what a person wants to do in life
6. add unique experience to CV to help one to be admitted to a university or get a dream job
托福写作范文素材：gap yearThe Pros of Taking a Gap Year
After high school，students typically choose one of two paths：school or work. However， a third option exists that very few even consider： taking a gap year. It may not be the norm in North America， but gap years are quite common and highly recommended in the UK， Australia and New Zealand. Just like attending university or being in the workplace， taking a gap year is not right for everybody. It takes a lot of research and several factors should be considered before deciding on the next step.
Pros：
It's a chance to regroup and rediscover. After being in school for several years， you can feel burnt out. Going to university while you aren't in top shape mentally will only lead to poor performance. Use the time to get some well deserved rest and relaxation. Especially if you feel out of touch from yourself and the rest of the world， a gap year will only do you good as youreflect on your future goals and aspirations， as well as spend some much needed time with family and friends.
Most students take their year off to travel. Whether you're backpacking through Europe or meditating in an ashram in India， you'll revel in your newfound respect for different cultures， customs， beliefs and languages. You will end your gap year with several stories and memories that will last a lifetime.
Some students also take the opportunity to work. The money saved up from working is put towards future endeavors and purchases such as a home， a car or an education. Others work to gain an edge in an overly competitive career market. By taking internships or job opportunities related to their career path， they gain valuable experience and a chance to network with industry experts that will help their resumes shine.
It's also a time to pursue other passions. You might want the time to write your Oscar-winning screenplay or create a start-up company in your garage. You might even discover that you want to pursue a different career path.
It's a chance to get involved in something you really believe in. Release the humanitarian inside you and volunteer locally， nationally or internationally.
托福写作素材重点搭配和句子摘抄：
feel burnt out： 感觉筋疲力尽
aren't in top shape mentally ：不在最佳的心理状态
lead to poor performance：导致糟糕的表现
get some well deserved rest and relaxation：获得应得的休息和放松
feel out of touch from yourself and the rest of the world：感觉跟自己和世界脱节了
reflect on your future goals and aspirations： 反思你的未来目标和志向
backpacking through _x：在_x背包旅行
revel in your newfound respect for different cultures， customs， beliefs and languages：陶醉于对不同文化、习俗、信条和语言的无限敬重中;
is put towards future endeavors and purchases such as a home， a car or an education
被用在未来的事业或者购买上面比如：房子、车子或者教育
gain an edge in an overly competitive career market
在过渡竞争的人才市场获得优势
gain valuable experience and a chance to network with industry experts
获得有价值的经验和跟业界专家沟通的机会
career path：职业道路
help their resumes shine：帮助他们的简历发光
write your Oscar-winning screenplay ：写一个可以获得奥斯卡奖的剧本
create a start-up company ：创建初创公司
get involved in _x：投入_x
新托福写作素材适用题目：
3月23日大陆托福写教育类
Student should take at least a year to work or travel before they go to universities.
托福写作语料库 关于高中生是否应该经历间隔年
真题如下：
Students should spend at least one year working or traveling before they go to university? Do you agree or disagree? 高中生应该在上大学之前至少工作或者旅行一年，是否认同?( 3月13日)
托福写作背景介绍
The gap year = the Grand Tour “间隔年”，也叫“壮游年”或者“断档年”。是指从前英国贵族子女的遍游欧洲大陆的教育旅行。
托福写作立场：
成长中的年轻人应该被鼓励去经历间隔年，这是最佳的方式让他们拓宽视野，性格成长，尽管我们不能忽视其潜在弊端。
间隔年的优势
① 兼职工作可以帮助年轻人积累工作经验，获得自我成就感，使他们对于社会有了更加深刻的洞察，为未来的择业打下坚实基础。
② 旅行可以开拓视野、丰富知识、结交新友，锻炼独立性，这些对于未来的发展是有利好的。
③ 工作和旅行提高了人的社会意识，丰富了人生的阅历，成熟了人的心态。
间隔年的弊端
① 很多孩子可能沉迷工作和旅行不再回归校园，如果这样，间隔年就失去了它的初衷。
② 青春期是人的求知欲望最强，也是学习能力和记忆力最强的宝贵时期，高中生不应该耽误一年的时间远离校园而去打工或是闲逛，否则，学业就会被耽误。
③ 高中生没有形成核心竞争力，很难找到工作。即使是找到，也很容易被欺骗和剥削。
托福范文赏析：
首段
Such is human nature to explore the unknown and see the outside word，that is why a great many high school graduates are keen on traveling or working for a period of time before attending dream universities. Conflicting ideas clash in determining whether or not it is a wise idea to inspire high school leavers to experience the Grand Tour. As I see it, the merits of experiencing the gap year outshine its potential demerits.
第二段
The most important educational benefit of taking a year off before starting university life is that traveling exposes young adults to stunning places and exotic cultures. It is one thing for teenagers to read about distant countries, but it is even better to enrich the experience of the world on one’s own. What one learns by associating with strangers and absorbing diverse cultures is something he or she could never acquire in the classrooms. For example，I made many congenial friends by self-travel to Tibet after finishing my schooling. This fantastic journey not only expanded my mind but also alleviated my stress triggered by tight academic study. Feasting my eyes on the stunning landscape really sweetened my life and lifted my spirit.
第三段
Virtually, youngsters can also become the beneficiaries of working as part-timers too. By that I mean, earning a living has a key role to play in helping one accumulate relevant working experience, train one’s crisis-solving abilities and deepen one’s insight into the society, which will lay a solid foundation for one’s future career ladder. To illustrate, via embarking on part-time jobs, I knew that money doesn’t grow on trees. Then, I studied even harder when coming back to campus.
第四段
Notwithstanding all that, we can never ignore the potential downsides caused by experiencing the gap year. First, the study might be delayed. Some school graduates are too immature to draw on their gap year, so they just waste time during that period and harvest nothing. Even worse, it is highly possible that some youngsters might end up never returning to campus. However，since academic qualification is extremely indispensable to every individual，my concern might seldom happen.
尾段
In closing, my stand is that to inspire young adults to take a year off before going to college is a two-edged sword. Yet youngsters should be encouraged to challenge themselves. This is one of the best ways to mature their thoughts and chasten their characters.
托福写作语料：
1. go to university = start university life = attend university 上大学
2. earn a living = work as part-timers 谋生
3. do some sightseeing = to be well-traveled = to travel on one’s own 自己旅行
4. Such is human nature to explore the unknown 探索未知是人之本性。
5. The merits of experiencing the gap year outshine its potential demerits 经历间隔年的利大于弊。
6. to experience the gap year 体验间隔年
7. take a year off to work and travel before attending dream university 升入理想大学之前，用一年的时间去工作或旅行
8. feasting my eyes on the stunning landscape 尽情欣赏迷人景色
9. really sweetened my life and lifted my spirit 使我快乐，精神振奋
10. add spice to the dull routine of everyday life 增加枯燥生活之情趣
11. lay a solid foundation for one’s future career ladder 为未来事业打下坚实基础
12. money doesn’t grow on trees 赚钱很辛苦
13. notwithstanding all that 尽管如此
14. end up doing sth 以……为结局
15. be led astray 被引入迷途
16. Since academic qualification is extremely indispensable to every individual，my concern might seldom happen. 因为学历对于每一人都很重要，我的担忧很少会发生。
17. …… is a two-edged sword ……是一把双刃刀
18. This is one of the best ways to mature their thoughts and chasten their characters. 这是成熟他们的思想，磨练他们的性格的最佳方式之一。
托福独立写作思路解析：Gap year
TWE写作技巧：思路
Having enough reason to support your choice is essential in TOEFL writing. Here I listed some good reasons for a point as a sample.
西方人经常提及的'辩论话题之理由：（注意，有些理由在TWE中会被认为是重复的。只做欣赏。 另外，从中我们可以对自己的逻辑思维更加自信。）
1． Smoking
For：
1． it is pleasurable and relaxing
2． it is one's right
3． it is difficult to stop smoking
4． it is an old custom going back hundreds of years
5． it is not always dangerous to one's health
6． it makes socializing easier
7． it is an important source of tax revenue
8． intoxication is a natural drive (e.g., coffee, drugs, alcohol)
Against:
1． it is harmful to one's health (e.g., heart disease, bronchial trouble, lung cancer )
2． it is harmful to those nearby
3． it is a dirty and expensive habit
4． it is addictive (i.e., nicotine)
5． it is quickly being banned in public areas
6． it lives off deceptive advertising
2． School Uniforms
For：
1． they build character
2． they eliminate class differences
3． they allow students to better concentrate on their studies
4． they are popular with parents and administrators
5． they are inexpensive
6． they are attractive and neat
7． they eliminate the need to choose what to wear every day
8． many countries have them
Against：
1． they lead to conformity
2． they are disliked by students (students like to primp)
3． they create a military mentality
4． they are an infringement on our freedom (different strokes for different folks)
5． they are ugly and childish
6． they deprive youths of an important choice: what to wear
7． they are losing popularity everywhere
3． Legalized Gambling
For：
1． it reduces taxes
2． it is a source of government revenue
3． it is gaining popularity in the world
4． it is an old practice dating back thousands of years
5． it is pleasurable (e.g.,
思路分析及写作技巧
审题立意：
1，从背景语入手，审清背景思路；
2，从话题语入手，审清话题主旨思路；
3，从启发语入手，审清启发语写作思路；
4，从强调语入手，审清写作要求思路。
打开思路：
联想(相似、相关、相对)，添加(1、时间、地点┼题目；2、态度┼题目；3、动词┼题目；4、题目┼是什么；5、为什么┼题目┼会怎样；6、或事┼题目。)
拟好题目：
1、揭示主题；2、反映内容；3、巧用修辞；4、化用名句；5、借用歌曲；6、妙用符号；7、呼告汗情。
构思耐心：
不假思索就能想到的东西绝对不能写；稍加思索想到的.也不要写。花上几分钟，想别人想不到的内容写，严禁胡编乱造。即使编写故事也要做到大胆想象，自圆其说。中心一个要紧紧围绕。
谋篇出彩：
开头要引人(开门见山，直截了当；制造悬念，引人入胜；提出问题，引人注意；说明情况，交待背景)，结尾要有力(画龙点睛，发人深思；总结全文，照应开头；叙述结束，自然收尾；抒发情感，引起共鸣)
文体固定：
文体不限不代表没有文体，要写什么象什么。记叙文要三分之二的篇幅落足于叙述，议论文反之。强烈建议写记叙文，且最好将主人公设定为自己，用第一人称入文，不喊口号，情真意切。
少写深奥的科幻小说，写童话、寓言不要过于含蓄，严禁照搬照抄别人的范文。
内容限制：
不要触及敏感的政治事件，少谈宗教话题，不要单纯发牢骚，不要写早恋等敏感话题。想想阅卷老师的喜好，说他们想听的话。
语言优美：
严禁文白夹杂；严禁使用别人看不懂的方言；严禁使用别人看不懂的词汇；少用长句多用短句；可引进部分时代新词汇；引用名言警句；引用流行的通俗歌曲歌词；引用百姓口头民谣。(但取向一定要积极向上)
细节生动：
一定要有细节描写。推己及人，以情动人。
小处留心：题目不要忘记写(2分)；字数要达到(50字1分)；字迹要工整(3个错别字1分)；卷面要整洁(可扣3分)，使用修改符号。
