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雅思大作文环保类考题解析
Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?
上了我们写作课的同学,在考场上看到这道熟悉度五颗星的题目就使劲地得瑟吧。熟悉度来自于考前环保话题的梳理+相关素材的背诵。话不多说,我们一起来分析一下。
第一步:确定这是一篇观点类作文,确定写作框架
第二步:环保类→动物保护的话题,脑中光速浮现积累过的观点和词伙
第三步:注意题目里有一个对比,保护动物VS 投钱到人类,需要恰当的对比论证
若要站队动物保护的话,可以抛出哪些观点:
1.投入时间和精力到动物保护→拯救濒危灭绝的动物→保护生物多样性
背景铺垫:当今社会,动物的各种悲惨遭遇 (家园被毁、过度捕杀、食物污染等)
因果论证:因此,人类需要花费时间和精力来认识和减轻对动物的伤害,帮助他们繁衍生息,从而保护生物多样性
对比论证:人类目前已基本脱离了基本生存的苦海,人类人口呈现稳定增长趋势(此时此刻,请你们放开老龄化人口负增长好吗?答应我)
2.投入时间和精力到动物保护→有助于维持稳定的生态系统建→最终人类受益
背景铺垫:动物是生态系统中的重要成员
举例论证:麻雀少了,导致农作物收成受到影响,人类遭殃
因果论证:因此,就保护动物而言,宜风物长放眼量
对比论证:如忽略动物的保护,一味地去开展人类活动发展经济,人类最终也没好果子吃
3.#喝喝,灵感枯竭了,那就让步吧#
当然,在某些deprived areas, 我们还是需要去关心人类的福祉,提高生活水平
雅思写作范文:旧建筑与新建筑
Do you think old buildings should be broken down, and give place for modern buildings. How are the old buildings important in our society?
With the rapid development of urbanization, many people advocate the demolition of old houses for the benefit of economic and social development. But others argue that we can’t ruin the traditional cultural heritage. Personally, I side with the former opinion.
In the first place, the existence of old houses is an obstacle to modern urbanization by damaging the image of the city. If they are replaced with modern skyscrapers, the city will take on a new look. Take the Summer Palace in Beijing for example, Being government has demolished a large number of run-down the Summer Palace and constructed many new housing buildings instead.
In the second place, there is a potential danger to people living in old houses or even passers-by. If the houses are old enough to collapse in the end, where does the value of culture or tourism exist? The tourists surely will not travel a long distance to see these so-called “culture heritage” at the risk of their lives. [More:www.cnielts.com]
In the third place, replacing old houses with buildings can help to solve housing problems. It is well-known that China is a densely-populated country and people in urban areas only have little housing space. Undoubtedly, replacing old houses with new buildings is a good way to solve the problem.
As mentioned above, I can draw a conclusion safely: It is irresistible to replace old houses with modern buildings. At the same time, it is necessary for us to restore a limited number of old houses for the sake of conserving traditional culture and attracting tourists.
雅思写作范文修改:游客是否该入乡随俗
原文:HLH0220 修改:William(美国华裔),雅思公主(shirleyzrb)
TOPIC:Some people believe that visitors to other countries shoud follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
原文:
As to whether local customs and behaviour should assimilation with the other cultures , these arises a contentious discussion . Before presenting my view ,I intend to discuss both sides of the argument.
Advocates of the other cultures hold the belief that it is benefits of host country to interacted to the other cultures. To begin with ,tourism helps to introduce the country to foreigners and showcase the brilliant history and culture to the outside world. Moreover ,tourists from different countries also bring their own cultures , it can enhance mutual understanding between nations and maintain world peace .Worst of all ,as we know cross-cultural communication is becoming increasingly frequent and cultural assimilation and penetration is inevitable.
Some other people ,however ,are strongly against the host country to have access to the diverses cultures for several sound reasons .Primarily ,it may exert some adverse effects on the aboriginal culture and minority languages to some extent .Furthermore ,cultural globalization will result in one homogenous global culture where everyone speaks the same and thinks the same .Last of all ,globalization poses potential risks to the preservation of aboriginal culture and languages .
From the above discussion ,we can see that both sides have sound reasonable . Personally ,I am in favor of assimilating with different cultures .On the other hand , we can not lose the sight of risks of globalization . And it is of great significance for a government to make efforts to conserve endangered culture and language.
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TOPIC:Some people believe that visitors to other countries shoud follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
As to whether local customs and behavior should assimilation(assimilate) with the other cultures , these arises a contentious discussion . Before presenting my view, I intend to discuss both sides of the argument.(first of all, for argumentative essay, you have to state your thesis statement first, not to introduce your essay by restating the question again, present your side and assert it , then discuss both sides and conclude it at the end.)
Advocates who believe that foreign cultures are beneficial to host country because the extent to which they interact. Tourism helps to introduce the country to foreigners and it also acts as a showcase to disclose the brilliant history and culture to the outside world. Moreover, tourists from different countries also bring their own culture into the host country, it can enhance mutual understanding between nations and maintain world peace .As we all know cross-cultural communication is becoming increasingly frequent and cultural assimilation and penetration is inevitable.
Some other people, however ,are strongly against the host country to have access to the diversity of culturesfor several reasons .Primarily ,it may exert some adverse effects on the aboriginal culture and minority languages. Furthermore ,cultural globalization will result in one homogenous global culture where everyone speaks the same and thinks the same .Last of all ,globalization poses potential risks to the preservation of aboriginal culture and languages .
From the above discussion, we can see that both sides have their points. Personally, I am in favor of assimilating with different cultures .On the other hand, we cannot lose the sight of risks of globalization. And it is of great significance for a government to make efforts to conserve endangered culture and language.
雅思大作文范文:
The culture of a country changes in the course ofsocial development. This is what is happening indeveloping nations such as China. Government hasthe obligation to preserve the culture of a countryin a proper way.
In the real-estate business, for example, developers build houses, apartments , and officesto meet the demands of consumers differing in taste and spending power. Some buildings arebuilt in traditional style as a selling point to differentiate from competing products. In somecases, a municipal government tries to give its city a unique aroma by constructing buildings inold style.
However, such newly built “old” buildings appear strikingly different from the originalscenturies old. On the campus of Peking University, we can easily tell the differences between theold and the new. Even we admire the university's efforts, this is not a work beautifully done.More examples would be found in many architects that are ridiculed by both consumers andcritics.
The real issue is: could culture be replicated? If yes, then to what extent do buildingsrepresent a culture? In China, the more commonly known architect styles are found in templesor palaces. Though the government tries to recreate such places, people often label them asfake.
In spite of the disadvantages in government's efforts in cultural preservation, we have torecognize that such endeavor reminds people of their unique identity and legacy. And itbalances the trend that tries to make everything western just to keep up with the trend.
To sum up, it is very hard or sometimes impossible for the government to create trulygood work in traditional style to preserve a culture. Nonetheless, such efforts are worthybecause of the positive influences they have on people in a country with rich history and culturelike China.
雅思考试大作文范文:Style of New Buildings
雅思大作文题目:Style of New Buildings
雅思大作文范文:
We all know that China's history is a long andcomplex one which stretches over thousands of years. With such a long and varied history,it's hard to accurately define our “cultural identity”. For example, in the Tang Dynasty, manypeople thought that fat women were the most beautiful, but now things are different, and mostpeople think that slim girls are prettier. The same is true for building designs; some things thatwere desirable in the past are no longer popular.
I think that, as a country, we have a responsibility to preserve a piece of our past, but thatdoesn't mean that we have to live in the past. Just because my relatives were farmers, doesn'tmean that every future generation has to live in a farmhouse, or even in a house that looks likea farmhouse.
Many modern buildings are safer than old buildings, because we have learned how to makestronger buildings that will last longer. I think that modern buildings that incorporate a subtletraditional style into their design are beautiful, but it's also good for buildings to have a wild,modern, Chinese flavor. Each period of Chinese history is a little different, so we should leaveroom for new expression.
In the future, today's newest designs may well become traditional. Keeping this fact inmind, I agree that some buildings should be built in traditional styles; however, we should alsoallow young Chinese architects to weave the essence of the current era into their buildingdesigns. The government is not only responsible for protecting a nation's cultural identity; italso has a responsibility to allow for continued growth.
雅思考试大作文范文:旧建筑与新建筑
雅思大作文题目:旧建筑与新建筑
雅思大作文范文:
With the rapid development of urbanization,many people advocate the demolition of oldhouses for the benefit of economic and socialdevelopment. But others argue that we can’t ruinthe traditional cultural heritage. Personally, I sidewith the former opinion.
In the first place, the existence of old houses isan obstacle to modern urbanization by damagingthe image of the city. If they are replaced with modern skyscrapers, the city will take on a newlook. Take the Summer Palace in Beijing for example, Being government has demolished a largenumber of run-down the Summer Palace and constructed many new housing buildings instead.
In the second place, there is a potential danger to people living in old houses or evenpassers-by. If the houses are old enough to collapse in the end, where does the value ofculture or tourism exist? The tourists surely will not travel a long distance to see these so-called“culture heritage” at the risk of their lives.
In the third place, replacing old houses with buildings can help to solve housing problems.It is well-known that China is a densely-populated country and people in urban areas onlyhave little housing space. Undoubtedly, replacing old houses with new buildings is a good wayto solve the problem.
As mentioned above, I can draw a conclusion safely: It is irresistible to replace old houseswith modern buildings. At the same time, it is necessary for us to restore a limited number ofold houses for the sake of conserving traditional culture and attracting tourists.
雅思考试大作文范文:传统建筑保护
雅思大作文题目:传统建筑保护
雅思大作文范文:
These days,different ways are being taken toprotect cultural identity.Obviously, not onlyis muchcontribution made to maintain old housesbutalsorules of laws associated with cultural protectionturn out to be better. Some people even say thatnew houses are right to be set up same astraditional ones.I seem to be one of opponentswho believe thatthe action can be unsuitable inour world.
One of the main reasons is thatmost of traditional buildings, in my nation, that arecapable of fewer people is hard to meet the demands for housingasincreasing numbers ofpeople pour into the city.Compared tolast decade, today’s population has doubled and eventrebled, which puts serious pressure on housing supply.As a result, old houses must besubstituted for new ones that have more efficient utility,let alonevery traditional ones.
No doubts thatbuilding or maintaining traditional buildings are very essential to raise artsense and increase choices of people’s housing.Plus, these old housesare believed asveryimportant resources to attract international visitors.However, the proportion of traditionalhouses has to be under control,and otherwisethe housing of citizens is badly affected.
Overall, my view is thatcultural identity is so precious that more efforts and measuresshould be taken but carefully. The excellent tradition helps with deep understanding of history,and educates youths.Neverthelessa simple and reckless behavior. that new houses are built ina typical waydoes more harm than goodin the improvement of people’s being.
雅思考试大作文范文:新建筑是否应该沿袭传统风貌
雅思大作文题目:新建筑是否应该沿袭传统风貌
雅思大作文范文:
We all know that China’s history is a long andcomplex one which stretches over thousands ofyears. With such a long and varied history, it’s hardto accurately define our ‘cultural identity’. Forexample, in the Tang Dynasty, many people thoughtthat fat women were the most beautiful, but nowthings are different, and most people think that slim girls are prettier. The same is true forbuilding designs; some things that were desirable in the past are no longer popular.
I think that, as a country, we have a responsibility to preserve a piece of our past, but thatdoesn’t mean that we have to live in the past. Just because my relatives were farmers, doesn’tmean that every future generation has to live in a farmhouse, or even in a house that looks likea farmhouse.
Many modern buildings are safer than old buildings, because we have learned how to makestronger buildings that will last longer. I think that modern buildings that incorporate a subtletraditional style into their design are beautiful, but it’s also good for buildings to have a wild,modern, Chinese flavor. Each period of Chinese history is a little different, so we should leaveroom for new expression.
In the future, today’s newest designs may well become traditional. Keeping this fact inmind, I agree that some buildings should be built in traditional styles; however, we should alsoallow young Chinese architects to weave the essence of the current era into their buildingdesigns. The government is not only responsible for protecting a nation’s cultural identity; italso has a responsibility to allow for continued growth.
1、从图形的类别上看,有以下4+1 种题型:
Line chart/graph 线形图
Pie chart 饼状图
Bar chart 柱状图
Table 表格题
Mixed graphs 混合类图表,即以上四种数据类图表的任意两者相结合
亲,觉得很多吗?
——不多。
恭喜你,你具备了成功最重要的两个素质:努力,以及藐视困难的心态。有了这些,再加上本书里面的真题和精华资源,你的雅思作文一定会完成“一个屌丝的逆袭”,你肯定会是的胜利者。加油!
——好多啊。
首先,你需要努力一下了,尽快让自己具备楼上童鞋的心态。其次,我悄悄地告诉你,其实“题型”还可以少一点——2+1 种足够了。
( 一) 动态类图表作文写作
题库真题 1
The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anc make comparisons where relevant.
下图显示了1979年到间欧洲国家鱼类和一些不同种类肉类的消费量。通过选择和报告主要特征来总结信息,anc在相关情况下进行比较。
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.
In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams).
However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.
The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.
Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.
参考译文
这幅图展示了某一个欧洲国家从1979 到2004 年间所吃的牛、羊、鸡肉和鱼肉的数量变化。
1979 年,牛肉是四种食物里面消费量的,大约每人每周消耗225 克。羊肉和鸡肉的消费量差不多,大概150 克,然而鱼肉要少得多,只有50 克多点。
但是,在1979 至2004 这25 年间,牛羊肉的消费量急剧下降,分别降至100 克和55 克左右。鱼肉的消费量也有所下降,但幅度没有那么大,数量仅低于50 克。所以,尽管它一直是吃的最少的食物,其消费水平是最稳定的。
与之相反,鸡肉的消费量呈上升趋势,在1980 年超过了羊肉,在1989 年超过了牛肉。到2004 年的时候,人均每周消费量已飙升至250 克左右。
总体而言,这幅图展示了在一段期间里,鸡肉的消费量是如何快速地增长以及其他三种食物的消费量是如何下降的。
方法点拨
? 本题源自IELTS 7, TEST 2。真正学会这篇作文的信息点选择和组织方式,也就会了所有动态图表作文的写作。
? 范文的具体结构如下:
首段:简介图表内容(对题目进行改写).
第二段:描述起点信息:描写1979的四个数据,要点在于比较对比,注意观察most, similar, less这些词。
第三、四段:描述起点之后的发展变化,进行有效分组:从1979年开始,牛、羊、鱼肉的消费量都在下降,然而鸡肉一直在上升。这两部分可分为两段来写,也可合为一段,此处分开来写。
结尾段:总结说明总体特征(总体而言,. )。
亮点句型
句型1 Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams).
点评 首先,学习被动语态的使用,使自己的句型多样化。其次,括号的使用,使引用数据变得简洁清晰,不过不能过度。
句型2 The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.
点评 亲们先看其汉语翻译,想想自己将如何组织句子呢?然后猛然回首,发现“不二法门”就在“also, but, so, although(也,但是,所以,尽管)”四个衔接词的使用上,把松散的信息组织到了一块儿。这同时完美体现了高分作文的要求:对数据进行比较对比。
句型3 The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989.
点评 “On the other hand”用作插入语,放在主语“the consumption”后面。“Overtaking”为非谓语动词的用法,使句子更加整合,而不是写it overtook…。“That”指代consumption,否则该词就得重复出现三次,显得啰嗦。
雅思图表作文范文之以柱状图为例
The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
柱状图显示的是1970-1990二十年间英国人每周在快餐上花费了多少钱;曲线图展示的是这二十年间快餐消费的趋势。
The bar chart shows how much money was spent on fast foods per week in the UK over a span of 20 years from 1970 to 1990 while the graph reveals the trend of fast food consumption over the same period of time.
从柱状图看,各收入阶层在汉堡和鱼煎薯条这两种快餐上的支出相对高于在皮萨上的消费;曲线图反映出汉堡与皮萨的消费呈现上升趋势,鱼煎薯条则呈现出波动趋势。
As we can see from the chart, the weekly expenses of people of different income levels on hamburgers and fish and chips were relatively higher than that on pizza. The graph indicates that while hamburger and pizza consumption both revealed a general trend of increase, fish and chips showed a trend of fluctuation.
首先,高收入阶层和中等收入阶层每周在汉堡上的平均消费分别是每人42便士和33便士,比低收入阶层的14便士搞出了很多。在鱼煎薯条方面,高收入阶层的支出略低,是17便士,但中等及低收入阶层的支出都分别达到了25便士和18便士,相对于在皮萨方面支出的12便士和8便士高出了很多。值得一提的是高收入阶层在皮萨上的消费高于鱼煎薯条2便士,为20便士。
First, the weekly average expenses of high-income people and middle-income people were 42 pence and 33 pence respectively, a lot higher than that of low-income people which was 14 pence. As for fish and chips, high-income people spent relatively less, only 17 pence, but the expenses of middle-income and low-income groups reached 25 pence and 18 pence, much higher than their expenses on pizza which stood at 12 pence and 8 pence respectively. What is worth mentioning is the amount of money spent on pizza by high-income people which showed only 20 pence, 2 pence more than their expense on fish and chips.
第二,从1970年的每周平均85克开始,人们在汉堡上的消费缓步增长到了1975年的100克,然后,消费量加大增速,到1983年左右已经达到了200多克。接下来,我们看到的是更强势的增长,到1990年达到了图表上的最高峰550克。
Second, starting from averagely 85 grams per week in 1970, people’s consumption of hamburgers gradually grew to 100 grams in 1975 and was then followed by a faster growth, reaching more than 200 grams in around 1983. From then on, the growth gained a stronger momentum, hitting the peak across the board at 550 grams in 1990.
第三,皮萨的消费趋势与汉堡相仿,也是很明显的三个增长阶段,但是增幅没有汉堡那么大。1970年至1980年,皮萨的消费从平均每周40克慢慢增长到80克;1980年至1985年,增长加快,从80克增加到了130克;1985年至1990年,增幅加大,从130克快速增长到了280克。
Third, the consumption of pizza revealed a similar trend of growth as that of hamburgers and could also be clearly cut into three periods, though the growth rate was not that fast. It rose slowly from 40 grams per week in 1970 to 80 grams in 1980 and then grew faster from 80 grams in 1980 to 130 grams in 1985. From 1985, the growth rate was even faster and we see a big increase from 130 grams to 280 grams.
第四,鱼煎薯条的消费趋势在波动中呈现了三种状态。1970年至1975年一直是缓慢的下降,从平均每周300克降至280克;之后,从1975年至1985年,下降速度稍有加快,从280克降至200克;自此,开始逐渐回升,到1990年攀升到了240克。
Fourth, the consumption of fish and chips showed three changes in the general trend of fluctuation. From 1970 to 1975, it dropped slowly from the original 300 grams per week in 1970 to 280 grams in 1975. Later on, from 1975 to 1985, it dropped a little bit faster when it fell from 280 grams to 200 grams. From then on, it began to rise gradually and till 1990, it had climbed back to 240 grams.
总之,英国人在上述所提及的三种快餐方面的消费在图表所标识的二十年里都发生了或增或降的某些变化。
To sum up, the consumption of the three above mentioned fast foods in Britain showed certain rises and falls as illustrated in the chart and graph over the designated 20 years.
雅思写作拿高分 这六个细节很重要
雅思写作细节一:标点书写问题
按英文书写规定,标点应紧挨着它的附着意群进行标注,与另一个意群要以一个字符的空格隔开。但是在实际作文中经常发现学生不论什么标点都会当作一个单词来对待,即标点前后都空下空格,结果给人以标点满天飞的感觉,影响了文章的美感。有例为证:
First, energy and other natural resources have become more abundant, not less so , since the book ‘ The Limits to Growth ’ was published by a group of scientists .
可以看出,标点像独行侠一样出现在句子中,会给人以喧宾夺主的感觉。所以大家平时练习时就要注意正确书写标点。
雅思写作细节二:句首单词首字母大小写问题
通常情况下,同学们只要感觉是个句子就都把句首单词首字母大写了,但是在实际写作中情况如何呢?下面我们来看个例子。
Some corpora attempt to cover the language as a whole; others are extremely selective.
分号的作用是对关系非常紧密的句子进行分隔,所以后一个句子只是前一个的附属,并不是一个独立的新句子,所以首字母仍然要小写的。这个现象同样适用于冒号、破折号、括号。
雅思写作细节三:书写过于随意
每个人都有自己的书写习惯,但是雅思考试毕竟是要给外国人看的,所以大家如果能够在书写习惯上贴近老外,肯定会给人以亲切的卷面印象。比如不要书写得过于密集,以免让人看不清单词,影响理解。也不要写得过于稀疏而让人无法在eye span 范围内看到完整的意群,从而影响考官阅读。字不要写得太大,也不要太小。尽量不要连写以免造成l,r,n,m等混淆不清,造成考官阅卷障碍。
雅思写作细节四:写作格式混乱
英文写作格式主要有齐头式和缩进式。通常齐头式因为顶头书写且段与段之间空出一行,所以会给人以整洁的感觉,也比较推荐大家使用这种格式。缩进式和中文的写作格式相似,即每一段的开头句缩进,但是段落之间没有空行,所以不是很受欢迎。经常在作文中看到同学们用的是“齐头式+缩进式”,即段首句缩进+段落之间空行,给人以不伦不类的感觉,同学们一定要注意。
雅思写作细节五:总结段缺失
很多学生在写作时因为时间不充裕无法写出总结段,于是给阅卷者没完成任务的感觉。建议考生尽量要写最后的summary,无论是task1还是task2。因为同学们可以利用最后一段来点题、归纳,这样可以最大限度地避免因为语言功底不深而导致的文章结构不明晰,说服力不强等问题,即用形式来弥补内容上无法克服的困难。
另外,因为开头结尾段是我们平时练习得比较熟练的部分,所以我们很容易就搞定的,为什么放着拿分的部分不写呢?!
雅思写作细节六:分段过多或者过少
大家可以设想一下,当你拿着一篇只有一段的很长的文章时,是不是会有很晕的感觉?尤其是当我们的写作能力有限,文字表达没有吸引力时,怎么能让考官有耐心看完你的文章呢?再设想一下,当你看的文章分成很多的段落,而你的论证能力有限,费了半天劲也写不出几个句子,会不会每段都给人以流水账的感觉呢?
雅思大作文分析解决类题型写作解析
【大作文真题】
Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
肥胖在许多国家是一个严重的问题,特别是在富裕国家。讨论解决问题的方法。提供具体的理由和例子来支持你的回答。
【雅思大作文模板推荐】
With the advent of urbanisation and the rise in popularity of fast food, there have been accompanying issues with rising obesity rates – especially in developed countries like England and the USA. After providing a careful analysis of why obesity has risen so sharply in these countries, I shall suggest a number of ways in which the obesity epidemic can be ameliorated.
To begin with, it should be unsurprising that fast food is incredibly popular in wealthy countries (like England and the USA). Due to the high levels of development in these countries, consumers possess more money and can therefore consume vast amounts of fast food without seriously diminishing their income. For example, the American Dietary Association found that (compared to the average Indian household), the average American household has a six times larger budget for food per month. Consequently, it is to be expected that obesity rates are much higher in countries with larger amounts of wealth.
However, despite the severity of the obesity problem, there are a number of ways in which developed countries could battle it more effectively. Firstly, developed governments could put far more pressure on fast food outlets to provide healthy alternatives to hamburgers, french fries and soft drinks.
Secondly, public exercise initiatives could be advertised and promoted far more vigorously. Lastly, modules that inform teenagers about healthy dietary requirements could be taught at schools.
In conclusion, although obesity is a serious issue in the developed world, if the above steps are taken, the situation will surely improve in the coming years.
重难点词江信息
accompanying
释义
adj.陪伴的,附随的;
v.陪伴( accompany的现在分词); 陪同; 伴随…同时发生; 伴奏;
Perhaps the accompanying illustration will explain it.
可能所附的图表能对此作出解释。
Accompanying the letter is a parcel of books.
信外随带书籍一包.
She taught him to read and even to sing two or three little ballads, accompanying him on her old piano.
她教他读书,还教他唱两三首民谣, 弹着她的旧钢琴为他伴奏.
unsurprising
翻译:令人惊讶的
alternatives
释义
n.选择的余地( alternative的名词复数 ); 可供选择的事物; 取舍; 非传统(或他择性)生活方式的追随者(或鼓吹者);
The opportunity had gone. His mind scrabbled for alternatives.
机会已经失去。他苦苦思索别的方案。
There are four basic alternatives; they are described briefly below.
有4个基本的选项,简述如下。
It is wrong to suggest that there are easy alternatives.
如果认为有更容易的选择,那就错了.
雅思写作范文:国家给艺术家补助
Task 2 Question: Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists includes painters, musicians, poets, however, other people think that is a waste of money for providing this assistance. State your opinion.
To be of assistance or not, it indeed is debatable if artists deserve and require funding by the government. Firstly, I acknowledge that the benefits from artists and poets can enrich our everyday lives in so many different ways; otherwise our life would have been a lot drabber without them.
Any genuine artist most certainly deserves some form of aid and there can not be any doubt about that, however, whether they require government assistance is another issue altogether. Contrary to popular belief it seems to be that not all artists and literary personalities are wealthy, and most renowned personalities are deservedly rich and famous.
While the other large group of artists is neither rich nor famous, they do continue to produce the art works as for the passion and often the passion is what drives them. It would be ridiculous to think that any kind of financial incentives could power their creativity. However, not many of them are able to take up their passion on a full time basis because they cannot afford to. It is import to note that most creative artists are made, and were not born so. It is the vagaries of life & struggles that they have to face which fuels their creativity, in the process they need to mature into renowned to be an artist or a writer. When they do and when their work is recognized, there will not be any dearth of money or fame.
In my opinion, it would be criminal to take away this very drive and shun their creativity. Having said that, I do believe that they need to have some kind of incentives, it can be in the way of appreciation and opportunity to present their talent to the rest of the world. This could be done in various ways, for instance, giving tax incentives to amateur artists and writers or financial rebates in government owned auditoriums to stage their presentations.
In talking about artists in Australia, which has a concrete social security system in place to take care of all kinds of basic needs, any kind of added financial incentives are not only an added burden on the taxpayer. It would be an issue to find out worthy beneficiaries and there will be enough crooks who will misuse any well intended government assistance schemes. Every human being craves for recognition and money happens to be one of the means towards this end, however, as I mentioned in the beginning it is more important to acknowledge their work than provide financial assistance.
On the other hand, as a Chinese, my perception of the government’s assistance is more questionable. Firstly, we need to give artists a definition and how do you classify a person who is an artist. In essence, calligraphy, poetry, music and art they all can be extended to a person who writes well, paints well in his/her Blog. To extend this artist sense further, can we say a singer is an artist? Well, there are many pop song and folk music singers in China. In the same way, a dancer, a talk show’s talent, a movie star, the director, the photographer they can all be artists. And this number of artists would add up to whole population of Australia. How could the Chinese government provide any assistance without any discrimination to those artists in every classification? I personally do not believe our government has enough financial ability to accommodate this wide ganging number of artists.
As a Chinese I can see that in my country, there is still a big gap between the poor and the rich, I would rather government’s financial assistance be directed toward the poor, this does not mean that I would think to provide assistance to artists is a waste of money. My point is that while we can give a true definition of artists, government should use our taxes in a way to be more accountable for.
雅思写作8分范文:能源问题
There is nothing unusual about energy like coals and oils being consumed, principally because economic development depends on natural resources all the time. But what is happening today is extraordinary judged by the standards of the past. It is energy depletion on a massive scale and this problem is so knotty that should deserve our closer heed.
Amongst the diverse factors contributing to the energy crises around the world, government’s short-sighted policies and citizens’ extravagant use of automobiles are probably the two most significant ones. By presuming on their natural resources, quite a few countries, especially developing ones, are eager to develop their economy in order to gain an edge over their rivals. Admittedly, their intensive use of the energy facilitates, to some extent, the developments of other industries in short term. Additionally, the amount of private cars increases at such a breakneck speed that the petroleum used amounts to an intimidating proportion of the natural resources.
The consequences are undoubtedly disastrous for human beings. Although countries can boast their growth of GDP, their citizens have to endure the ever deteriorated environment with stinking gas belching from factories and vehicles, polluted water due to fuels infiltrating underground, even ultraviolet radiation in the absence of ozone layer and, therefore, their quality of life is by no means improved. Also, sustainable development can never come into true in this situation, meaning that our descendants can benefit nothing except sterile land and polluted air and water from their ancestors.
Therefore, our government must take serious steps to attack those problems. The first and foremost is that governments have to reverse their mindset and no longer deem the growth of GDP their first goal. Rather, the betterment of citizens’ quality of life should deserve more attention than the economic growth. Furthermore, the use of private cars should be discouraged by authorities, who must shoulder the responsibility of improving public transportation in order to facilitate people as well as release the burden of energy consumption.
In conclusion, to avoid the phrase “filthy rich” added to themselves, countries must pay more heed to the efficient use of their energy and the issue of environmental protection, while they develop their economy; otherwise, environmental apocalypse and energy crisis are feared to happen in the horizon.
题目:
You wish to immigrate to a country but are not sure about the requirements and applicationprocedure. Write a letter to the immigration officer of this country to ask about, say who you are and explain your qualificationsand experience.(问询信)
范文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to receive information regarding the immigration proceduresto Canada.
亲爱的先生、女士:
I am 34 years old and am currently working as senior mechanical engineer at ABC Tech Company in Shanghai. I hold a Bachelor’s and a Master’s degree from Shanghai Tongji University. I am married and my wife will be having our first child this coming autumn.
我今年34岁,目前是上海ABC技术公司的高级机械工程师,获上海同济大学学士学位和硕士学位,已婚,太太将于秋季生育我们的第一个孩子。
I have been considering immigrating to Canada for quiet some time and would like to know if my qualifications and work experience make me eligible to apply. I have enclosed my resume as well as a bank statement of my current financial status and my English proficiencylevel.
我考虑移民加拿大已经有相当一段时间了,很想了解一下以我的资历和工作经验是否具备申请资格。我随信附上了我的个人简历以及表明我本人经济状况的银行证明和我的英语水平等级证书。
I’d also like to know if my wife and I can make one application, or whether we’ll have to apply separately. In addition, if you could send me information regarding permanent residence in Canada, I’d be most grateful.
我还想知道我太太和我是否可以并作一个申请,还是我们必须分开来申请。此外,如果您能够给我寄送一些有关在加拿大永久居留的信息我将感激不尽。
I look forward to receiving the information at your earliest convenience.
Yours truly,Jack
期盼尽早收到您寄来的信息。
您真诚的
Jack
题目:
You are going to an overseasuniversity to study. Write a letter to the university asking about accommodation and airport pickup.(问询信)
范文:
Dear Ms. Morris,
I’m writing to inquire about some information regarding accommodation at your university and the airport pickup issue.
亲爱的Morris女士:
我来信的目的是想问一下有关贵校住宿安排和机场接机的事宜。
I’m a mature, female student and would prefer, as far as possible, to share some accommodationwith other mature female students, preferably in a quiet location. However, I have no objectionto living on campus as long as it is quiet enough for me to study. I’m also a non-smoker and would prefer to share with other non-smokers although this is a preference rather than a request.
我是一个成熟的女生,希望尽可能与其他成熟女生合住,最好是在安静的位置。然而,我不反对住在校园里,只要环境安静,不影响我的学业即可。我不吸烟,所以希望与其他不吸烟者合住,虽然这只是一个倾向而非要求。
I will arrive in London on August 26 from Shanghai and would be very gratefulif you could send someone to pick me up or, at the least, send me the details of how to get to the university by myself from London Heathrow Airport, as this will be my first time to the UK.
我将于 8月26日从上海抵达伦敦,如果您能安派一下接机,或者至少给我发一下如何从伦敦海斯陆机场前往学校的具体细节,我将万分感激,因为这将是我初次到英国。
I’m looking forward to receiving your reply and meeting you in person in September.
Yours sincerely,
我期盼着收到您的答复并在9月份见到您本人。
您真诚的
以上就是雅思G类作文资料:问询信范文展示及解析的全部内容,雅思G类作文在PART1经常出现书信类的作文,掌握此类的作文的写法非常有必要。若大家对于英语中的书信体格式还不是太了解的话,可以多看一些雅思G类作文的范文,进行模仿练习。
雅思大作文模板:保护水资源
Some people think they have the right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your opinion。
雅思大作文模板范文参考:
Fresh water is a necessity in human’s daily life but how to use it varies in different societies. Some people take unlimited water consumption for granted, but others think that it is governments’ obligation to control fresh water as it is limited.
It is true that most residents in developed countries and coastal nations do not need to worry about the shortage of fresh water. Sophisticated infrastructures and sufficient precipitation can guarantee sufficient water supply. What all these occupants need to do is paying the bills. They can use as much water as they want as long as they can afford it. Thus, it is undoubted that some of them hold the opinion that they can utilize the resource freely.
It may be true that many other people do not need to concern about water consumption, but it is also a fact that a large number of inhabitants in many developing countries have no access to clean water because of its scarcity. In those countries, natural environment and climate like droughts have a negative effect on water supply. What makes things worse, the poor situation makes water even more precious. If people use as much water as they want in those areas, it can almost be sure that water supply will fail to meet some people’s daily need. Therefore, it is reasonable that local officials limit the individual water use and punish the people who waste it.
In my opinion, fresh water should not be used without any restrictions. Water supply depends so heavily on natural environment that it can be regarded as limited resource in some countries. Water conservation, whether it is advocated by government or not, is what people should insist on.
雅思大作文模板:国际贸易影响环境?
Some people think international cooperation has brought benefits to world environment protection, while some people think more benefits have been brought to international business. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
雅思大作文模板范文参考:
It is noticeable that multinational cooperation has become increasingly common, and it makes contribution to global integration instead of international isolation. Some people claim that the primary merit of international cooperation is protecting the environment while others argue that the major strength is promoting worldwide business. Before present my position, the essay aims to critically discuss both views.
It is no doubt that environmental protection needs the global efforts. In order to find an effective solution to pollution, governments from all over the world have to make stricter laws and regulations on the emission of polluted substances. Furthermore, international cooperation makes it possible for scientists to launch research seminars to exchange their diverse and innovative ideas, from which they may gain the inspiration to design more clean energy like wind and solar energy and address environmental problems.
International integration plays an indispensable role in developing prosperous business, which support the other side’s opinion. On the one hand, with the help of advanced technology and professional skills offered by developed nations, developing countries become capable of harnessing adequate resources and achieving the goal of maximizing business profits as soon as possible. On the other hand, more employment opportunities are created on the products-supply sides and a better quality of life is shared by skill-receiving ends. Admittedly, without economic collaboration on such a massive scale, a huge number of countries would be likely to be embroiled in starvation except for the few blessed with fertile lands and wise governmental leadership.
Judging from the detailed analysis on both sides, I think both aspects are extremely significant during the process of propelling global progress. However, it is high time that multinational collaboration paid more attention to environmental issues to catch up with the pace of global business development.