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The Most Important Day in My Life
Have you ever been at sea in a dense fog when it seemed as if a tangible white darkness shut you in, and the great ship, tense and anxious, groped her way toward the shore? I was like that ship before my education began, only I had no way of knowing how near the harbor was.
The most important day I remember in all my life is the one on which my teacher, Anne Mansfield Sullivan, came to me. I am filled with wonder when I consider the immeasurable contrast between the two lives which it connects. It was the third of March, 1887, three months before I was seven years old.
On the afternoon of that exciting day, I guessed vaguely from my mother’s signs and from the hurrying to and fro in the house that something unusual was about to happen, so I went to the door and waited on the steps.
I felt approaching footsteps. I thought it was my mother and stretched out my hand. Someone took it, and then I was caught up and held close in the arms of the person who had come to reveal all things to me, and, more important than that, to love me.
The morning after my teacher came she led me into her room and gave me a doll. When I had played with it a little while, Miss Sullivan slowly spelled into my hand the word “d-o-l-l”. I was at once interested in this finger play and tried to imitate it. When I finally succeeded in making the letters correctly I was filled with childish pleasure and pride. Running downstairs to my mother I held up my hand and made the letters for doll. I did not know that I was spelling a word or even that words existed; I simply made my fingers go in monkey-like imitation. In the days that followed I learned to spell in this uncomprehending way many words, among them, “pin”, “hat”, “cup”, and a few verbs like “sit”, “stand” and “walk”, but my teacher had been with me several weeks before I understood that everything has a name.
One day while I was playing with my new doll, Miss Sullivan gave me my old doll, too. She then spelled “d-o-l-l” and tried to make me understand that “d-o-l-l” applied to both. Earlier in the day, we had a struggle over the two words “m-u-g” is “mug” and “w-a-t-e-r” is “water” , but I persisted in mixing up the two. I became impatient and, seizing the new doll, I dashed it on the floor, breaking it into pieces. I was not sorry after my fit of temper. In the dark, still world, I had no strong sentiment for anything.
My teacher brought me my hat, and I knew we were going out into the warm sunshine. We walked down the path to the well-house. Someone was drawing water, and my teacher placed my hand under the spout. As the cool stream gushed over one hand, she spelled into the other word water, first slowly, then rapidly. I stood still; my whole attention was fixed upon the movements of her finger. Suddenly I seemed to remember something I had forgotten — a thrill of returning thought – and the mystery of language was revealed to me. I knew then that the “w-a-t-e-r” meant that wonderful cool something that was flowing over my hand. That living word awakened my soul and set it free.
I left the well-house eager to learn. Everything had a name and each name gave birth to a new thought. As we returned to the house, every object which I touched seemed to be full of life. That was because I saw everything with a strange, new sight that had come to me. On entering the door I remembered the doll I had broken. I felt my way to the fragments and tried in vain to put them together. Then my eyes were filled with tears, for I realized what I had done, and for the first time I felt sorry.
I learned a lot of new words that day. It would have been difficult to find a happier child than me when I lay in my small bed that night and thought of the joys that day had brought to me, and for the first time I longed for a new day to come.
一、题目：
待定
二、活动时间：
20xx年4月25日
三、活动对象：
电子系大一和大二全体同学
四、比赛活动地点：
阶一教室
五、主办单位：
电子系英语交流社
（1）活动形式：英语现场写作
（2）活动目的：为了丰富同学们的校园生活，提供同学们学习英语的兴趣，增强同学们英语水平。展现当代大学生丰富多彩的大学生活
七、前期准备工作：
a）制定比赛规则
b）成立活动委员会：活动委员会成员由英语交流社团成员参加组成委员会负责此次活动的全部事情
八、具体安排：
1、前期组织与宣传阶段：
1）下发活动通知到各班。
2）各班参赛者到学习委员处报名，由学习委员将各班参赛人员名单包括姓名、班级、联系方式等统计好报至负责人处、
a）比赛结束后，由评委老师评出最后的成绩
最后公布比赛获奖同学的名单，赛事组织者发放获奖选手的奖品（待定）等待通知
获奖6个名额（一等奖1个，二等奖2个，三等奖3个）
d）赛事要求：所有选手在规定的'时间里面完成比赛内容，不得违反赛事规则。
20xx年4月份
一、组织单位
写作比赛指导小组
组长：xxx
成员：xxx等
二、参赛对象
参赛对象：本校所有年级全日制专科在校学生，均可自愿报名参加相应组别比赛。
三、竞赛方式
比赛分初赛和决赛两个阶段进行，由人文学院商务英语专业教研室负责实施，时间分别为3月25日和4月10日。决赛同时也是浙江省首届英语写作大赛资格选拔赛，特等奖获得者参加4月23日举行的首届浙江省高职高英语写作比赛。院级比赛奖项按科技文化节要求设置。
1、初赛
3月25日进行初赛。比赛方式为统一笔试，由商务英语教研室负责命题与阅卷，人文学院负责安排监考。初赛优胜选手获取决赛资格，并由商务英语教研室组织决赛培训。
2、决赛
4月10日进行“浙江交通职业技术学院首届英语写作大赛”决赛。决赛试卷由“全国高职高专英语写作大赛”组委会命题，由商务英语教研室组织评卷，并按比例设立奖项，具体参照“奖项设置”。获特等奖选手将代表学院参加“浙江省高职高专英语写作比赛”。
四、赛题命题原则和题型
1、命题原则：依据目前高职英语教育的相关文件，充分反映高职英语教育的发展趋势。赛题体现高职特色，突出写作能力，内容既贴近当代大学生的学习和生活，又反映未来工作岗位对英语写作能力的要求和个人职业发展的需求。
2、比赛时间：120分钟。
3、比赛题型：比赛题目包括两部分（如下所示）。
公共英语组
题型体裁字数分值题量命题作文应用文（便条、邀请函及回函、通知、简短私人和业务信函、简短传真和电子邮件、简短广告、简短产品与厂家介绍、简短产品使用说明等）不少于100词40%1看图画或图表作文，给出关键词、段首句、规定情景、提纲或围绕某一主题等作文不限不少于350词60%1
英语专业组
题型体裁字数分值题量命题作文应用文（根据已提供的信息，如图表、概括性说明等撰写报告、信函、内容较丰富的广告、使用说明等）不少于200词40%1根据已给关键词、段首句、规定情景、提纲或围绕某一主题等作文不限不少于350词。
五、竞赛安排策划
1、报名
报名由人文学院学生会组织，将各分院报名表汇总后于3月21日19：00前以电子表格形式（格式参见附件）报送至人文学院商务英语教研室，钱志权，e—mail：
2、比赛时间和地点
初赛：3月25日（周四）傍晚17：30—19：30，第四教学楼b701（英语专业组），第四教学楼c601（公共英语组）。
决赛：4月10日（周六）具体时间地点另行通知。
六、奖项设置
1、公共英语组和英语专业组各设四个奖励等级，特等奖2名（专业1名、非专业1名）；一等奖2名（专业1名、非专业1名）；二等奖奖3名（专业1名、非专业2名）；三等奖4名（专业2名，非专业2名）
2、分院优秀组织奖1项。
大学英语写作基础教程
以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式，每组句式的'功能相同或相似，考可根据自己的情况选择其中的个，做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。
1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this
2）The reasons for this are as follows
3）The reason for this is obvious
4）The reason for this is not far to seek
5）The reason for this is that
6）We have good reason to believe that
例如：
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life
．Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid，and they can afford what they need or like．Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life．
注：
如考生写第一个句子没有把握，
可将其改写成两个句子。
如：
Great changes have taken place in our life．
There are three reasons for this．这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
2．表示好处
1）It has the following advantages
2）It does us a lot of good
3）It benefits us quite a lot
4）It is beneficial to us
5）It is of great benefit to us
例如：
Books are like friends．
They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds
and widen our horizons．Therefore reading extensively is of great benefit to us
3．表示坏处
1）It has more disadvantages than advantages
2）It does us much harm
3）It is harmful to us
例如：
However，everything divides into two．
Television can also be harmful to us．It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.
4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient, possible）for sb．to do sth．
2）We think it necessary to do sth．
3）It plays an important role in our life．
例如：
Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business．
Soon, computers will be found in every home，too．
We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age．
5．表示措施
1)We should take some effective measures．
2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the difficulties．
3）We should do our utmost in doing sth．
4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with．
例如：
The housing problem that we are confronted with Is becoming more and more serious．Therefore，we must take some effective measures to solve it．
6 ．表示变化
1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years．
2)A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications．
3）The computer has brought about many changes in education．
例如：
Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years．The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek．Nowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to
meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins．
7．表示事实、现状
1）We cannot ignore the fact that．．．
2）No one can deny the fact that．．．
3）There is no denying the fact that．．．
4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in．
5）However，that’s not the case．
例如：
We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution．To solve these problems，
we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution．
The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment．
8．表示比较
1）Compared with A，B．．．
2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV．
3）There is a striking contrast between them．
例如：
Compared with cars ,bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable．Firstly，they do not consume natural resources of petroleum．Secondly，they do not cause the pollution problem．Last but not least，they contribute to people’s health by giving them due physical exercise．
9．表示数量
1）It has increased（decreased）from．．．to．．．
2）The population in this city has now increased （decreased）to 800，000．
3）The output of July in this factory increased by 15％compared with that of January．
例如：
With the improvement of the living standard,the proportion of people’s in some spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased．
再如：From the graph listed above,it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in ．
10．表示看法
1）People have（take，adopt，assume)different attitudes towards sth．
2）People have different opinions on this problem．
3）People take different views of（on）the question．
4）Some people believe that．．．
Others argue that．．．
例如：
People have different attitudes towards failure．Some believe that failure leads to success．
Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor．However ,others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers．
再如：
Do“lucky numbers really bring good luck？
Different people have different views on it（注：
一个段落有时很适宜以问句开始，考生应掌握这一写作方法。）
11．表示结论
1）In short，it can be said that ．．．
2）It may be briefly summed up as follows．
3）From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that ．．
例如：
From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary，however，its method should be improved．
12．套语
1）It’s well known to us that ．．．
2）As is known to us．．．
3）This is a topic that is being widely talked about．
4）From the graph
（table，chart）listed above，it can be seen that ．．．
5）As a proverb says，“Where there is a will，there is a way．
例如：
As is well known to us，it is important for the students to know the world outside campus．
The reason for this is obvious．Nowadays,the society is changing and developing rapidly，and
the campus is no longer an“ivory tower.As college students，
we must get in touch with the world outside the campus．
Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after
we graduate.
Hello, teachers!
I feel very honored to introduce myself here today. I hope you can better understand me through this introduction.
My name is _X. I am a student of class _. I served as the monitor in my class. I have developed a strong character in this primary school for four years. This character enables me to overcome all difficulties in learning and hope to become an excellent young pioneer. I am a lively and happy boy. My hobbies are music and Mathematical Olympiad, because they are very interesting. I like Mathematical Olympiad very much. It is both my hobby and my specialty.
My dream is to be a policeman, because I want to help more people in the future. I hope you can recognize me.
Thank you.
hello everyone! My name is _. I graduated from _ University.
Now I am practicing in Chongqing _ law firm. It is a great honor to be able to participate in this internship lawyer interview and assessment.
During my internship, my main job was to assist the instructor and other practicing lawyers in the law firm in dealing with civil and commercial legal issues. It mainly includes two aspects: first, I assisted the practicing lawyers in the Institute in handling litigation cases. In the past year, I participated in the handling of 120 Civil and commercial litigation cases, including sales contract disputes, financial loan contract disputes and guarantee recourse disputes. Through the handling of these cases, I learned to write some common documents and how to analyze the case, Learned about the lawyer's case handling process and trial procedures. Second, assist the instructor in dealing with the legal problems of the consulting unit. By assisting the instructor in handling the affairs of several consulting units, I learned some skills of contract review, but also found my lack of experience. I did less litigation business, which made me ignore many risk points in the process of contract review.
Please give me a chance to pass this interview. I will strive to become an excellent lawyer.
thank you!
Dear teachers and students
Good afternoon, everyone!
I am a programmer from _ Department. My name is _X, the king of three horizontal and one vertical, the celebration of universal celebration.
People often say that living with good people is like entering the room of Zhilan! Although I have great admiration for the name of the teacher, I still don't want to see _ here. Here, I appreciate the charm of language and feel the shock of lip and tooth collision!
As the saying goes: it's better to say well than to do well. It's better to say well than to do well. No matter what path you choose in the future, good eloquence will accompany you all your life and help you realize your ideal. Therefore, the power of speech should not be underestimated! Finally, I wish you to practice your eloquence, have the talent to embroider your mouth, and cut through thorns and thorns and ride the wind and waves on the road of life!
Thank you!
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As?a?college?student,?I?am?supposed?to?表决心.?
或?From?above,?we?can?predict?that?预测
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1.大学英语辩论式议论文写作模板
2.大学英语四级议论文写作
3.英语议论文的写作诀窍
4.中考议论文的写作指导
5.高中议论文写作指要
6.关于议论文的写作方法
7.高中议论文的写作方法
8.高中议论文写作要点
9.科技议论文写作思路
10.议论文写作论据：知错就改
1.我的观点（MY VIEW）
When asked about a theme, different people will offer different opinions... is no exception. Some people take it for granted that ... However, others hold that...
As for as I am concerned, that I am in favor for the second view. The reasons are as follows.
First, there is and elements of truth that ... But it doesn’t follow that... A case in point is that ...Therefore, the first view doesn’t hold water.
In conclusion...
2.优点和缺点（Advantages and disadvantages）
Nowadays, ...plays an important part in ... Like everything else, ...has both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows
Firstly, ... Besides ... Most important of all ...
But every coin has tow sides. The negative aspects are alse apparent. To begin with, ... To make matters worse of all ...
Through above analysis, I believe that the advantages aspects outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore...
3.怎么办(How to)
...
Many ways can contribute to solving this serious problem, but the following ones may be most effective. First of all ... Another way to solve the problem of ... is ... Finally...
There are not the best and only tow measures we can take. But it should be noted that if we take strong action to ...
4.选择行动(A or B)
When you ... you will be faced with the choice between A and B. Before making the right choice, you had better make a close comparison and contrast of them.
First of all, A... Also, B... Second, A... likewise, B... Despite their similarities, A and B are also different in the following aspects. First, A... However, B... Besides, A... on the contrary, B...
Therefore, it depends with ... you should choose. If you ..., you should choose A; but if you ... you should turn to B.
5.为什么(Why)
...
There are many reasons for... but in general, they come down to three major ones. For one thing... for another thing ... Perhaps the prime reason is that ... From the foregoing...
谚语引用：
As proverb goes that......
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大学英语写作句型
1.When ask about ...,the vast/overwhelming majority of most /many think /believe/answer that .... But ...
2.When it comes to ...,some think/hold ...
3.Recently,the problem of ... has caused wide public concern.
4.The issue/problem/question of ... has been brought into focus to public attention over recent years.
5.When asked whether it is advisable to ...,different people have different things to say,but in my opinion,I don’t think it is wise to do so.
6.Now an increasing number of people are beginning to realize that ...
7.“Why ... ?/Can ... ?”Of all the complaints/debates/questions I have heard,this is the one most frequently voiced.
8. With the rapid growth of ...,... have become increasingly important in our daily life.
9. With ...playing an increasingly big/vast role in ...,more and more ...
10.One of the problems facing /society today is ...
图表类作文开头句式
1.The picture puts a highlights sth.
2.The above picture features a ...
3.Seen from the chart,it can be conclude that ...
4.The cartoon /picture /drawing shows ...
5.In the cartoon shown to us,... Obviously,what the cartoon reveals is ...
6.Such a picture draws attention to the fact that ...
7.It is vividly described in the picture/cartoon that ...
8.It can be discerned from the table that ...
9.From the graph,we know the data of ... and ... It can be seen easily that ...
10.As can be seen in the graph,... saw great changes in ...between ... and ...
结尾句式
1.Therefore it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ...
2.Therefore,in order to ...,effective measures shou be taken as soon as possible to ...
3.To be sure,there may be difficulties we cannot overcome,but if we ...
4.In brief, ...but this problem is very complicated.perhaps people can hardly rely on only one way to solve the problem completely.
5.People are coming to realize the importance of ... Some have begun to try their best to ... We believe that ...
摘要：听、说、读、写四项基本技能是大学英语教学的重点，然而，在四项基本技能中，写作是当代大学生的一项薄弱环节，而导致这一问题的原因：课时有限；教学方法单一、陈旧。本文尝试通过过程教学法改变这一现状，在介绍过程教学法理论基础及特点的基础上，从输入阶段、写初稿阶段、重写阶段、定稿及最终反馈阶段四方面探讨过程教学法在大学英语写作教学中的具体实施。
关键词：大学英语写作；结果教学法；过程教学法
随着经济全球化、一体化的发展，英语作为一门国际通用语言在世界各国的贸易中起着纽带作用。由于各个行业在工作中对英语都有或多或少的需求，社会对大学生英语技能的要求随之越来越高。而写作在听、说、读、写四项基本技能中，最能反映学生的英语综合能力，但目前，我国高校英语写作课普遍采用的结果教学法已经无法满足社会的需求，英语写作教学改革迫在眉睫。
一、大学生英语写作能力薄弱的原因
目前，我国大学生英语写作能力比较薄弱，导致这种现象的主要原因有以下几方面。
（一）课时有限
目前，我国很多高校没有开设专门的英语写作课程，写作只是大学英语课程的一部分。由于课时有限，教师很难在课堂上单独划出一部分时间进行专门的写作讲解，只能在讲解课文的过程中简单涉及一些写作技能与技巧。
（二）教学方法单一、陈旧
结果教学法是我国高校普遍采用的英语写作教学法，它注重写作的成品，忽视写作的过程。对于一个写作题目，教师首先会选取一篇范文进行分析，并将写作技巧、写作理论机械地灌输给学生，学生不需要形成自己的评论，只需仿照模板再写出一篇相似的作文即可。这种教学方法比较急功近利，短期内确实可以看到效果，但从长远来看，过程教学法扼杀了学生的创新思维能力，无法真正激发学生的写作热情，更达不到提高学生写作能力的目的。
二、过程教学法的理论基础及其特点
（一）过程教学法的理论基础
20世纪70年代以来，基于交际理论的过程教学法受到了研究者们的重视，这种教学法认为，写作本身就是一种交际活动，而不是个体的单独行为。RichardC.Gebhardt在《写作过程与意图》中说：“当你写作时，你就是在试图与他人交流。如果你不向他人表明你的观点，接受他人的批评，你就不会知道你的文章对读者的影响。”过程写作法注重学生的写作过程，在整个教学过程中，学生是主体，教师只起到组织和引导的作用。这一方法使学生从单一、枯燥的写作课堂中解脱出来，使他们由被动、机械地接受知识转变成积极、主动地学习知识。由于学生全程参与写作，通过思考、讨论、修稿最终完成一篇作文，因此，整个过程都会激发学生的积极性，从而促进学生写作能力的提升。
（二）过程教学法的特点
首先，过程教学法在课堂上转换了教师和学生的角色。以往的课堂，教师是课堂的主体，学生只是被动地接受教师传授的知识。过程教学法倡导以学生为中心，使学生成为课堂的主体，教师只起到引导、组织和监控的作用。过程教学法注重学生的写作过程，即从主题思想的理解到文章结构的布局再到内容的安排等，学生都要参与其中，并进行充分讨论，直至作文成稿。整个写作过程激发了学生的创造性思维能力，开阔了学生的视野，能有效提高学生的写作能力。其次，过程教学使单一、乏味的结果反馈变成即时、多样的过程反馈。过程教学法的反馈与传统结果教学法反馈不同，它不是最终的、一次性的反馈，而是将反馈穿插于整个写作过程。在整个写作过程中，学生既是作者，又是读者，接受别人意见的同时又给别人提出意见，这种即时有效的反馈能使学生意识到自己的问题，其比结果教学法最终的一次性反馈更有利于提高学生的写作质量。
三、过程教学法的具体实施
过程教学法将写作过程划分为三个阶段：写前阶段（prewriting,）、写作阶段（drafting）和重写阶段（rewriting）。写前阶段是学生在落笔之前的准备阶段，包括理解题目、搜集材料、构思作文的整体框架、写提纲，等等；写作阶段是主体阶段，是学生通过讨论、分析完成初稿的阶段；重写阶段是通篇阅读初稿，根据别人的反馈意见及自己对初稿的评审，合理有序地调整作文。但是，写作是一个十分复杂的过程，简单的.三个阶段包含着很多步骤，在实际写作教学中，可按照如下几个步骤实施。
（一）输入阶段
这一阶段是指学生在落笔之前的准备阶段，包括理解题目、确定主题、搜集材料、打腹稿等。教师可以在这一阶段简单向学生介绍一些相关的写作知识、写作技巧，然后将学生分成小组进行讨论，每组4~5人即可，以让学生通过讨论充分理解题目，同时互相借鉴所搜集到的资料，并最终理清思路，列出作文大纲。教师在这一过程中，主要起到组织、引导和监控的作用，即教师要引导每个小组进行积极有效的讨论，并将学生讨论的提纲与其他小组交换，进行小组互评，以开阔学生的写作思路。
（二）写初稿阶段
经过小组讨论之后，学生的思路变得清晰明朗起来，自然就过渡到落笔成文阶段。这一阶段，学生根据讨论的结果，将搜集到的资料进行重新加工，进而完成写作。在写作过程中，学生不要过于注重斟酌字句，要确定好文章的结构，把想要表达的思想清楚完整地表达出来。课堂即时反馈阶段。学生在完成初稿后，教师可以组织学生就初稿再进行一次讨论，即对初稿的结构、内容、思想进行讨论，并提出修改意见。教师作为课堂的组织者、监控者和引导者，要密切关注每个小组的讨论，了解学生作文中出现的问题，同时给予其有针对性的启发和指导。
（三）重写阶段
学生根据同学和教师的反馈意见，并结合自身对初稿的反思，对初稿进行修改。这一过程，学生除了要把精力放在结构、思想、内容上，还要注意自己的语言、语法、句式及单词拼写。学生修改完成后，教师可以让学生两人一组互换作文进行初步批改，并将修改重点放在单词的拼写和语法上。
（四）定稿及最终反馈阶段
学生完成初稿的修改之后，将定稿的作文交给教师进行最终批阅。由于在整个写作过程中，同学之间、同学与教师之间已经进行过几次沟通，所以最终的批改不会出现“满篇红”的现象。需要注意的是，教师应注意批语的重要性，充分发挥批语对学生的督促和鼓励的作用。
四、结语
语言是用来交流的，而写作本身就是一个交际的过程，学生如果没有足够的交际，就不能自如地运用语言进行写作。过程教学法从根本上改变了传统单一、僵化的写作模式，促使学生积极主动地参与到整个写作过程中，并通过课堂讨论、课堂反馈、修改等阶段，激发学生的写作兴趣，开阔学生的写作思路，进而达到提高学生写作能力的目的。
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大学英语写作漫谈
制约大学生英语写作能力提高的因素是多方面的`,本文分析了非英语专业学生写作中两个带有普遍性的错误倾向:汉化现象和句式单一,并试图找出解决问题的办法.
作 者：王军 作者单位：黄冈师范学院,外国语学院,湖北,黄冈,438000 刊 名：高等函授学报（哲学社会科学版） 英文刊名：JOURNAL OF HIGHER CORRESPONDENCE EDUCATION(PHILOSOPHY AND SOCIAL SCIENCES EDITION) 年，卷(期)： 20(12) 分类号：H319 关键词：英语写作能力 汉化现象 句式单一假定你叫李华,你的朋友John Smith在南京大学教英语,下面是他给你的来信(略),要求你用英语给他写一封回信,婉言谢绝他的`邀请,回信时必须涉及以下内容:
1.感谢盛情邀请
2.说明自己不能去及原因
3.介绍自己的生活及学习情况和其他有关内容
4.字数(100-140)
Dear John,
I have received your letter yesterday. I am fine here, thank you. How about your live in Nanjing? Is everything all right? I hope so.
I felt glad that you are inviting me to attend your exhibition in Nanjing University. You said that is your first exhibition in the university,and you hope that will be an excellent performance during the day. Meanwhile, you had imported a lot of material from your country. However, I am sorry to ask for your forgiveness on this case. It is because I have to sit for my law examinations during the time. So,I really unable to attend your exhibition. But anyway, I promise you that I will go to meet you in this coming holiday.
Recently, I was so busy for my assignments and presentations. As what I told you last time, I have a lot of law assignments need to submit in this end of month. Beside this, I need to present some of the papers too. Then, two of my group members been sick on last week. Thus, a large number of preparation works need to be carry out by myself. Oh John, I felt that I really hard to breath now. I hope all these works can be settle smoothly soon.
Well, I need to continue my laws assignment and stop my writting here. Wish you all the best. See you soon.
Yours sincere,
Lee Hua
本文通过分析影响大学生英文写作水平的因素,认为教师和学生的双重作用是提高大学生写作水平的关键,其中教师采用的教学法以及教师对学生作文的反馈起着不容忽视的作用.
作 者：刘治 周俊涛 作者单位：刘治(长治医学院外语部,山西长治,046000)周俊涛(河北北方学院外国语学院,河北张家口,0750010)
刊 名：希望月报（上半月） 英文刊名：HOPE MONTHLY 年，卷(期)：20xx “”(6) 分类号：H3 关键词：英语写作 教学法 教师反馈1大学英语写作教学中的现实问题
（1）体制问题
基于客观普遍性而论，当前大学英语写作教学中存在的体制问题主要以下述几点较为突出：首先是英语课程的内容设置与社会环境脱节。英语是国际通用语言，对其教学应以实践性为重，但部分高校对于英语教学却仍停留在理论性“灌输”和语法“填塞”中，未能充分地对口学生专业和日后发展，也未设置有针对性的课程内容，从而无法显现出对学生学习能力和学习素养为培养核心的教学目标。其次是英语课程的教学目标与目前的教学现状相冲突。英语学习以提高学生的英语听、说、读、写能力为基本要求，并通过四年专业训练培养学生的英语书面表达能力和口头表达能力，使学生能在日常学习工作中和日后交际活动中熟练使用英语。但大多高校仅围绕书本知识的传授而忽视实际应用，重语法而轻“听”“说”，学生的学习积极性和能动性普遍不高。再者是英语教师的师资力量限制了英语教学水平的提高。随着高校扩招，学生数量迅速增加，英语教师的需求量日益增加，部分师资力量薄弱的高校无力聘请外教或高水平的英语教师，使先进教学模式无法惠及学生，导致学生依旧“被动式”学习，教师依然“粗放式”教授，教学效果往往只能通过相关等级考试等方式鉴定和检验，最终大大打压了学生对英语学习的兴趣。
（2）学生问题
学生方面的问题主要体现在英语基础薄弱和写作时基础错误较多，下文将例举其中典型以作论述：首先是写作主题不明确，逻辑不清晰。由于缺乏词汇积累和写作素材，很多学生在审题结束后往往觉得无内容可写，只能将材料东拼西凑，导致内容空洞无物，无法体现主题思想。与此同时，受汉语思维定势的影响，学生容易将文章写成“中式英语”作文，其所表述的用语与英文书写逻辑大相径庭。其次是英语写作格式错误、语篇结构混乱。英语作文写作特点在于内容简洁明了、条理清楚、结构分明、用语规范，且必须严格遵守格式和文体要求。但大学生在写作中常易犯各种格式错误，例如在写英语书信时经常将信头（写信人的住址、日期）和信内地址（收件人的住址）的顺序颠倒。最后是拼写错误和语法错误。这是英语写作中最常见的错误，主要表现为句法结构错误、时态和语态错误、主谓不一致、动词搭配错误等。
2改善大学英语写作教学的实践路径
（1）课堂强调学生主体身份。即教师教学应遵循素质教育新理念，将引导学生自主、合作、探究式学习作为突出教学中学生主体地位的有效途径；构建与时代发展相适应的写作教学模式，艺术性地发挥教学主导作用，潜心设计具有启发性、迁移性和求异性的写作任务，强化学生在写作教学中的主体地位，引导学生在英语写作中的体验、实践、参与、交流和合作。例如，为积极响应教育部号召的“创建和谐校园活动”，教师可组织学生参与下述写作任务：首先，“结合教育部的文件精神，谈谈你对‘和谐校园’的见解、看法以及构建‘和谐校园’的建议”；然后，引导学生自主研讨写作背景和写作要求，明确文章结构的组成部分，即背景简要介绍、对“和谐校园”的见解看法以及建议；再开始Brain-Storming，汇集有关和谐校园的词汇、短语或句子，进而顺利完成写作任务，充分发挥学生作为教学主体的主导性。
（2）按照具体生情设计写作任务。正如俗语“十个手指各有长短”，学生学习能力亦各有优劣。因此，要提高写作教学的有效性，就必须反复研究教材，深入了解学生，娴熟地掌控教学的重难点，结合学生的年龄、心理特征和写作规律，启发学生参与对写作教学“任务”的设计，让学生自主决定写什么以及如何写，以师生互动协商的方式选择与学生的生活、学习和经历紧密相关、贴近学生兴趣和爱好的话题，确定写作任务。努力使英语写作任务既能提供真实、明确的语言输出信息，又能贴近学生现实生活，同时符合学生认知水平和写作能力，让学生在对熟悉的.写作素材分析、归纳和落笔成文中完成写作任务，在顺其自然的写作中认识到英语写作并非想象中的困难，进而引导学生将英语写作任务看成是自己内心情感的表达与抒发。
（3）优化教学形式以及学生素质。除前文所述外，笔者认为，要从根本上提高大学生英语写作水平，还需要结合教师和学生个体的共同努力，即一方面加强师资力量建设，保障英语教学质量；另一方面，聘请有资历的英语教师或专业外教来丰富授课形式，缓解本校英语教师的教学压力；也可以引入先进的教学方法，采取多元教学法提高学生对英语的学习兴趣。与此同时，大学生也应提高自身素养，夯实英语基础知识，通过积极阅读英文报刊、杂志及趣味性书籍等来积累词汇、语法，培养语感。需要注意的是，除课本中的范文外，学生通常很难接触到有针对性且具有实用性的文章，对此，高校或班级可以结合具体生情和学情订购相关英语杂志、报刊和趣味性阅读书籍来成立英语角，为学生的英语学习提供有利外界条件。
（4）结合实际需求传授写作技巧。巧妙设计英语写作任务是大学英语写作教学的关键性环节，只有根据教学实际需求、学生切身需要，才能有效设计出符合教学发展、贴合学生能力的写作任务。具体步骤为：首先，教师要选择和把握好写作任务推出的时机，在利用情境教学、直观教学等方式激发起学生写作兴趣的基础上，展示写作素材，布置写作任务，突出学生写作的主动性。其次，要根据学生的知识基础、写作能力和写作任务完成情况，掌控写作任务的推出节奏，引导学生以寻找解决任务的方式接触语法、句子、词汇和框架结构、段落安排等方面的语言材料，使任务的推出与学生的思维过程和写作进程同步，减轻学生的认知加工负担。再者，促进写作与阅读的有机结合。写作与阅读是输出与输入的关系，教师可在英语写作任务中融入一定量的阅读任务，引导学生适量阅读原版英语书籍和资料，用阅读任务推动学生的读写结合、多读勤写，使之在扩大词汇量、熟悉词法和句法的同时，增加对英语文化背景的理解，明确书面语与口语的差异。
3结语
大学英语写作教学的理论基础是优化写作教学目标与功能的重要举措。广大教师要深刻领会其中内涵，不断反思、调整和完善英语写作任务的设计、完成与评价过程，灵活地处理英语写作训练问题，使大学生的英语写作技能和写作水平得到令人满意的显著提高。
大学英语写作常用句型
1、用于句首提出问题或现象的句型
Nowadays，it is common to hear/see……
2、用于阐述不同的.观点的常用句型
Although more and more people come to believe...，there are still others who insist that...
3、用于陈述 个人观点/想法 的常用句型
In my opinion of view，both sides are partly right in that...。My opinion of view is that...
4、条理性的关联词
to start with，next，in addition，finally
5、表示原因的句型
The reasons for this are as follows，...
6、用于结尾的句型
Therefore，it is not difficult to draw/come to the conclusion that...
7、用于书信的常用句型
I am uriting to you with reference to
I would be grateful if you could/would...
I look forward to hearing from you
8、表达个人观点的句型
1. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.
2. As far as I am concerned, I am really/completely in favor of the test/policy.
3. In conclusion/a word, I believe that….
4. There is some truth in both arguments, but I think the disadvantages of… outweigh its advantages.
5. In my opinion/view, we should….
6. As for me, I….
7. As I see it, ….
8. From my point of view, ….
9. Personally, I think….
10. My view is that….
11. I think/consider….
12. I take/hold a negative/positive view of….
Over the past Spring Festival, I got involved in a family dispute. Right before I got home, four satellite channels of CCTV were added to the 14 channels we had already had. In prime time at night, they all had interesting shows. Therefore, the five of us-my parents, my sisters and I-had to argue over what to watch. Finally, we aGREed that we should watch the “most interesting” programme... If we
could aGREe what that was.
However, all of us there remember that for a long time after we had TV, there were only one or two channels available. The increase in options reveals an important change in our life: the abundance of choice.
Fifteen years ago we all dressed in one style and in one colour. Today, we select from a wide variety of designs and shades.
Fifteen years ago, we read few newspapers. Today, we read English newspapers like the China Daily and the 21st Century, as well as various Chinese newspapers.
Fifteen years ago, English majors took only courses in language and literature. Today, we also study Western culture, journalism, business communications, international relations, and computer science.
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